Date: 07/27/10 02:08 am Title: Chapter 8 "The Appointment"
yessssssssssssssssssssssssssssss :)
Author's Response: :) Thanks for the review. *Maria
Date: 07/27/10 01:19 am Title: Chapter 8 "The Appointment"
Wow, I truly have no idea why Bill is acting this way. I can guess that he finally remembers how he actually felt about Tom, and he's disappointed and sad that he can't/shouldn't feel romantic feelings anymore?
Author's Response: Everything that Bill has ever felt about anything and anyone has come back to him. Whatever his feelings were/are for Tom right now, he'll have to deal with, too. Thanks for the review. *Maria
Date: 07/27/10 01:17 am Title: Chapter 8 "The Appointment"
I'm really curious what Bill meant by everything. Everything that's ever happened to him? Everything that's happened since the accident? Everything that guy did to him? Or did he remember the reason he lost his memory? Since no one ever saw Bill's "roommate"...did he really exist? Or did Bill imagine him?
So many questions!! Can't wait for more! :D
Author's Response: Many questions and all of them very good suggestions. I'll try and narrow down a few of them, but Bill is a fickle little stubborn thing. We'll see what exactly has been going on in his locked up mind shortly. Thanks for the review. *Maria
Date: 07/27/10 12:35 am Title: Chapter 8 "The Appointment"
Uh oh. I'm pretty concerned about this "everything" business.
Author's Response: *S* The majority of you are :) And there must be a lot of impressions for Bill to adjust to. We'll see how it turns out. Thanks for the review. *Maria
Date: 07/27/10 12:18 am Title: Chapter 8 "The Appointment"
geez...cant wait to see if Bill wanted to disappear or if it was sabotage on the part of that psycho...more soon, PLEASE
Author's Response: Two very good suggestions :) I'll update very soon. Thanks for the review. *Maria
Date: 07/26/10 11:56 pm Title: Chapter 8 "The Appointment"
es un capi con adrenalina o algo asì y lo he leìdo igual de desesperada me encantò.... por fin lo recordò.... ahora espero muy anciosa el sgte para saber q tanto ha recordado? còmo ocurriò el accidente y còmo saliò del auto? es lo q quiero saber!.... me encanta esta historia... saluditos!
Author's Response: Hopefully, now that Bill remembers 'everything' we'll get a few answers. I'm happy you love the story, Ninel. Thanks for the review *Maria
Date: 07/26/10 11:19 pm Title: Chapter 8 "The Appointment"
oh my.... i didn't see that coming o.o I can't wait for more though!!!!! PLease update soon!!!!!!!!! XD
Author's Response: I will :). Thanks for the review :) *Maria
Date: 07/26/10 11:00 pm Title: Chapter 8 "The Appointment"
he remembers!!! oh my please don´t leave me hanging on for so long update soon please!!! gosh this is like one of the best stories i´ve ever read
Author's Response: I'm thrilled you feel that about this story. I've been writing at every opportunity I had this week :) I hope you'll like the next ch. *Maria
Date: 07/24/10 03:56 am Title: Chapter 7 "Important Clues"
sorry! I got confused for a moment. I am tracking another story with a hypnotist and it has lots of errors and I have been encouraging her to get a beta. Your story is always well edited, i got them mixed up for a moment. anyway, great chapter!!
Author's Response: No worries, Violet. However, I'm glad you think my story is well edited, since I didn't have a beta for this one :) *hugs* Maria
Date: 07/24/10 03:54 am Title: Chapter 7 "Important Clues"
I am very much looking forward to the hypnotist session. I didn't notice any errors in this chapter either. yay! thanks for the update, keep up the great work!
Author's Response: ;)
Date: 07/23/10 08:22 pm Title: Chapter 7 "Important Clues"
oh snap. i want more x3
TOM U STUPID FUCK! GET HIM!!! xD
Author's Response: Not so easy. Not even I know where the SOB is right now o.O... However, someone with such a gross personality should be easy to spot in the crowd 'out there'. We'll get him in the end... :) I'll update very soon. Thanks for the review *Maria
Date: 07/23/10 04:29 pm Title: Chapter 7 "Important Clues"
wait a sec!
