Date: 11/10/24 08:30 am Title: Freedom
This is an absolutely amazing story.
Date: 03/20/19 01:27 am Title: Freedom
this was a really good story!!
i wish you did a sequel to this
Date: 03/19/19 02:34 am Title: Freedom
this was a really good story!!
i wish you did a sequel to this
Date: 02/13/18 02:07 am Title: Freedom
I read this story yet again! It never gets old for me. Absolutely love it!
Date: 06/17/16 08:46 am Title: 1: The Golden Spire
It's a great story and I loved it. I also love your writing and I'm going to read more of your stories. Angeleyes
Date: 10/17/15 09:51 am Title: Freedom
OMG! I absolutely loved this story. I read it pretty much in one go. (No, literally, I started it last night and finished it this morning.....)
I giggled, I sniffled. I shook my fist at Bushido. It was simply amazing. I had a few ideas that I thought could have helped (Tom working out a deal with Interscope with Bill performing or something) but I really really liked how this turned out. :)
Date: 12/09/14 01:43 pm Title: Freedom
Um. I swear, I do have a life. I should probably be doing other things, but instead I find myself rereading past favorites. Thanks for all the great stories, you have really been an important part of this site for me and, I'm sure, many others. I do need to buy the sequel to signal to noise, still!
Date: 03/27/14 03:37 pm Title: Cut Off
I just had to leave a message now!!! I am a Member for the past 3 years and I think I've read all your stories. I love the crisp narrative and beautifully written prose in B and T's affections. I look forward to anything you decide to write....keep up the excellent work!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm really happy you enjoyed the story so much, and I appreciate your review. ♥
Date: 01/21/14 03:20 am Title: Freedom
So gorgeous. I love this so much. I can feel the twins emotions through the words, I connect so much with this story. I couldn't put it down, had to read it (again) even when I should be doing other things, like sleeping. It is so good.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm really happy you enjoyed the story so much, I appreciate your review. :)
Date: 01/08/14 10:22 pm Title: Freedom
I just reread this story for the third time. I love it so much. It is pure brilliance and perfection!
Author's Response: Thank you! I am forever grateful. ♥
Date: 11/08/13 04:46 am Title: Freedom
Just rereading through old favorites. Very much enjoyed this the second time around as well. =)
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it so much. :)
Date: 11/05/13 11:30 am Title: Freedom
Wonderful!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 08/17/13 08:16 pm Title: Freedom
For months, I had wanted to read this story but had no time to do so. Now I read it, I'm in love with your story.
I have read several fics of "slaves", and no doubt your story is among my favorites. The original plot was, always kept me on the edge of the chair, I swear! The ending was perfect <3
As you can see my English is not good (I'm from Mexico) but I wanted to ask you if you give me permission to translate to Spanish "Captive love". I'd really wish the Latino fans could enjoy your story too. If you give me your permission I will give you the link where I'll be posting. I hope you can give me an answer. Congratulations for this beautiful fic <3
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Date: 08/12/13 01:06 am Title: Freedom
Oh mein gott.
I LOVED it!!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm really glad!
Date: 06/11/13 06:53 pm Title: 1: The Golden Spire
Can't love it more!!!I read the whole story in one day,cuz I can't stop it.
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm so glad! ♥
Date: 06/02/13 06:54 am Title: Freedom
Great story and a beautiful ending!! =)
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 03/30/13 10:30 pm Title: Freedom
OMGGGG I LOVED THIS SO MUCH
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad to hear it. :D
Date: 03/22/13 03:21 pm Title: Freedom
I loved this story so so much ^.^
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm so happy you did! :D
Date: 03/17/13 06:48 pm Title: Freedom
Oh mai gawd. You use the term 'mrrph' too?! I thought I was the only one!
Sorry, that had to be said. But anyways, onto my review. I'm sorry I haven't reviewed up until now. With each chapter ending, I found myself unable to stop from flitting to the next chapter.
The twists that you entered into this story was....interesting. Usually I'm able to tell what's going to happen in a story, but this one had me pleasantly surprised.
I was quite surprised when you actually made them be identical twins. I've seen other stories where they said incest was involved, but in the actual story, Tom and Bill had no relation. But because of the fact that they boys are, in real life, twins, they just thought they should put it out there. But you, my bold lady, actually made them identical twins. That was quite a surprise for me.
The one surprise that really sort of slapped me in the face just about as hard as Simone slapped Jorg was when Bill asked Tom to abolish slavery as his birthday present. THAT I did NOT see coming. In between those few sentences where Bill asked and then noted what it was he wanted, I had fun imagining what it was Bill was asking. I thought "hmm. Does he want Tom to bottom right now? Have a threesome with Georg, or maybe even Bushido? Cause they had a slight connection despite how mu---......oh." That was my actual reaction lmfao.
Your story was wonderful. I've read other stories where it's wonderful throughout and then their ending is so unabashedly simple or just terrible that it made me hate the entire story. It's like the author got lazy, r bored, and just said "Ba-da-boom, ba-da-bing, done." And it's like "WHAT THE FLYING FUCK?!" But I'm glad to say your ending was quite nice. Your story was quite amazing. I've enjoyed every second. :)
Author's Response: Yes, I thought it fit young wide-eyed Bill perfectly! :D
That's all right, I'm excited that the story drew you on so strongly! Always makes me happy to hear it. :) And it's always good when someone tells me they got surprised by some twists that I put in!
Oh yes, they were definitely meant to be twins from the beginning. :3 Identical twins are my favorite, haha.
Bill is a serious young fellow and he has a major goal! He's definitely going to make his birthday wish count. ;) It might take them a while but I have no doubt these two could accomplish it.
Thank you so much for a lovely, long review! And I also like to make sure the ending is worth your time. I appreciate your kind words. ♥