Date: 12/22/18 04:59 am Title: Desired Love
this was a good story!
Date: 03/10/08 07:39 pm Title: Desired Love
This was cute :)
and you did great even though english isn't your first language.
I know how it is, english isn't mine either ;)
Date: 02/02/08 11:25 am Title: Desired Love
Really good! Especially for your first fiction... I really hope you write more :)
I personally prefer it when there's a line spacing between the dialogue, but that's just me! I think it makes it a little easier to read, presentation wise, when it's more spaced out like that. But as I said, that's just me...
Well done!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'll have that in mind.
Date: 02/02/08 11:25 am Title: Desired Love
That was actually fantastic! Well done!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it! :D
Date: 02/02/08 11:25 am Title: Desired Love
Great job, seeing it's your first fic you're really good :) angsty and hot, exactly what I like. You can definitely write more!
Author's Response: Oh I will! Thanks for the compliment!
Date: 02/02/08 11:19 am Title: Desired Love
gaaaaaaaahhhh BEAUTIFUL!!! GO YOU FOR MAKING THIS!!! ^^lovely!!!
Author's Response: WOW, thanks! lolrn:D
Date: 02/02/08 11:14 am Title: Desired Love
Cute.. Very nicely done for your first! :D
Author's Response: Thanks! :D