Reviews For Broken Spirit
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Reviewer: Aurora WolfeTH Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/18/11 06:09 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Found and Lost Again

very good, please update soon! xx

Reviewer: darknight100 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/30/10 09:29 pm Title: Chapter 1 - No one's gonna save you, bitch!

Very good I really hope you write more.. Kinda like finish it... K lol I hope to read more soon bye bye

Reviewer: ladyX Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/23/10 12:39 am Title: Chapter 2 - Found and Lost Again

ahhhrrg!! *is frustrated* so close! SO CLOSE! to finding out how he ended up with Tom...damn. this is pretty good so far. I can't wait for more....gotta love me some pimp!Tom and abused!Bill...dunno why but i do.

Reviewer: kaysta Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/21/10 01:37 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Found and Lost Again

poor bill ):
cant wait till the next chapter!

Reviewer: cherryrose Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/20/10 05:46 am Title: Chapter 1 - No one's gonna save you, bitch!

Hmm. very interesting, with Jost. I liked that. My guess is Tom is one of his children? I think? I love the idea of Fatherly!Jost and Son!Bill. Can we have more flashbacks of it? :) It's so sweet, and we barely have any father/son [in an innocent way] pairings on THF. :( So David acting as his father was sooooo sweeeettahhh. :3

Very nice fic, do continue! ^_^


Author's Response: I know! I hate Jost as a pervert! He can be so much more than that! I'll see what else I can do with that character pairing, even after Jost's death.

Reviewer: cherryrose Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/20/10 05:45 am Title: Chapter 1 - No one's gonna save you, bitch!

Lalalal I feel like reviewing again b/c this needs more reviews. If you don't mind :)

Author's Response: You make me very happy Cherryrose! Thanks for supporting this humble little ficcie!!

Reviewer: cherryrose Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/20/10 05:38 am Title: Chapter 1 - No one's gonna save you, bitch!

Interesting and tragic start, which is good. xD I like it. Will read on

Author's Response: Thanks for your interest in my little ficcie! I'll try and get updates in as soon as possible!

Reviewer: frida_kaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/20/10 02:17 am Title: Chapter 2 - Found and Lost Again

this is a really awesome story
great chapters btw :]
i really can't wait to read more :D

Reviewer: Dark Writer Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/20/10 12:17 am Title: Chapter 2 - Found and Lost Again

I like it, its really good...dislike David's children though, can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/20/10 12:12 am Title: Chapter 2 - Found and Lost Again

Just finished reading the parent story and these two chapter's and I gotta say-Bills life is hell on earth! That boy need's a saviour and some luck, and Tom need's a good ole' fashion ass kickin'!
Looking forward to more

Reviewer: sadangel10 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/22/10 06:24 pm Title: Chapter 1 - No one's gonna save you, bitch!

i read the previous story and i really liked it so I'm really happy you decided to make a sequel, i just hope you update soon again=D
Whoa!! Tom is such a bad ass pimp!lol
Poor Bill, it wasn't his fault that stuoid guy wanted to rape him!

Author's Response: Yes..I'm happy to give this to you guys. This is a co-write so there may be a little lull between chapters as we both deal with very busy lives and travelling, but we'll try and not make it so long a wait between chapters for you guys.

Reviewer: MissAnna Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/09/10 11:32 am Title: Chapter 1 - No one's gonna save you, bitch!

I think this is the first fic I'm reading where Tom isn't nice. I look forward to the rest of it.

Author's Response: Going to make it interseting and full of drama. Stay tuned!

Reviewer: Levanna Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/09/10 07:39 am Title: Chapter 1 - No one's gonna save you, bitch!

WoW,,, Poor Bill :[ Went from one hell to another.... Tom has got some major anger issues!!! I like the way you guys are heading with the story. :D

Author's Response: Lots of drama coming our way! Stay tuned!

Reviewer: omgthatshot05 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/09/10 04:56 am Title: Chapter 1 - No one's gonna save you, bitch!

omg! I'm so happy that y'all made a sequel!! I saw this and was like OMG!! i hope y'all can up date soon

Author's Response: We are attempting to update quickly. Coordinating schedules is the challenge. Stay tuned. We're working on it! Thanks for reading!

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