Date: 11/24/10 01:46 am Title: Show Me Love
i simply loved ur storie my dear! One of the best if not the best authors on TH fiction.Amazing
Author's Response: Oh my gosh, thank you so much! <3 But I'm faaaaar from the best :)
Date: 11/12/10 09:18 am Title: Show Me Love
That was so beautiful. I really like the twins in this fic. I love you writing style, you are very talented! Very intense and passionate, I enjoyed this fic a lot!
Author's Response: Thank you sweetie :) This was actually an experiment to see if I can write decent smut lol xD
Date: 10/30/10 12:24 pm Title: Show Me Love
I looove this!! awww the ending is soo sweet!!!^w^ great story!
Author's Response: Thank you sweetie :)
Date: 07/25/10 06:24 pm Title: Show Me Love
I won't kill you, but I think you almost killed me with this story, in a good way that is.
I can't believe this is your first time writing smut, it's really good!
Great work, girl!
Author's Response: Why thank you! ;D
Date: 07/11/10 04:01 pm Title: Show Me Love
this was good what are you talking about?
Author's Response: lol thanks :P
Date: 07/10/10 02:24 pm Title: Show Me Love
Nope, don't stick to fluff. I liked it! I'm off to check out if you've written anything else, because I believe this is the first story of yours that I've read. Good job! And Bravo! for venturing into new territory in your writing!
Author's Response: Awwww thank you so much <333
Date: 07/09/10 03:14 am Title: Show Me Love
i think it was great! sometimes, you don't need to have a plot when you write smut, cause its entertaining enough alone. i would love to read more smut from you in the future ;)
Author's Response: it's just pure porn then lol *hides face* but thank you :D
Date: 07/09/10 03:01 am Title: Show Me Love
Don't worry. I won't kill you. That was beautiful. And if you look. It might not just be a story without a plot. Maybe you could write another one. 'Cause this one explains how they think when they're just Bill and Tom. Maybe you could write one where it's them thinking of how to hide this fact and act like Tom and Bill from Tokio Hotel. You know?
Author's Response: Lol I shall think about it :P, thank you though <33
Date: 07/08/10 11:35 pm Title: Show Me Love
...i liked it
Author's Response: :P
Date: 07/08/10 10:31 pm Title: Show Me Love
Once I saw the summary and title I thought of that t.A.T.u song. xD I adore that song. < 3
Twin sex is fun, very normal for a writer of this fandom. xD I enjoyed the cuddles in the beginning the most. :3 It was lovely, and the sex was nice too. When Bill says 'show me' that would so sexy coming from him holy fuck. *______*The last paragraph was GORGEOUS. Really, very beautiful. :)
Don't stick to just one genre, it's great to try other things. You did wonderfully with the smut! Really(: It's healthy for a writer to write other things. :D You should try something else next time as well, to extend your writing abilities. ;)
Again, short sweet fic! =3
Author's Response: Awww thanks for the review :] I guess now I'll definitely try some new things... & I love t.A.T.u :P, thanks again :D
Date: 07/08/10 10:23 pm Title: Show Me Love
NOOOOO! Smut is your calling, give into the smutty fluffy goodness.
Author's Response: Lmfao NEVER!! I'll think about it lmao :P and thank you <33
Date: 07/08/10 10:19 pm Title: Show Me Love
This was great! Fantastic, really! Going in my favorites, at least.
Author's Response: Thank you!! <333
Date: 07/08/10 10:15 pm Title: Show Me Love
U wrote this to make me read it XD and still stay awake at 5:12 in the morning XD thank u!! Although it's great !!!!
Author's Response: Whoaaa 5 in the morning?! :O Lolol thanks :D