Date: 07/02/10 07:15 am Title: Perfect
You should write more.
Like a backstory, or something. I'd read it!
Author's Response: Well, thank you! ^_^rnI might do that at some point, I'd really like to actually, but I have, not even kidding, like 50 other ideas right now, so we'll see how it goes. =)rnThanks again for your feedback, and I'm really glad you liked the story. ^_^
Date: 07/02/10 04:51 am Title: Perfect
The end was... weird. XDD I was like.. wtf? Robot Bill... she killed him by disclosing his secret? o.0
Errr... Umm..
Review on first part: It was beautiful. And I loved how he spoke of Tom *_*! I liked Jessica, she seemed laid back. Very nice.
Good fic, with interesting plot line. and much suspense! (:
Author's Response: Thank you! ^_^rnI guess you can't really say she killed him, considering he was a robot and robots aren't really alive in the first place, but if you were interviewing a celebrity and then they started wildly spasming before collapsing in a motionless heap on the floor, wouldn't it make sense to think they were dead?rnThanks again for your feedback. =) I was afraid the end didn't make as much sense as I wanted it to, but I didn't really know how to make it better. I'll be sure to work on that more next time. ^_^