Date: 07/17/10 12:03 pm Title: Chapter 2
I know someone like Emily too. She's dubbed Queen Bitch in my book. I'm the assassin >:)
Hehe..update soon!
Date: 07/17/10 03:56 am Title: Chapter 2
Ugh Emily is annoying. >.>
I love how you're writing Tom in this though, he's so shy and sweet. x333
And that Emily left Tom was annoying. >.> But Bill took him home! :DDD
I have a bad feeling about Emily knowing about the crush though. :x I hope she doesn't do something stupid.
Oh and Bill seeming like he wanted to say something in the car... I think he might like Tom too! :D
Update soon please! :]
Date: 07/16/10 11:47 pm Title: Chapter 2
Loved it! Can't wait for more!
Date: 07/16/10 07:04 pm Title: Chapter 2
that's horrible that she would forget him like that...but bill giving him a ride was good...and emily is very self centered...i hope she gets hers...
Date: 07/16/10 06:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
wow...self absorbed much? but it's neat that bill noticed tom...
Date: 07/16/10 03:17 pm Title: Chapter 2
Why I have a feeling that the Valedictorian and the Salutatiorian won't go to th dance together...
I really like the idea! :) Even though I don't like Bill with tha hair ;)
xx
Date: 07/16/10 02:39 pm Title: Chapter 2
I totes have Five Colours In Her Hair playing in my head right now. Manip is gorge by the way! I'd actually squeak or something of the like... (flutter clap) if Bill ever did let the dye grow out and go back to his natural colour and add in five different colours to it. He'd be pretty like that I think. More soon ja? *sings along to mcfly song while dancing about in room*
Date: 07/16/10 02:23 pm Title: Chapter 2
DSFAKLDF, can I smack Emily, please? She's so... ugh. Bitchy. -_-
Anyhow, I really like this! It captured my attention with chapter 1, but I don't think I left a review *guilt* I'm sorry! I really like the premise, and I love, love, love your banner.
This is a promising story you have going on; I'm really interested in seeing where it goes. =)
Date: 07/16/10 02:06 pm Title: Chapter 2
I want to kick her in the face =_=
I LOVE TOMI!
Date: 07/16/10 01:43 pm Title: Chapter 2
I think everybody has their own Emily =/ Unfortunately.
Poor Tom. His sister's a bitch, and his mother doesn't seem that great either. Well, at least he has Bill :D Kind of.
Date: 07/16/10 01:38 pm Title: Chapter 2
OMG knowing somebody like her xD must be hard ..0_0 Still love the story btw xD
Date: 07/16/10 01:27 pm Title: Chapter 2
Even with the picture, I cannot imagine Bill with so many colors on him. Although I bet the coach has pleaded to him: "If you're going to dye your hair in colors, couldn't you at least wear the school's colors? I'm just sayin'!"
I like how this is going. Emily seems like such a bitch, and I just can't wait for Bill to put her in her place. Keep up the great work!
Date: 07/16/10 01:23 pm Title: Chapter 2
gag i feel for u if u kno some1 like Emily *shivers*...tho if its like ur sister or something sorry i said that lol tho it is true Emily is idk? crazy in a sence of being somewhat sane...maake sence? lol good chapter i really did like it :)
Date: 07/16/10 12:43 pm Title: Chapter 2
Awww I loved the hand holding, that was so sweet. I really dislike Emily, she's just so self centered and shallow. I loved Tom's internal squeal of being in Bill's car. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 07/16/10 12:38 pm Title: Chapter 2
I hear ya Anony, i know someone like Emily too. I have a feeling Bill is going to ask tom to the dance and not emily
Date: 07/16/10 12:37 pm Title: Chapter 2
We all know someone like Emily. Sadly enough. She kind of reminds me of my sister.
I'm liking what I've read so far. Looking forward to your update.
Date: 07/13/10 10:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh emily makes me cringe at her desperate attitude XD I WANT BILLS HAIR! Toms so cute! >.
Date: 07/11/10 08:08 pm Title: Chapter 1
Dude, I love this! Just update it soon, pwease :D
Date: 07/11/10 07:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
Loved it!!
Update soon!!! :D