Min veninde fortæller mig at du er dansker? xD omg. det er jo fantastisk. som du kan se i dine tidligere reviews har jeg læst den her fic fra begyndelsen og elsker den :D men ville bare lige sige det : DD
Author's Response: *bremser hårdt op* :D Hvem er dog din veninde, som ved jeg er dansk? ;) Ja, jeg er pæredansk. Det er utrolig rart at genkende de folk, som giver faste reviews. Det er vældig sjovt at finde andre danskere i denne fandom. Vi er jo ikke så mange lol! Det gør mig super glad, at du kan lide at læse min fic. hilsen Maria
Date: 07/23/10 02:26 am Title: Chapter 7 "Important Clues"
hmmmm, my theory hasnt been disproven yet. he he. great chappie. minxy bill, trying to lure tom
Author's Response: Poor kid just wants some affection :D I can imagine the frustration when the one he wants doesn't desire him. Thanks for the review *Maria
Date: 07/22/10 11:41 pm Title: Chapter 7 "Important Clues"
im looking forward to tom giving in
Author's Response: *so do I!!* But we'll see what happens next. Thanks for the thumbs up *G* *Maria
Date: 07/22/10 10:54 pm Title: Chapter 7 "Important Clues"
great chapter!! :DD
Author's Response: Thank you! *Maria
Date: 07/22/10 10:52 pm Title: Chapter 7 "Important Clues"
Hi!
wow a can't believe how you've improved with this chapter, the writing is smooth and the emotions you get are so well developed. don't get me wrong, it was always well scripted but this one is overwelming! for a moment i swear i was starting reading one of my favourites police-suspense books that i, in fact, adore.
Bill is getting weird, i bet that even him can't cope with his ideas, and it seems that he's trying to evade everything with his so called "headaches".
I love how understanding Tom is when Bill gets all hormonal, it's so lovely, of course i love the twincy relation, and Bill getting on Tom but i also know that it's too soon for the older one, i'm not right?
ohhh i can't believe how in love i'm with this fic, i get all cherish when i see you've updated. thank you! and also thank you 4 your responses (i know my feedback sometimes don't make any sense, and also my english gets so messy sorry 4 that =P)
Well 'till your next time!
Author's Response: Your feedback is absolutely wonderful and heartfelt. I understand everything you're trying to convey. It makes me really happy that you're so into the story because, obviously, so am I :) It's becoming more police suspense than I'd anticipated *g* but I suppose that's what happens with a story like this. I wonder how it ends... *winks* I'll update very soon. Thanks so much for this review! *hugs* Maria
Date: 07/22/10 10:12 pm Title: Chapter 7 "Important Clues"
Que insistente es Bill... lo hace sufrir al pobre de Tom.pero cuando vayan a la hipnotista va a ser muy divertido tambièn pienso... es muy raro todo eso de la explosiòn y el pervertido justo allì y no tengo la menor idea de como has pensado toso eso o còmo se desenvolverà.. estoy ansiosa de saber claro aunque. =)
en espera del sgte. cap. Este me gustò mucho :D
Author's Response: Well, we'll see how fun the trip to the hypnotist is going to be.. This is a very angsty and emotionally orientated story and basically in Tom's POV I'll be updating very soon, so I hope you'll be able to anxious a little longer still :) Thanks for the review! *Maria
Date: 07/22/10 09:03 pm Title: Chapter 7 "Important Clues"
This Bill scares me a little bit.
Author's Response: He's a liiiittle aggressive in being forthcoming, but Tom isn't responding the way Bill hoped, so dirty tricks are his only weapons at the moment to get the emotional attention he needs :( Thanks for the review *Maria
Date: 07/22/10 08:55 pm Title: Chapter 7 "Important Clues"
Bill really has me puzzled, and you are right-I can't wait for the hypnotist session!
Author's Response: I'd better get on with revealing how it went then! Thanks for the review :D *Maria
Date: 07/22/10 08:42 pm Title: Chapter 6 "Flickers of Denial"
Don't know how I missed this update!
I think Bill is trying to deny more then the rape..can't wait to see what it is!!
Author's Response: *g* Bill's poor mind is very fickle at the moment for sure. Thanks for the review! *Maria