Reviews For A Captive Love
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Reviewer: ura_hd Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/16/12 02:28 am Title: Freedom

What an amazing story! I read it on one breath. I love the plot, the boys and even supporting characters. Everything is just perfect!

Author's Response: Hey, thank you so much! Sorry I didn't reply to this before, I didn't see it. :) I'm so happy you enjoyed the story so much, and I really appreciate your comment!

Reviewer: nessavonkaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/27/12 07:58 pm Title: Freedom

Beautiful, cute, sweet,dramatic n incredibly hot story really love it!!!

One bad thing only.. was that you used a lot of new words for me hahah I'm not English native hahah I was near to give up at the beginning xD but I'm really fckin glad I didn't
*u* thank you so much for this amazing fic!!

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm happy you enjoyed it so much! Well, I hope you learned a lot of new words, but sorry that it discouraged you...thanks for sticking with it! I appreciate your review. :D

Reviewer: Kulta Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/22/12 09:39 am Title: Freedom

ZOh mer gid dius stiry!!! ser ermizing (lol sideways typing and missing the o turned into a language)

Author's Response: Lol a couple of different languages. Thanks for reading! I'm glad you enjoyed it so much. ♥

Reviewer: Kulta Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/22/12 09:31 am Title: Coming Home

oaijsoudvosvho YAY!!!

Author's Response: Yay indeed! :D

Reviewer: Kulta Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/22/12 09:25 am Title: The Truth that Sets Free

LOL I just knew he'd put the belt on

Author's Response: You figured it out. ;D

Reviewer: Kulta Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/22/12 09:19 am Title: Gathering Allies

I actually stared crying in that last paragraph.

Author's Response: Awww ♥ I'm glad it affected you so much!

Reviewer: Kulta Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/22/12 09:13 am Title: Repossession

oh god oh god oh god oh god

Reviewer: Kulta Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/22/12 09:05 am Title: Last

D:

Reviewer: Kulta Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/22/12 08:48 am Title: Passing the Luck

NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!

Reviewer: Kulta Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/22/12 08:16 am Title: 10: Frozen

GOD DAMN IT JORG! YOU ASSHOLE!

Reviewer: Kulta Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/22/12 07:26 am Title: All His Firsts

BILLLLLLLLL! D:! poor Bill

Reviewer: heleng Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/26/12 12:38 pm Title: Freedom

Incredible story. Loved every word of it.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really appreciate your lovely review.

Reviewer: JESSICA118214 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/27/12 05:21 pm Title: Freedom

SO FLIPPIN GOOOOOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!! XO IM SCREAMING THIS!!!!!!!This story is AWESOME!¡¡!!!!!!!!!»a34;○◇□△◎a34;a34;○a34;a34;◇○a34;a34;a34;a34;a2;◇◎◎□a4;a4;a4;ίήa2;ΰίίς○ΦΩΧΦΦΡΠΤΤy4;z8;z2;z5;z3;ΗφφψωχψψψΔΙΙΞΚΕŸβδνζκθØÅüÂÀæºt82;t82;*©®®b34;**u93;s64;

Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much!! So many special characters, haha! I'm so honored. :)

Reviewer: Tinie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/18/12 07:32 am Title: Freedom

Absolutely wonderful story. Rich in details, imagery, tension, love. Thank you for sharing your talented writing with us.

Reviewer: Tinie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/18/12 07:23 am Title: Coming Home

I read this already many days ago, but things have torn me away from reviewing, both good and bad things. It's so good to see them together in a safe place. It's all so understandable that they need to reconfirm their bond and their love, they were torn apart from each other before they really could talk about being brothers, and after they'd found out they were in fact twins, they didn't even meet. But now they've renewed their vows, and all is well that ends well. I love how Bill says that all that happened to him is a part of him... somehow that gives me faith that he has not been marked for life by being a slave. Other than the tattoo, of course...

Reviewer: Tinie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/12/12 08:57 am Title: Coming Home

I need to read this more carefully in a while. I'm upset because of Jorg and I want to take proper time.

Reviewer: Tinie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/12/12 08:49 am Title: The Truth that Sets Free

I can't read for tears. First this,
"I don't have it!" Bill exclaimed, defiant. "Why would I? I'm the commodity, Grand Master Bushido. Only Tom, my master, has it." OF COURSE I knew it, I told you, Bill was smart and fast there. You make an excellent, excellent portrait of Bushido, a man of honor somehow (do you remember that I suggested he would help Bill and Tom with money? well, he didn't, but he did have something honorable about him that I think I spotted). And of course, the 'cast made me cry, the mother, how Bill never wished he'd have that much, and Bushido calling Bill Milord and got to have something "first" from Bill. This is all so wonderful, what a story you've crafted.

Reviewer: Tinie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/12/12 08:35 am Title: Gathering Allies

Oh gods, I'm crying now, from the wonderful art and from the telephone call. this is wonderful, all of it, even if the situations is terrible.

Reviewer: Tinie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/12/12 08:25 am Title: Repossession

Bill found the chastity belt! I am 100 % certain! And that awful Bushido can try as much as he likes... he's not going to rape Bill. Now things are definitely speeding up, not only my heart.

Reviewer: Tinie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/12/12 08:19 am Title: The Truth that Divides

First of all, okay, Jorg sold his son when he was just a baby? That's outrageous. Still I could see it happening. What would somehow make it more horrible is, if that money was used to build more fortunes for the House of Kaulitz, somehow, and Jorg valued that more than he valued Bill. I can't explain it better. It's all terrible and so captivating. Bill has nothing to fear of course! But poor little Bill, how can he know at this point? My idea now (and has been for two chapters, lol) is that Bill dresses up like Tom and walks out like him, then Tom a while later. I'm so clever! Now something has to turn the tables or I'll go crazy.

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