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Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/07/10 05:12 pm Title: Best Dream Ever

I have OnStar in my suv-love it!

I really liked this chapter-and the ending had me lol. I really want Bill to come see Tom again when he is awake and alert! Thank's for the update.

Author's Response: I don't think I even know anyone who has On Star lol. Thanks for reviewing. We'll see more of Bill soon don't worry.

Reviewer: phaerei Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/07/10 03:46 am Title: Accidents Happen

So far so good. This seems like it's gonna be fun.

Author's Response: Thanks, I hope I can live up to the expectations.

Reviewer: Alli_cat141 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/05/10 08:22 am Title: Accidents Happen

HAPPY BIRTHDAY I hope you have a great birthday and you get spoilt rotten. *stars&hugs*

Author's Response: I did have a good birthday, I didn't have to cook and my mother-in-law gives awesome gifts, otherwise it was a pretty normal day. Oh I should probably mention that my other also gives awesome gifts but she likes to spoil me and can never wait until the actual holiday so I sometimes forget about her. haha. Anyway I hope you enjoyed the chapter and plan to read the next. I know you were with me throughout "Small World" so I hope you stick around for this one too.

Reviewer: Alli_cat141 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/05/10 08:17 am Title: Accidents Happen

*Bounce* Yay for new ficcie's!! I really like it honey!! To be in an accident and have a concussion is scary not to mention the confusion, so to have Bill be able to keep Tom calm and awake is wonderful. I really hope Tom's going to be okay. I can't wait for the next chapter. *hugs*

Author's Response: WOW was that bounce for the new fic? I sure hope so. Who better to bring comfort than Bill? I'd let him talk me through anything. You'll find out how Tom is in the next chapter.

Reviewer: Atlantis Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/05/10 02:03 am Title: Accidents Happen

Very cute way for Bill and Tom to meet. Looking forward to reading more. :]

Author's Response: The idea just came to me randomly one day when I was taking the bus and it stuck so I had to write it up. I hope you like the next update.

Reviewer: cherryrose Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/04/10 09:00 pm Title: Accidents Happen

Very nice concept.. However, it's pretty funny/cute that Tom's going-to-become lover was met after hitting a dear and bleeding. :D Sometimes pain brings you goodness< 3 /shot
Really lovely start :)
Will wait for Wednesday. :3


Author's Response: You're right sometimes pain and bad things can bring you happiness. I'm happy you liked the first chapter. I really loved writing it.

Reviewer: Sieren Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/04/10 08:23 pm Title: Accidents Happen

i love this
cant wait for more

Author's Response: I'm really happy you like this. It's good to know that people will be coming back to see what happens next. Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: sraine Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/04/10 08:06 pm Title: Accidents Happen

Can't wait :D

Reviewer: Elzukka Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/04/10 07:07 pm Title: Accidents Happen

:OO I wanna that kind of car too!! It sounded SO cool!! :D:D Is tom gonna be okay?! :/ Please don't let anything seriously bad happen to him... I might have said this before so i have to repeat myself: Ur absolutely awesome writer... ^^ I'll be waiting impatiently more.. :D:D

Author's Response: Firstly, it's okay that you've repeated yourself it made me smile and do a little dance that included a flutter clap. rnrnSecondly, On Star and Sync are some new things I've seen in car commercials. I've never actually known anyone with the services in their cars but they do seem pretty cool. Some people are paranoid that On Star just tracks your movement, but if you're in an accident in the middle of no where I guess it would be something nice to have. A tricked out car suits Tom though doesn't it?

Reviewer: MissAnna Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/04/10 06:07 pm Title: Accidents Happen

lol @ the lady who thought he unlocked the door with witchcraft rofl.
I like it. :)

Author's Response: Thanks. I thought it was kind of funny too. I don't know where it came from, it just flowed out of my fingers as I was typing and I thought I love that. I bet some crazy person has thought those things about On Star.

Reviewer: sraine Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/04/10 05:43 pm Title: Accidents Happen

I like it for sure!

Author's Response: Thanks I'm happy you liked it. Next update coming soon.

Reviewer: lizh12795 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/04/10 05:07 pm Title: Accidents Happen

I read a lot of fanfiction and this is the first time that I have seen someone use On Star as an introduction of the characters. Very interesting.

Author's Response: I hope by interesting you mean, "I'll stick around and see how it goes...and I'll review after every chapter." ;P The idea just came to me one day when i was riding the bus. I was like oh that's a good idea so I jotted the idea down on my iPod. That same day I saw a commercial for On Star and I thought it was a sign and started to write it a few days later.

Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/04/10 05:00 pm Title: Accidents Happen

~~*HAPPY BIRTHDAY*~~

I'm so hooked on this already-cannot wait for an update!

Author's Response: YAY I'm happy you're hooked. Thanks for the birthday salutations and the review.

Reviewer: lovemykaila Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/04/10 02:46 pm Title: Accidents Happen

i like it. keep going!
annndd... happy birthday!

Author's Response: I'm happy you like it, I'm going to keep going on some new things so that I'll have more to post once I'm finished posting this story in a few weeks.

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