Date: 07/30/10 07:38 am Title: Chapter 7. Diggin' me down
oh-uh tom is so busted if ella doesn't come back... and this chappy is to short:D want more :D *giggles*
Author's Response: Thank you 8D more soon :*
Date: 07/30/10 02:42 am Title: Chapter 2. Life won't wait
I feel so sorry for poor cold wet Tom D:
Date: 07/30/10 01:52 am Title: Chapter 7. Diggin' me down
:( I hope Ella comes back soon i dont want Tom to get into any trouble with Bill and I like Ella she sounds cute lol ^-^
Author's Response: Thank you :D:D more soon ;*
Date: 07/29/10 10:39 pm Title: Chapter 7. Diggin' me down
i hope ella comes home soon. it wasn't Tom's fault what happened and Bill will be so upset i know he'll kick Tom away, and Tom doesn't deservie it. stupid mean homless people, and stupid dog for running away. I realy really want ella to come back, please :(
Author's Response: Thank you x) more soon :*
Date: 07/29/10 07:44 pm Title: Chapter 7. Diggin' me down
Ella...come home~~~~
Poor Tom, now what? Let's hope Tom find's Ella or she come's back on her own...it would be bad if someone saw her and kept her, especially those creep's that beat up Tom-sound's like something the would do for spite!
Author's Response: Thank you :D more soon xoxo
Date: 07/29/10 07:41 pm Title: Chapter 6. Unleashed dog
But, but---it's not Tom's fault. Hope for Ella's return next chapter or Bill will be po'd!! Now to catch up...
Date: 07/29/10 06:06 pm Title: Chapter 7. Diggin' me down
Oh I hope Ella comes back! :D
Author's Response: :D thank you for reading :*
Date: 07/29/10 05:52 pm Title: Chapter 7. Diggin' me down
I never would have thought Bill would call wanting to talk to Ella XD That's kinda different >.<
Tom has a long day ahead of him tomorrow *sigh*
Author's Response: Yes he has, Oh boy. Thank you for reading xoxo
Date: 07/29/10 05:24 pm Title: Chapter 7. Diggin' me down
o_O I hope he finds the dog D:
Author's Response: Yeah me too O_O thank you for reading :*
Date: 07/29/10 05:00 pm Title: Chapter 7. Diggin' me down
more? : D
Author's Response: yes ;D
Date: 07/29/10 02:38 am Title: Chapter 6. Unleashed dog
O_O omigosh the poor doggie...lol and poor tom
Date: 07/26/10 06:13 pm Title: Chapter 6. Unleashed dog
poor tom! so much bad luck...
Date: 07/26/10 02:24 am Title: Chapter 6. Unleashed dog
Poor poor poor Ella! the little thing, and poor Tom, i can't stand people who kick or hurt animals, they are so nasty!
omg i hope Tom could find Ella soon! and take good care of her!
btw the pics you've been posting of the dog and the house looks like were a lot helpful! now i can picture the whole house based on that style!
well u know i love it XD so just waiting for your update! see ya!
Date: 07/25/10 04:14 pm Title: Chapter 6. Unleashed dog
oh shit....
Author's Response: x)
Date: 07/25/10 11:10 am Title: Chapter 6. Unleashed dog
this was a bit predictable but i'm curious to see how tom is going to get out of this
Date: 07/25/10 11:03 am Title: Chapter 5. The oppressor
he caughts tom stealing and still let's him in is house unsupervised???
sorry but that's not realistic and unlogic.
and i also have to say that i don't like the way you portrait social work; serving soup is generally done by volunteers and therefor is more an act of solidarity, not a paid job.
and i don't really liked the dog you choose; but if bill likes it xD
still i liked the whole story you made up and will stay tunned to see where it's going :) sorry if my comment is about too manys"i don't like" lol it's not to put you down just my sincere opinion
Author's Response: Well, I don't think it's important that a fic is realistic, It doesn't have to be. I'm not trying to be an whizz with my fic as to what you said about Bill's work. I don't know much about social work but I've read about it on the internet. Still, I don't want it to be fully realistic because I think that's boring, I just write because it's fun. I had this story in my head for a while and once I wrote it down I wasn't too happy with the results. It's not really as I want it to be but I still write because I think it's fun and to kill time ;p I practically stress through the chapters because I want a kinda steady update so that people won't be bored but I don't really care, I don't want it perfect anyway. As for the dog, you don't have to like it. I do though, even if I picked it out randomly and I don't know shit about the breed. Anyway, thanks for reviewing. :) xo
Date: 07/25/10 12:22 am Title: Chapter 6. Unleashed dog
holy shit, o far I love this story. Lots. It's lovely.
In a weird way.
More please :3
Author's Response: Thank you :) more soon xoxo
Date: 07/24/10 05:16 pm Title: Chapter 6. Unleashed dog
omGGGGGGGG
Author's Response: xD
Date: 07/24/10 01:39 pm Title: Chapter 6. Unleashed dog
Poor Tomi D': More? C:
Author's Response: Yes, more soon :D xoxo
Date: 07/24/10 06:47 am Title: Chapter 6. Unleashed dog
Nooooo, that's not fair.
He's got 3 days to find the dog right?
Well good luck!!!
And ugh, I love that story!!
Author's Response: Yeah, 3 days ^^ uh-oh. X3 thank you, more soon xoxo