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Reviewer: tokiohotelprincess Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/01/11 11:50 pm Title: Chapter 2- Im your worse nightmare
Date: 03/01/11 11:50 pm Title: Chapter 2- Im your worse nightmare
OMG I LOVE IT!!!!!
Reviewer: TokioHotelForever Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/06/10 04:44 pm Title: Chapter 2- Im your worse nightmare
Date: 07/06/10 04:44 pm Title: Chapter 2- Im your worse nightmare
?? I'm confused... :P What the heck is wrong with Bill? haha
Reviewer: TokioHotelForever Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/06/10 04:40 pm Title: Chapter 1- Strange Creature.
Date: 07/06/10 04:40 pm Title: Chapter 1- Strange Creature.
This looks promising. :) I like it so far.
Reviewer: AndeinerSeitenureineWeile Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/05/10 09:48 pm Title: Chapter 2- Im your worse nightmare
Date: 07/05/10 09:48 pm Title: Chapter 2- Im your worse nightmare
A few grammar errors, but overall good! :)
Reviewer: AndeinerSeitenureineWeile Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/05/10 09:44 pm Title: Chapter 1- Strange Creature.
Date: 07/05/10 09:44 pm Title: Chapter 1- Strange Creature.
I really like the idea for this story, and I can't wait to see how the plot will develop!!
My only suggestion is that you try to incorporate more vocabulary into your writing. Just as a suggestion... :D
Reviewer: IzzyKaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/05/10 06:33 pm Title: Chapter 2- Im your worse nightmare
Date: 07/05/10 06:33 pm Title: Chapter 2- Im your worse nightmare
You need a beta. This could be SO much better if you actually had someone read over it before you posted. Just a little bit of clean-up would do wonders.
Reviewer: xXfaithXx Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/05/10 06:00 pm Title: Chapter 2- Im your worse nightmare
Date: 07/05/10 06:00 pm Title: Chapter 2- Im your worse nightmare
so bill is an android? hmm interesting.. im liking the idea and story so far.. so please update soon X
Reviewer: xXfaithXx Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/05/10 05:53 pm Title: Chapter 1- Strange Creature.
Date: 07/05/10 05:53 pm Title: Chapter 1- Strange Creature.
first reviewer.. its a great first chapter.. well done..=) i liked it..so dont hide.also i love the banner! X
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