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Reviewer: AackSnak Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/14/10 11:40 am Title: 'Clubs' and Friends

Finish it our I won't bludger you with a bludger...*raises eyebrow at your laughter* Yoo fink I joke? Non...

Author's Response: *laughter cuts off* He he *gulp*

Reviewer: MissAnna Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/03/10 04:33 pm Title: 'Clubs' and Friends

How can Tom not be suspicious of Bill's behaviour o.O

Can't I just have a cookie >.< An entire cookie factory is so troublesome to manage :P

Author's Response: Oh he's suspicious alright. rnAnd OK, but you're missing out! ;) Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: TokioHotelForever Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/26/10 01:07 pm Title: 'Clubs' and Friends

Well that's a new one. lol
Great chapter. :) It was very interesting.

Author's Response: Thanks friend! I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: AutomaticGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/25/10 02:49 pm Title: 'Clubs' and Friends

Hahah awwww poor bill

Author's Response: Poor Bill indeed! Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: LuneBleue Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/29/10 04:52 pm Title: Berlin Balls and Doodles

Don't worry Bill, he's gonna call soon =)

Author's Response: :D Thanks for the review. Bill says thanks for believing in Tom :3

Reviewer: LuneBleue Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/29/10 04:47 pm Title: Early Mornings and Invitations

Try the gold one Bill =D

Author's Response: That would be a smart thing to do ;)

Reviewer: ReadyxSetxGoxTHx13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/24/10 03:39 pm Title: Assassins and The Party Apocolypse

i agree the last one was a bit rushed i like the pace this version is going at :)

Author's Response: =] Defnly...

Reviewer: ReadyxSetxGoxTHx13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/24/10 03:25 pm Title: Meetings and Skype

O.o i loved this chapter. I definitely like the changes you have made to this story :) can't wait till the next chapter.

Author's Response: DANKE! I prefer this version to the last one...the last one seemed a bit rushed -_-rn

Reviewer: LuneBleue Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/24/10 03:13 pm Title: Assassins and The Party Apocolypse

Very interesting beginning =D

Author's Response: THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU! XD

Reviewer: MissAnna Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/10/10 08:56 am Title: Berlin Balls and Doodles

I got this weird feeling that I should leave a review, I don't know why :/
Anywho... I'm liking this alot. Those doodles are lol worthy but cute XD the first one has more hair than body rofl XD

Author's Response: Thank you honey! And I know right? His hair is too much for his little body haha

Reviewer: AutomaticGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/10/10 01:03 am Title: Berlin Balls and Doodles

Lol those pics are soo cute

Author's Response: =] Thank you!!

Reviewer: ReadyxSetxGoxTHx13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/09/10 07:23 pm Title: Berlin Balls and Doodles

hahaha awww i love the drawings...and your singing in the endnotes. Anyways loved the chapter, i like the changes you've made to this story from when you first uploaded it. can't wait to read more :)

Author's Response: :) Thank you so much! I like REALLY love your reviews :3

Reviewer: LoVeWrItInG Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/09/10 02:20 pm Title: Berlin Balls and Doodles

UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!11

Author's Response: :) I plan to

Reviewer: TokioHotelForever Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/09/10 12:12 pm Title: Berlin Balls and Doodles

..................WOW. I don't think I have anything else to say. It was a good chapter though. I like that Bill's freaking out. That's just so funny.

Author's Response: :P Danke! Und ja, Bill having a little tizz is funny!

Reviewer: AutomaticGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/09/10 12:29 am Title: Early Mornings and Invitations

Please keep going....

Author's Response: You can count on it ;) Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: TokioHotelForever Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/06/10 05:13 pm Title: Early Mornings and Invitations

You have very strategical ways of getting readers to review!
Great chapter! It gets better every minute! :)

Author's Response: Why thank you *bows*rnThank you honey!

Reviewer: TokioHotelForever Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/06/10 04:58 pm Title: Assassins and The Party Apocolypse

Wow. That was... interesting...

Tom's smart! : D

Author's Response: Smart Tomi is fun... :P

Reviewer: ReadyxSetxGoxTHx13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/06/10 03:03 pm Title: Early Mornings and Invitations

Hmmm so far I'm liking it,again, I'm reminded why I liked this story the first time too :). I enjoy your singing in the end notes too :P

Author's Response: Haha thank you sweetness! My singing is auuuwesummm :P

Reviewer: cherryrose Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/05/10 06:00 pm Title: Assassins and The Party Apocolypse

Lovely first chapter =3 I liked it. It seems interesting so far. The idea of Bill, and Tom's life.
Do continue, I will read the next chapter. ;D

Again, very nice introduction! :)


Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you like it so far...

Reviewer: cherryrose Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/05/10 05:56 pm Title: Assassins and The Party Apocolypse

YOU"VE BEEN HIT BY - YOU"VE BEEN STRUCK BY A SMOOTH CRIMINAL! *explodes*
< 33333

noaw I will read your fic ;D
I just had to say, love the title! XD
Lurve that song < 3

Author's Response: *squeee* I luuurve that song too!rnThanks for the review cherrycherry boomboom! (lol wtf?)

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