Date: 11/10/11 06:53 pm Title: "Do you want this?"
Awwwwh no happy ending? :(
Date: 08/09/10 10:08 pm Title: "Do you want this?"
WOW. I really liked it. It was well written and I actually felt anxious while I read the second part after they broke apart. I would love to read a continuation of this. I'm going to check now. haha.
Date: 02/26/10 01:09 am Title: "Do you want this?"
wow. surprising ending! and i love it :D
Date: 05/05/09 09:59 pm Title: "Do you want this?"
-sighs- damn...
Date: 01/11/09 07:23 am Title: "Do you want this?"
honestly, i liked it... i like the fact that tom isn't having it, and that he really stands up for his feelings this time!! love
Author's Response: Thank you very much! :D
Date: 01/01/09 01:21 pm Title: "Do you want this?"
NO!!! You have to write a next bit and make them all happy again!!! Or I'll go mad!!!
Author's Response: I'm sorry, but I intended for this story to end like this. If there ever comes a time that I get inspired to write a sequel, then I'll attempt to. I'm sorry the ending wasn't as you liked though. *hugs*
Date: 07/14/08 08:32 pm Title: "Do you want this?"
Wow, this was awesome. I both love and hate the ending. Tom's right, but i still want them together. Do you have a sequel for this?
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! Unfortunately no, there is no sequel. It was meant to be painful and raw, this piece, and I intended to leave it there. The readers are left hanging because Tom and Bill's relationship is left hanging. It was meant to be a piece that shows what happens when two people in a relationship want different things. Thanks again, though, for taking time out to give me your thoughts. I really appreciate it. :D PS: However...I like to think they worked it out in the end myself. *Shhh* Don't tell anyone. <33333 and hugs to you.
Date: 03/30/08 05:11 am Title: "Do you want this?"
I luffed this! It was so well written. The emotions, anger, the need... Oh god! It killed me, it will kill me again and agian when I read it again, and again!
Date: 02/19/08 02:50 pm Title: "Do you want this?"
God this is good! So painfull and heartwrenching! you could easily have turned this into at story, though it was brilliant as a one-shot :)
Date: 02/02/08 01:14 pm Title: "Do you want this?"
hmmmm u should write more cuz i don't like this ending...
Date: 02/02/08 08:53 am Title: "Do you want this?"
Rashida my darling!
This came out very well. The regret... the indecision... it wasn't obvious until the very end. It was akin to coming into a conversation late. You think you know what's going on but then you realize you're wrong. I could appreciate the subtle shift of emotion between Bill and Tom; the shift of self rightous anger went from one twin to the other as the conversation got to what the issue really was.
And as for Bill not responding... brilliant. He couldn't lie after telling Tom not to lie, and Tom stood his ground. I mean, it's true; he can't continue to have things both ways because it's not fair to Tom.
The end killed me. It gives me hope for the future, but the last line definitely killed me. Seems we're having the wedding in hell if I can't get a day pass. *shrugs*
I was so excited to see something of yours on the new update page. And it was abolutely wonderful in your normally fantastic style.
Author's Response: You're alive! I was worried about you because you were MIA all day--unless I just missed you. And apparently I've just killed you dead again. This will not do. I am not having our wedding in such hot surroundings. The guests will have heat stroke...or third degree burns. No. Absolutely not. I'll just have to revive you somehow. LOLrnrnThanks so much for the feedback. I'm glad it wasn't completely obvious what was going on until the end. I wanted people to think Tom was the "bad guy" and then have it turn out it was Bill. I mean, they both sort of play a part in their current unhappiness, but I wanted Bill to be the main instigator. rnrnA person can only take so much until they get fed up. :( rnrnAnyhow, I'm honored that you liked it. You know I love your work so I hold you in high regard. Now where is Makes 3, woman? LOL I had to put T in the mental institution because she kind of cracked. I am best friendless at the moment. You've got to fix it! I read chapters 1 and 2 of M3 last night, but haven't reviewed yet. I'll get to that today. rnrnNow, I have to figure out how to get you out of hell. rnrn<3333333
Date: 02/02/08 04:49 am Title: "Do you want this?"
It turned out heartbreaking beautiful! *loves the fic*
Author's Response: And I love you for taking time out to review! Thanks so much, sweetie. And I'm glad you liked it. :D
Date: 02/02/08 03:30 am Title: "Do you want this?"
AAHHH if you can, and if you have enought ime, would you make this into a series!? Please! It hass me captivated, though I don't usually go for angst and such, this is brilliant! I love it :3
Author's Response: I can't promise that, but if something DOES come to me where I can continue it--and make it believable--I'll definitely try. I'm glad you liked it and I'm happy you took the time to review. :DD
Date: 02/02/08 02:53 am Title: "Do you want this?"
wow...now THAT was intense!!! I just dont know who is the one being an ass! I think both.. god! that was amazing!
Author's Response: Yes, I wanted a fic where it wasn't only Tom in the wrong. Usually it's only Tomi who being an ass, you know? LOL Thanks for the feeback. :DDD
Date: 02/02/08 02:24 am Title: "Do you want this?"
"Why do you always have to be so fucking different? Why do you have to be such a freak?"
Ouch! I felt that! D: And then the last line kills me. Sobbing Bill... Tom truly not caring. ;_;
I'm so happy to see more from you! Mask, Facade... Hmm, I'm seeing a trend here. ;)
Author's Response: Dear Lord...I seem to be killing everyone who's reading this. LOL! I swear I didn't have mass murder on my mind when I did this. And yeah, I'm seeing a trend too. Thanks, hon, for your kind words. :)
Date: 02/02/08 12:48 am Title: "Do you want this?"
Ouch that seriously hurt.
I was not expecting that. But when you think about it, Tom is right.
He can't just sit around waiting for him, it wouldn't be fair to either of them.
Great job! ^_^
Author's Response: I'm sorry it hurt. *sends cookies* And thanks so much for the feedback! :D
Date: 02/02/08 12:42 am Title: "Do you want this?"
D: D: D: You kill me so good with the ANGST.
Author's Response: <33 I'm glad you liked it. This one kicked my ass too. I worried about getting the characters' emotions right. Gah. Thanks so much for the feedback, lovie. :D