Date: 08/26/10 02:09 am Title: Chapter 2
Morocco? Hm so she's African... I was thinking more Syria, Lebanon, or Iraq. Well, she's still Middle Eastern I suppose. [sort of]
Kalila [omfg I'm starting to fall in love with this name now :)] is such a sweet and lovely girl. I love you guys are portraying her character, she's some girl. You seem to mention Islam a lot... Eh, but I think Tom gets it. I'm hitting on an Arabian Muslim woman. How sexy is that.. xD Just sayin'.
So she moved to America, still has that accent habibiti~
When Tom tried to sexy talk to her and she got pissed I was like oh HALE no Tomi! Dun do shit like that. xD When she said "Are you busy?" Eeep!
Kalila, don't do that. Keep your daddy's word okay sweetie? :) Tom can grow up and be a gentlemen then act all German on you later. :p
Arabian homeeeeee xD My house is just decorated in a bunch of statues, pictures, ect. of Jesus Christ, and Mary... Oh but Arabian paintings and Assyrian things. :)
I'd love to see her house. I picture it all maroon and designy.. Ee :3
This a hella of a story.
It's not whorish or pulled out of a 12 year olds romantic ilurvemybf ass kind of shit. This looks more professional mainly because of the religion and actual man/woman acts, not teens.
I love it.
I hope as I read on that won't be crushed. :p
Author's Response: awolfer here ^_^rnim glad that you have decided to read this fic as well ^_^rnand ass always, your rewiews make me laugh XDrnYes this fic is very saphistocated (not sure if i spelt that right) but somethings will happen later. lol
Date: 08/26/10 01:52 am Title: Chapter 1
Hunny, i never read het but I always saw this fic and the girl in the banner looked so middle eastern I was gonna die of happy tears. So I clicked it, and I'll review as I read.
ARABIC. GIRL.
OMG. *hearts*
:3333
I'm Middle Eastern [though born/raised/living in America] , so I loved that. xD I'm sick of the ugly bitchy American OFCs. The girl in the banner looks Muslim [I'm a Christian but beautiful Muslim girls wearing hijabs with their eyes shown looks lovely imo. :p xD] and she was stunning. Tom/OFC fics are the only het I'm reading and actually enjoying!
Now to your fic :3
Firstly, Kalila... How would you say that? Kah-lil-ah? It didn't sound Arabic to me when I read past it... Leila is an Arabic name though. But if it is said "Kha-lee-lah" it sounds pretty arabic to me. Either way, I think it's a pretty name. xD
And not really, only Muslims who are really into religion or live in the Middle East believe women should not work. I know a Muslim women who does not dress modest and has a full time job... She looks like Americanized but she's Iraqi. I'm just saying, it's not like against the religion, just saying it's the best way.
I love the fic so far btw. I'm going to review every chapter.
Does Kalila have a Middle Eastern accent and speak secksy Arabic? x3
I wonder what made you guys want to make an Arab, do tell. ^_^
The banner always caught my eye, and I knew she was Middle Eastern from her eyes, wish i clicked earlier. Eh whatever, you're gonna get feedback for every chapter anyhow. :pp
:)
Date: 08/25/10 08:00 am Title: Chapter 1
Ohh no, we do not suck!! lol. Something bad has to happen for the twists to start. It's getting more and more interesting, and I'm sure as hell you are all gonna enjoy reading the next chapters. Thank you all for reviewing! I'm so glad you like the story and you keep on checking it back on and on. Love u all!!!
Date: 08/24/10 11:04 pm Title: Chapter 9
Both of you suck... I just want you to know that.
Because now I KNOW something bad is gonna happen, and now I'm all grr about it.
But other than that good chapter
Date: 08/24/10 09:53 pm Title: Chapter 9
I totally agree with dudette it sucks that she can't see his lies I feel so bad he has taken total advantage of her ugh she see through his lies soon.. but anyway I love this story so amazing keep up the great writing! :)
Date: 08/24/10 07:33 pm Title: Chapter 9
Tom is going to break this poor girl's heart. :( He's taken her virginity...and he's going to end up smashing her heart it two. It really sucks.
I like this story :)
Date: 08/23/10 09:59 pm Title: Chapter 8
Great story. But now it just got a lot more interesting. I wonder what will happened when her parents come a visit. Keep up the great writing and update soon. Thumbs up!! :)
Date: 08/23/10 08:34 pm Title: Chapter 8
Aaaaaw......
NOTHING BAD BETTER HAPPEN OR I AM HUNTING BOTH OF YOU DOWN!!!!!
Lol, I loved this chapter!
Date: 08/18/10 02:22 pm Title: Chapter 7
I am so speechless all I can say is I WANT MORE this is an amazing story update soon ;D
Date: 08/18/10 06:15 am Title: Chapter 1
I don't know why, but I can't respond to your posts like Awolfer, so I just have to submit a new review anytime I want to say smth. I've been checking the story over and over for your reviews, and I'm so happy that you all like the story.
We'll have a whole part centered on her punishment, but later on the story, as the things get a little more complicated and intense.
Author's Response: awolfer: What......she's gonna get punished... you didnt tell me that part XD
Date: 08/18/10 03:36 am Title: Chapter 7
I LOVE IT!
MORE!! Hmmm, makes me wonder what does happen when women in Morroco do that outside of marriage...
Date: 08/17/10 10:41 pm Title: Chapter 7
Wow, that was so hot...I liked their little struggle for control.
Date: 08/17/10 01:52 am Title: Chapter 6 Part 2
Dear lord *fans self* I see what you mean Awolfer.... definentely hot.
I can't wait for more
Author's Response: awolfer: YES just keep on fanning yourself *Evil laugh* more yet to come....and youll love it! ^_^
Date: 08/15/10 09:09 am Title: Chapter 6 Part 2
wow, knowing Tom..I wonder what he'll do next..love it..
Date: 08/14/10 04:25 pm Title: Chapter 6 Part 2
That so DAMN HAWT!!! WHOA BABY I can't wait for more of this story I have a feeling this is about to get really interesting keep up the great writing and update soon ;D
Date: 08/04/10 10:36 pm Title: Chapter 6 Part 1
wow this great , i
Date: 08/02/10 05:58 pm Title: Chapter 6 Part 1
I am so speechless
Its soo good this story I so can't not wait for more
You guys are awesome writes keep it up and update soon (:
Date: 07/28/10 06:52 am Title: Chapter 1
I'm really glad that you all like the story behind this story (the culture of Arabian people). Everything will be getting hotter and hotter. Stay tuned (lol) for more and thanks for reviewing! XD
Date: 07/26/10 11:29 pm Title: Chapter 5
This story is different from all the others I've read too
its a really great and interesting story I'm totally hooked! and I think its kinda funny and cute how determined Tom is to get this girl..keep up the great writing dudettes :D -5thumbs up!!-
Date: 07/26/10 10:29 pm Title: Chapter 5
I liked this story. It's diferent from the others I have read here.
All the new culture and things, It's interesting.
And Tom is really determinated, hm?