Date: 07/19/10 01:58 am Title: Tokio Hotel…I Like It
its over? well damn that was fast. i like the kissing scenes. @(^_^)@
oh and in this line "Bill smiled at Tom and hissed him passionately on the lips"
Shouldn't it say "and kissed?
Just thought i'd point that out. i know i would want someone to do that on my writing.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for pointing that out. I'm off to fix that next. Sometimes my fingers just fly and then I read what it should say when I read it over. In "Kiss With A Fist" I put read where it should say red. It was a short little story but I have a new one so I hope that makes it okay. HAHA.
Date: 07/19/10 01:33 am Title: Tokio Hotel…I Like It
:OO a band!! :D:D Now this turns interesting... I have no ideas how this could continue... hmm.. xDD MORE LIKEIT Like always! :D:D
Author's Response: HAHA. When I wrote this story the first 4 chapters were easy, but then I didn't know where the story was going to go after that and I was in the shower just going over the story again and again and suddenly I said "A BAND!" And I hopped out of the shower so I could write it before I forgot.
Date: 07/19/10 12:07 am Title: Tokio Hotel…I Like It
great chapter!!! :D
Author's Response: Thank you. I couldn't decide how to end the story originally and then I thought, duh a band. lol.
Date: 07/18/10 11:54 pm Title: Tokio Hotel…I Like It
Thank you for a stroy without all the abuse, drama, tearing apart of relationship's! Don't get me wrong-I love those as well, but one like this is a breath of fresh air~can't tell you how much I adore it! Great job-look forward to the epilogue!
Author's Response: I'm happy you liked it. I enjoyed writing it but I feel like it was slightly too fluffy for me. I do well with plot twists and drama. I hope you like the next story it's kind of a mix of the two. But thanks so much for saying that you really liked this one because it will inspire me to write more fluff to break up the drama. I wasn't 100% sure about this story, but the response has been great. I appreciate all your reviews.
Date: 07/18/10 11:50 pm Title: Tokio Hotel…I Like It
KAWII
Author's Response: LOL. I have no idea what that means. ;P Is it good or bad?
Date: 07/18/10 11:44 pm Title: Tokio Hotel…I Like It
Simple, but I still loved it. I absolutely can't WAIT for your newest story! I'm so excited!! You really are a great author!! :D
Author's Response: Thank you so so much! Luckily you don't have to wait long for the new story. Haha. I really liked writing this fluff because my brain has been filled with plots containing lots of drama.
Date: 07/18/10 01:29 am Title: Accidents Happen
haha dont worry about it. i do it sometimes too
Date: 07/18/10 01:28 am Title: Accidents Happen
well i dont think your crossing the line. i think its just right
Date: 07/17/10 08:55 pm Title: Accidents Happen
:D I don't blame you XD I pimped my friends fic the other day seeing how not many people are reading it xP but yeah I can see how much Bill likes Tom. Ahh to get excited every time you see some one you love xP Lucky bill. But Welcome :D
Date: 07/17/10 07:51 pm Title: Accidents Happen
ofcourse it was a good blush. i think the only people who would say something like that are those who read twincest and review telling the writers how "sick" they are.
You're welcome. you're a very good writer
Author's Response: I have no problem with constructive criticism and I welcome it but I have def read some scenes that I just felt dirty, in a bad way, reading it and thought it was extremely vulgar but I would never tell the author that unless I knew they were kind of down to earth. But I would definitely want to know if I was crossing a line.
Date: 07/17/10 12:57 am Title: A Budding Relationship
Thank's for a sweet but sexy chapter!
Author's Response: It's always nice to throw a few sexy moments into stories. I don't know if it makes me a perv but I really enjoy the challenge or writing sexy scenes that are believable. I don't want anyone to read them and think wait so what position are they in but still be able to say that it was tasteful at the same time.
Date: 07/17/10 12:44 am Title: WWGD
Oh God-I love this chapter so much! So happy they got the chance to meet while Tom was not under the influence of pain med's-now to catch up ------>
Author's Response: Lucid Tom is always nice. haha.
Date: 07/16/10 10:12 pm Title: A Budding Relationship
aww sweet
Author's Response: It was full of sweet events. I'm getting back to the drama in my next story. haha. Thanks so much for all of your reviews.
Date: 07/16/10 06:07 pm Title: A Budding Relationship
Loved it! Good job!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing. I'm happy you liked it. More to come soon.
Date: 07/16/10 11:52 am Title: A Budding Relationship
Hooray! I was worried you had forgotten about the update...stupid internet being down. I'm so glad this got updated. And you're forgiven, because smut is the ultimate apology. :D Now I'm off to read that other story of yours. HUZZAH!! (Can't wait for Sunday)
Author's Response: No I hadn't forgotten. It was so annoying that I couldn't update because I like to complete my stories before I begin posting them so people don't have to wait for an update. The internet has been spotty and only working on the ipod but not on the laptop and other crap. We're thinking about switching. Anyway. lol. I'm happy that smut is an appropriate way to apologize. Thanks so much for reading this one AND my new post. haha.
Date: 07/16/10 09:09 am Title: A Budding Relationship
LOVED this!
XD
Author's Response: I'm happy you did. I felt like it was super super fluffy but there are some people who really like that and I'm happy you did. Thanks so much.
Date: 07/16/10 08:12 am Title: A Budding Relationship
This was REAAAALLLLY fulll of fluff.. :D:D almost too, BUT I also think that there can never be too much tom&bill things.. xDxD the smut:... I'm dancing now my victory dance!!! :D:D:D JEI!!! It was great like always in ur stories.. :):) wewantmore,wewantmore,wewantmore!! :D:D
Author's Response: It was a lot of fluff but it was a nice departure from the drama. I'm working on four other stories without as much fluff and a lot of drama and I needed a little breather from the drama. Thanks for sticking with the story anyway. Once it's over I'll have a more balanced story coming next that's a bit of fluff but also a bit of drama. Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 07/16/10 05:30 am Title: A Budding Relationship
aww. so sweet and romantic. it made me smile and blush. ^.^
You're really good at writing kissing/sex scenes
Author's Response: Thank you so much for saying that you liked the scene. I hope it was a good blush and not a eww that crossed the line into raunchy blush. I try to keep the scenes from being vulgar so if you read something of mine like that please tell me so I can rework it. I don't want anyone to sit and think ewww that's just crossing the line and is no longer tasteful. I really appreciate all your reviews. Thanks for sticking with me in all of my stories so far.
Date: 07/16/10 05:24 am Title: A Budding Relationship
OOoo they're together!!! *flail*
Awwww yummy sweet smut, makes my toes curl. Thankyou sweetie, I needed that *hugs*
Author's Response: I'm happy that I could give a little boost to your day. A little sweet smut is always nice to write. Tying to find a balance between it being sweet but also sexy is a nice challenge.
Date: 07/16/10 04:04 am Title: A Budding Relationship
Awww come on we all know you love pimping your fics ;] Bill seems so child like in a way o./O
Author's Response: I do love pimping my fics. HAHA. I do it because I don't always check the recent stories and I sometimes miss things from people I like but maybe not enough to mark them as a fav author so I figure if people like my stuff if they come across it but not enough to favorite me they will at least know when I post something new. rnrnAnyway. I didn't mean for Bill to come off childlike. I wanted to show that Bill really liked Tom and that he was so excited to see him. That seeing or hearing from Tom perked up his mood. Thanks so much for telling me that thought. I will definitely keep that in mind for other stories especially fluffy ones.