Date: 09/13/10 03:25 am Title: Chapter 13
A.M.A.Z.I.N.G!!!!
It's sooo sad!!!
Update soon please :-)
Author's Response: Thanks twin ^_^rnim glad you like our story. and there will be an update as soon as we can ^_^
Date: 09/09/10 10:47 pm Title: Chapter 7
you are like.. the awesomest writer ever!!!
Date: 09/09/10 10:03 pm Title: Chapter 13
*out of breath* Oh my gosh ohmygosh ohmygosh!!!!! I am so shocked and speechless and in total awe! I absolutely love the way Kalila handled the situation with her parents. Especially with her father she had some major balls-so to speak- I am so proud of her,man I really do hope Tom comes to his senses and realize what he had. Ooh I can't wait for more!!!! Greatfucking story and chapter!!! Keep up the great writing guys *10thumbs way up* update soo. =D
Date: 09/09/10 04:02 am Title: Chapter 13
Holy hell this is getting good! Please update soon. I hope she doesn't self destruct so to speak.
Date: 09/08/10 09:18 pm Title: Chapter 13
I admire her courage it was a tough decision, I hope tom realizes how much she was willing to give up for him and that he will do the same.
Date: 09/08/10 09:00 pm Title: Chapter 13
Aaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwww
POOR KALILA!!! YOU TWO BITE! T_T her father is evilllllll
Date: 09/08/10 06:05 pm Title: Chapter 12
YOU EVIL BOTCHES!!!! and yea I spelt that wrong on purpose...
anyway
TOM YOU'RE SUPPOSED TO STAY WITH HER DAMN IT!!!!!! YOU SUCK!
Date: 09/08/10 09:53 am Title: Chapter 12
Its really sweet how much Tom truely loves and cares for her but man what a Jack nut, I agree with bill and man up and the that opportunity and spill his guts about he loves her. This chapter was really good and very hot. I so totally can't wait for more keep up the great writing! And update soon :D
Date: 09/07/10 10:16 pm Title: Chapter 12
ARGH ! Tom, your idiot !
He's so idiot and stubborn. Don't him notice that this is the only chance he have ?
Date: 09/05/10 04:18 pm Title: Chapter 11
^_^ I like it.
I WANNA KNOW WHAT HER PARENTS ARE GONNNA DO!!
-_- updateeeeee, thanks! ^_^
Date: 09/03/10 11:33 pm Title: Chapter 11
You updated yay! I absolutely 100 percent love this story its so amazing. I love this chapter but its so sad and wrong that Tom is lying to this poor girl I would hate to see how it will play out when her parents come to town. Can't wait for more, keep up the great writing you guys and update soon! :D
Date: 08/27/10 12:22 am Title: Chapter 10
What are her parents going to do?
WHAT I ASK????!
T_T tell me....
Great chapter guys, really... helluva good job.
Date: 08/26/10 09:36 pm Title: Chapter 10
I full agree it was extremely and excruciatingly HOT! Lol I really hope he tells her how much he loves her I know he really does...but man her parents will effing flip when they find out. Love the story keep it up! =D I give it 10 thumbs up
Update soon.
Date: 08/26/10 08:09 pm Title: Chapter 10
Hot!
uh oh sh*t is going to hit the fan when her parents show up.
Update!
Date: 08/26/10 06:54 am Title: Chapter 1
LOL!! your reviews made me so freaking happy cherryrose and you gave us the best comment ever "This is the best het fic I've ever read", and when it comes from a person who doesn't usually read het..it makes it ten times better. I'm glad you're in love with the character I'm writing :D:D:D dieing to read your future reviews.
Date: 08/26/10 03:26 am Title: Chapter 6 Part 2
". It didn't quite hurt, but she was filled now, and the sensation was pretty strange and uncomfortable."
Er, I'm a virgin myself but I highly doubt it wouldn't 'quite hurt'. I mean, FIRST TIME hellero?! I think it'd be hotter if she screamed. HAI HAI.
