Date: 08/14/10 07:06 pm Title: Begin to burn like the frozen
this is so sad i love it tho
Author's Response: Thank you. :) Sadness usually should bring out beauty. Thanks for your review.
Date: 08/14/10 10:49 am Title: To be Left
Thats good, thats REALLY good, can't wait to read what happens next.
Author's Response: Thank you! ;D glad you'll keep reading on. :)
Date: 08/14/10 05:11 am Title: To be Left
D'awww! Little girl to the rescue!!
As always, your description is impeccable. Tom in this fic should be stabbed with a sponge knife D{
Bill has been taped and locked up that cage FOREVUR.
When do I come in?! XDD
--Killer Jiller
Author's Response: Lawl, I think you come in the next chapter xD Or so... I don't remember, I wrote this a few months ago and I can never remember my own writing. XDD rn<3
Date: 08/14/10 04:58 am Title: To be Left
What's wrong honey????
Author's Response: hm? :/
Date: 08/10/10 11:52 pm Title: Begin to burn like the frozen
Ooh I like it so far, really really disliking everyone else in the story. Can't wait to read whats next.
Author's Response: Holy Heaven. I'm getting reviews. o_O When did this happen? xDDDD I will update tomorrow! Thank you so much!!!!!!!!1
Date: 08/10/10 07:06 pm Title: Begin to burn like the frozen
One thing that confuses me.
If they think Bill is a demon, why doesn't Bill use that to his advantage and scare the shit out of them so they'll leave him alone?
Author's Response: BEcause Bill is NOT a demon, and he can't do shit. He's weak.. and the kids think they're stronger. How is Bill supposed to scare them? o.0 *shrug* I already have the story written.. anways, your reviews means a lot to me. Thank you for actually reading it well enough for having a questioning comment. :D
Date: 08/10/10 09:54 am Title: Begin to burn like the frozen
Naww poor Bill :(
Author's Response: yes but you'll see what will happen next :DD thank you so much for your review.
Date: 08/10/10 05:41 am Title: Begin to burn like the frozen
Hey. This should have more reviews. That's sucky. Anyway like all my other reviews, wuv it wuv it wuv it like always
Author's Response: yes it should *____* Very sucky & fucky xD Thanks btw.
Date: 08/10/10 02:56 am Title: Begin to burn like the frozen
:O You're amazing at descriptions!! I can see this playing in front of my eyes and I actually cringed at the last sentence. When is the owl going to appear?! XD I'm so excited for this!! Update soon? < 3
--Killer Jiller
Author's Response: The owl appears in like ch.. 7-10. I have no idea. :P rnGLAD YOU LIKE IT MY KILLER JILLER. XD Thanks for your comment :3 Descriptions.. yah, I spent much on this one with the words. :p :) I will update in two days. xD
Date: 07/20/10 11:55 pm Title: Bye?
O.O; This story is creepy. xD I usually read slash, and I decided to look through the general fics for some adorkable twin fics. ._. Doesn't seem like there's going to be any 'cuteness' between Bill and Tom in this fic. xD I really like so far. It's really interesting, and I can't wait for the next chapter. :3 Please update soon!
Author's Response: Creepy is good no? I usually read slash too. (: I have adorkable twin general fluff.. in my profile :p XD Cuteness can be a bore at times. I will update tomorrow, b/c I'm very tired today... :p THANKS SO MUCH FOR THE REVIEW<333333
Date: 07/19/10 06:37 am Title: Prologue
Lol.. I dunno really.. Possibly :D
wtf. Torture = Sex.. Messed up mind my dear friend
Author's Response: Yay! XD Then that's good then ;) rnIt's okay.. messing up minds is fun :3 XDDDDd
Date: 07/19/10 03:27 am Title: Prologue
Omg poor poor Billa D; He's going to die... Well actually if I was in his situation, I'd be glad to die... just not in he hands of my tormentors. I'd gladly commit suicide. *nods*
Anyway as a reply to your response, I truly agree. Most of he highly noted fics are cliché and predictable. I very much enjoy finding new and unique fics out there and I frown at how little attention they've been getting and how little credit was given just because the author is not very popular.
May I suggest one thing though? Your story is really great but I think you should provide a better summary so the readers will have a better idea of what is in it. I think what you have does not capture your idea very much and that is why people probably don't read it.
Thank you again for the mention and sooooo much for the banner!!! Update!
Author's Response: He won't die. xD It'd be like.. ASSISTED SUCIDE! :D XD rn
They are. They usually are Bill+Tom, and while I highly enjoy it sometimes you wanna move on.. I'll read torg, or billshido. Anything different. Usually the "featured" fics are really retarded.. :\ I'm having a hard time replying to this.. I keep erasing and shit. XD Dammit.. I agree wth you 100%. if you don't have 20+ stories or don't chat in Schrei box [hello my computer doesn't let even LOG ON to it! :( ] you're uncool and no one reads your stories unless you're some mod, or chatter, or been here since '07 or just whatever.
rnOh yes I have a terrible way with summaries. XD I can't get them right... I'll try however... Thanks so much for your review! The banner was the least I could do. Thanks so so so so much for this. :) Love you! :D
Date: 07/19/10 02:34 am Title: Prologue
From the last one.
Just cruel images...*shales fist* Really cruel.
Author's Response: is that good? ;)rnTorturing Bill is like sex. :Prn
Date: 07/19/10 01:50 am Title: Bye?
:P... I hate you for giving me images of this.. dam you.
Author's Response: You pictured it? XDDDD haha what'd you think? ;)rn
Date: 07/16/10 12:52 pm Title: Preparation
XDD and thank YOU for mentioning me in your notes :) I feel special. I seriously don't understand how some of the good stories on this site doesn't get the attention they deserve. Great chapter, will be waiting for more ;)
--Jilly
Author's Response: Your stories are great too btw. ;D I'm glad you feel special because you really made me smile with the review! :) There are TONs of fictions on this site that don't get reviews, views, or anything.. :l Most of the 'worshipped' fics aren't the best... I mean the ones that moderators write are lovely, but the ones by ordinary long-time members are usually crack and and don't have a strong concept. Not saying every popular fic sucks, many are glorious, but majority really... no? More will be up faster b/c this fic is already complete.rnAgain thank you sooooo much! :Drn
Date: 07/16/10 04:29 am Title: Preparation
HEY I AM TOO!!!
*goes off in a corner*
Author's Response: OMFG YOU GET LIKE AN AWARD MY PRETTIFUL AUSTRALIAN BLONDE FRIEND XD /shotrnreview= win.rnlurve yew. :33333 <3333
Date: 07/12/10 04:26 am Title: Prologue
Interesting. I'd like to read more!
Author's Response: THANK YOU SO MUCH! :D First reviewer :) More will be up because the entire story is complete.