Date: 03/14/12 04:31 pm Title: Chapter Twelve
:(... Morre?
Author's Response: Aw, I'll try but I've completely lost every ounce of inspiration for this. It's sad, I know :( But I could always give it another go.
Date: 08/10/11 07:41 am Title: Chapter Twelve
wow this was really good can't wait for you next chapter! :3
Author's Response: Thanks soooo much, love. Every single review from you guys makes me happy :)
Date: 08/10/11 06:03 am Title: Chapter Eight
I really like this so far and I just felt like saying randomly twice or three times at school i've done what bill did at the end but i didn't have anyone hugging me lol I was in maths class once and the teacher pissed me off so i started crying to myself then laughed my ass off and got sent out of the room... all of the times i broke down like that my bestfriend was there and she was there for me which was nice... GOOD STORY!! Going to finish reading now ^-^
Author's Response: Oh, wow :( That's terrible, I'm sorry. But I'm glad you can relate to Bill's character. I'm glad your reading this :) Thanks for the review xx
Date: 12/14/10 05:34 pm Title: Chapter Twelve
I'm so glad you're not offended... I was worried my review seemed too harsh. I'm sorry you don't think this fic is any good, though, because it is! Especially for your second story. I completely understand just writing without a plan... I do that sometimes. It's harder with a site like this, when you're posting as you write - you can't go back and make changes to make your new idea more reasonable. ;) It is a good idea to plan before you write (or at least before you post) in the future.
I hope to see more of this story soon. It might help with inspiration if you think back to why you started it in the first place and how you felt about it in the beginning.
Author's Response: :) Yeah, that's so true. Thanks so much for your advice, really :)rnI might just go through my first written notes of this story and read the story that inspired me once more, then maybe I'll be able to finish this :) Thanks, again.
Date: 12/14/10 11:38 am Title: Chapter Twelve
You've been complaining to me about finishing this story for ages! Just do it! FOR MEEEEE!
Author's Response: Aw, I'll try. Just need some inspiration.
Date: 12/04/10 09:01 am Title: Chapter Twelve
NO!! Don't loose you beautiful hair Bill *not at all thinking about him being depressed* please don't!
Author's Response: SHALLO INGRID! Shame on you! ;-)rnThanks so much for the review!
Date: 11/29/10 03:27 am Title: Chapter Twelve
oh no! poor bill. hopefully tom and vanessa can convince him its not his fault.
Author's Response: We'll see :) Thank you very much!
Date: 11/26/10 06:09 pm Title: Chapter Twelve
Hmm. I'm sorry, but that was far too convenient. And it came out of nowhere. It's not a bad idea, but I'm afraid you didn't set it up well enough. If you'd dropped hints earlier (for example, we had no idea that Vanessa had a cousin from Denmark - telling us would have been a step toward making the plot twist reasonable), that would be one thing, but you really didn't. I'd just suggest that, in future stories, you try to set up the big plot twists better. A twist is a wonderful thing, but not if it's not realistic. In my opinion, the best thing about plot twists is being able to go back in the story and pick out the hints that the author dropped and think, "Oh! That makes so much sense now!"
I still enjoyed the chapter, and I'm looking forward to reading the rest. I feel terrible for Bill. I hope Tom gets there quickly.
Author's Response: Sigh...I know *frowns* I just don't plan things out before I write them. I'm not trying to make excuses though. You summed up everything I felt about this chapter when I wrote it. It's incredibly unrealistic. But I've lost all inspiration and drive to write this fic because I truly don't think its any good :/ This is only my second story...any story, not just fanfic. So maybe with time I'll improve :) In the future I'm going to actually plan stories instead of just rushing into them... Thanks SO SO SO SO SOOOO much for your honesty. Sometimes it means more than just a "Great chapter! Update soon!"rnYour reviews are always a breath of fresh air :) Thanks xxrn
Date: 11/24/10 08:00 pm Title: Chapter Twelve
Hnng, can't wait for next chapter :DD
Author's Response: Thanks so much! =)
Date: 11/24/10 06:52 pm Title: Chapter Twelve
mmmm....... smexy ktwins..... lol
great job on this, that came as a COMPLETE surprise...... lovely!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks you for the review :)
Date: 11/10/10 08:42 am Title: Chapter Eleven
hmmm...... me almost thinks bill shoulda stayed mad a wee bit longer.... XD oh, well, it still works, and i like!!!!!!
Author's Response: me thinks so too ;) Thank you!
Date: 11/09/10 09:45 pm Title: Chapter Eleven
They're so awkward with each other, haha... I hope this makes things smoother.
It wasn't incredibly original to bring Vanessa in and have Bill get jealous over her, but it was effective. From what we know of him, I think he would have taken a lot longer to come around (if he ever did) without her showing up.
Author's Response: ;) All for a reason trust me...Thanks for a review!
Date: 11/09/10 06:42 pm Title: Chapter Eleven
yay! yay for new hair and yay for kisses!!
Author's Response: Yay indeed! xD Thanks for the review!
Date: 10/17/10 04:05 pm Title: Chapter Ten
I'm glad for the update. I love that talking to a five year old made Tom's week. But, sometimes all it takes is something simple.
Author's Response: Too true my friend, too true :)
Date: 10/16/10 11:14 pm Title: Chapter Ten
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO, cliffhanger!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! T_T great job!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Aw I'm sorry. But thank you none the less :)
Date: 10/16/10 01:35 pm Title: Chapter Ten
Aww, Mishy's cute!
I'm glad you didn't abandon this story! I'm enjoying it very much, and I can't wait to see how it all ends up.
Author's Response: Aw thank you! Mishy thinks you're cute too! ^_^rnThanks so much for the review!
Date: 07/31/10 02:03 am Title: Chapter Eight
Happy writing while you are gone!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I hope I find the utilities to write...within the bush...but never fear! I'll take my own!
Date: 07/31/10 01:45 am Title: Chapter Eight
*sniffle* poor bill. :( i cant believe hes blonde!
Author's Response: I know. Poor Bill indeed. *hugs* Thanks for the review!
Date: 07/30/10 07:21 pm Title: Chapter Eight
omg 3 weeks. plz more
Author's Response: I'll try give you more after three weeks. I'm sorry =[
Date: 07/30/10 03:29 pm Title: Chapter Eight
*Also sobs*
You're going away and leaving us with this unfinished business?
Don't you love us??
*Sobs some more*
Author's Response: NOO! I'm sorry *hands tissue* I don't mean to leave! *hands another tissue* But it's compulsary to go! *hands another tissue* and I'm REALLLLY SORRY! *shoves tissue box into Quinny's face*rnDanke for the review though!