Anyways....
calming secks...
yay.
I don't know what to say about this chapter...
I'm speechless.
So beautiful I'm still mad at Kalila foor not getting married and losing her virginity like this. God will not be happy. :(
Eh...
I'm no longer hyper, and thanks for replying to my PM. Istillthinkwomendon'tcum. xD
Author's Response: awolfer: If you're wet enough, it won't hurt. Seriously. lolrnAnd yes women do cum XD
Date: 08/26/10 03:10 am Title: Chapter 6 Part 1
" It's nothing wrong if you stay here..it's nothing wrong if you tried to kiss me..this is how it is supposed to be, no?"
*eye-roll*
PFT.
PFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFT.
Shut. Up. XD
". "I am scared…you know," And she bit her lips.
Tom positioned himself so he was now lying on top of her."
O______O *mouth drop*
OMG. My heart died. WTF. I would seriously just call the police over a guy like that. If Tom was a girl by all means DO IT BETCH. xD
Kalila I'm scared for you too. :(
btw I'm reviewing as I readddddd~
Oh and I'm glad my reviews amuse me. XD haha.
"Then let it be wrong, you can’t always be good.”
OMFG JUST DIE TOM REALLY. Your words are like dripping stupidity.
This pre-het sex so far is really hawt. X3 I'm likin' ettttttttt.. eeeeeee. :3333 Kalila stop being a whore XD Eh, I still love you. JUST CONFESS AFTER KAY AND BLAME IT ON THE MORALESS AMERICAN!!!!!?
"...revealing her bare breasts."
Kalila, you're fucked. I'm sorry. -______-
STOP STOP.
This sexy het sex is making my vagina feel all weird. TOO MUCH I THINK I CAN'T BREATHE. sgkdjgsgs Kalila you sexyy fuckerrrrrrrrrrrr. XD
This is the best het sex I've read, *squees*
Though, Kalila YOU"RE GONNA LOSE YOUR VIRGINITY OH NU!
Though, in truth I'd rather have Tom fuck me. Rather than some random homeless, looking old, hairy Muslim man. HAI HAI.
Women can cum....?
Wut.
Seriously I've never read het secks like this before. WOMEN CAN CUM!?!??
@____________@
Err...
Either I'm stupid, or... ???!?
Anyways.
That was hot. :p
She's so innocent. How adorable.
Bahaha it was just finger action. so sexy though. No dick? XD
Oh now she's gonna be guilty. :(
Poor girl.
*noms her*
x3
I need to be slapped.
My reviews look like I'm a crazy. D:
Author's Response: Your vagina feels weird cause it's making you horny XDrnAnd yes women can and do cum LOLrnAnd no you don't need to be slapped! we need your awsome reviews ^_^rnAND thank you very much ^_^......i think most of the sex was me though.....Most of it anyways. ROTFLMFAO
Date: 08/26/10 02:53 am Title: Chapter 5
I reviewed after finishing the entire chapter this time. :p xD
Well, Bill I love you. I hope you know that.
“How could you do that to her, defiling her like that?” sitting close enough, Bill punched Tom on the arm, hard."
*nods* Good job Bill. Seriously. *gives you cookie*
x3
"...bobbing her head along to the beat of some music."
Is it Arabic music?! THIS FIC IS GETTING ME IN ARABIC MUSIC MOOD.
This song is sexy. One of my favorite Arabian songs. :p http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lKg-cMrvzMM. The song gives me the impression the singer is pretty horny. HAI HAI.
[I look totally insane in my reviews. WHY IS THAT?!]
Kalila is too nice to Tom... seriously. :
He's gonna sleep over.
Oh no.
At least in this chapter he feels guilty, I didn't yell at him this time lol. x3
*presses Next*
Author's Response: awolfer: i dont care if you look insane in your reviews.....i love them and they entertain me ^_^....keep em comin XD
Date: 08/26/10 02:42 am Title: Chapter 4
I'm reviewing as I read along~
-.-
*face palm*
DUDE. TOM. SHUT. THE. FUCK. UP.
