Date: 08/13/10 09:15 am Title: Chapter 6
-blushes- This is so cute, too cute... The shower scene does seem very familiar, but I just can't remember... Could you give me a hint?
Date: 08/13/10 09:15 am Title: Chapter 6
Awww so cuuute ^^ I'm always so delighted when I see an update from this story, it makes me squeel all the time xD I want a romance like that as well!!!! :p Good job!!
*cough*althoughI'mreallywaitingforthemtokiss*cough* xD
Date: 08/13/10 09:05 am Title: Chapter 6
I'm in love with this story. *_*
Date: 08/13/10 07:49 am Title: Chapter 6
nice...at least neither one of them feels intimidated by the fact that emily's upset...good for them...can't wait for the next chapter...
Date: 08/13/10 07:43 am Title: Chapter 5
i can see why emily would be upset but in reality she has no right to be...bill never gave her any inkling to the fact that he liked her back...she's delusional as far as i'm concerned...
Date: 08/13/10 07:28 am Title: Chapter 4
i'm glad he said yes...emily's just going to have to get over herself...you can't make someone like you...
Date: 08/13/10 05:55 am Title: Chapter 6
Aww, cute. And Tom is such a nice brother to be worried about Emily, but he should just forget about her...especially since Emily is probably going to be causing problems for them in the future. Can't wait for more! :D
Date: 08/13/10 05:52 am Title: Chapter 6
I definitely love your story! this is amazing, thank you!
Date: 08/10/10 11:04 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh my god, I retract my disbelief and replace it with pity for you! :s
Date: 08/10/10 12:23 am Title: Chapter 2
Emily sounds really spoiled
Date: 08/09/10 05:19 pm Title: Chapter 5
god emily is a tater-torn bitch
Date: 08/08/10 01:41 pm Title: Chapter 5
Damn. Well....better that cat was let out the bag sooner than later. Emily is kinda crazy. Not normal teen crazy. But a little more like Glenn Close in Fatal Attraction crazy...
Date: 08/08/10 12:52 pm Title: Chapter 5
Kinda evil that Bill just left Tom to his angry sister instead of taking the fight up right away. But yeah then no drama xD cute chapter looking forward to Emilys evil plan ^^
Date: 08/08/10 01:29 am Title: Chapter 5
ooooooo bill kissed tom nd emily sawwwwwww oooooohaha i hope bill nd tom spoil her plans to get revenge on tom :)
Date: 08/08/10 12:22 am Title: Chapter 5
I feel so sorry for Tom...his sister Emily is such a bitch...
Date: 08/07/10 06:21 pm Title: Chapter 5
plz write faster
Author's Response: this story gets updated on fridays. thanks for reading and reviewing. <3
Date: 08/07/10 06:22 am Title: Chapter 5
>: 3
Tom rocks.
And bill does too.
Emily does not.
Only like, a small crit...i...que...?! (can't spell) is that...
Okay, I'm just gonna say it.
Emily is kind of a steriotype, and though that's hilarious most of the time, it's also a little unbelievable :s
BUT!
I really like this story.
So.
Yay :3
Author's Response: I'm sorry that you find her unbelievable. Sadly, I'm basing her off someone I know personally. Her reactions are nothing more or less than what this person's is. And I should know first hand. This girl that I'm basing Emily off of is my younger sister.
Date: 08/07/10 05:19 am Title: Chapter 5
Hahah awww the water fight was so cute. x333
Silly Bill, he ruined Tom's plans. XDD
But what's Emily going to do? D:
Update soon please! :]
Date: 08/06/10 11:30 pm Title: Chapter 5
1: I absoultly HATE Emily she...she...UGH! ruins everything 2: awesome chapter 3: awwww >_< Bill issed Tom on the cheek :3