You make America look like a big pile of uncivilized shit and why are you even AMERICAN!? Get your ass back to Germany! XD
Innocence is sex, just go fuck your brother and stop messing with Kalila's mind. You're really offending. And Tom's beginning to offend me. -_________-
KALILA DONT LET HIM GET TO YOU.
Bleeding.. thingy.
Tom, I am going to take your dick, snap it in half and replace it with tits. TRY FUCKING NOW. *grabs Kalila and saves her*
*is afraid of boyz like TheEyesOfSeduction!Tom*
" I’m just telling you truth and reality, of America and the rest of the world. Whatever you decide to do is your choice."
Shut up shut shut up shut up shut upppppppppppppppppppppppp.
"Just living my life in a normal, without sins way."
Oh Kalila, you make my heart sway. *kisses her*
"No, stop. It's harm.." She spoke half in English half in Arab, and pushed him away. The only thing he could understand from her next sentence was 'Allah' and nothing more."
Hehe...
"La, eb ellek, twqk. Stuffer'lah," Rah rah. That's what I picture her saying... My Arabic spelling looks blah, but basically it says -> "No, shame on you, leave. Forgive me God." :)
" I do not need a man to feel complete,"
YOU GO GIRL.
FUCK MEN. [not like that....]
Tom kissed her.. he kissed her.. pffft.
Aw don't cry..
Tom I hate you.
Go fuck yourself if you want secks so much.
*runs with Kalila and goes to Iraq with her*
HAI HAI.
Author's Response: awolfer: Your reviews AMUSE ME!!!! i love them ^_^rnand i'm sorry he offends you so much *goes to hide* XDrnAnd i'm sure that when NyxIsis see's these she'll respond to all your reviews too XD
Date: 08/26/10 02:25 am Title: Chapter 3
*is reviewing as I read along*
OMG TOM YOU NAUGHTY BOY STOP ET.
This is why I am scared of boys at times [unless they're gay or metrosexual] b/c this kind of Tom is freaking me out. @_@ Kind of why I don't read het, I enjoy my sweet little adorable and fake perverted Tomi. But I'll try this fic... for Kalila's sake. [what a sexy name *dies*]
"He just wanted to take her to the bedroom now and rip her clothes off. He almost couldn’t take it anymore."
*gulps*
"He had a plan, a plan to get her to break all her rules."
Alright, when I read that my heart died and my eyes exploded. WTF. WTF WTF WTF WTF. Tom dear, do you not have any shame? Stupid man. : [oh Lord don't make me say that about Tom xD] He's making himself look totally moralless and only for his dick. Stupid fucker. :p
Seriously, Tom's an asshole. I really want to slap him. If a man like that came into my home and I was a Muslim [actually not muslim, just any religion.] and said shit like that I'd kick his fucking balls and throw him out of my house. Kalila thinks she has self respect but in reality, you fucking don't. Though, i admire how she is being kind toward Tom regardless his idiocy.
Oh and Tom? The veil makes her sexier.
Seriously.
The pretty mysterious veil is really sexy. [only if on a pretty girl and worn correctly and in nice silky cloth and not black... and worn CORRECTLY. again.]Tom. Die.
Virginity. Oh Kalila, *mellts* I think I'm developing a little crush on your OFC here. :) She's so cuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuute. They should get married. Totes. If Tom wants secks.
But I think it's a bit OCC, I don't think mr. Tom Kaulitz would be so pushy to insert his dick into some Arabic [or any!] pussy. Really.
Though I will still read on, this really interests me I just can't stop.
:)
Author's Response: awolfer: I love that it intrests you so well..... but as i was writing this.....well it was me doing all of toms parts XD....at sometime i was extremly sexually deprived, and wanted to make this how tom was.....i know tom is such a bad person right now.....but thats why its called fiction XD