Date: 07/01/10 12:51 am Title: 1: The Golden Spire
I am so hooked, did not want to stop reading!!! So interesting and differant!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you were that hooked! Lots more to come. :) Thank you!
Date: 07/01/10 12:34 am Title: 1: The Golden Spire
interesting. I happy the rating will change!!!! ;)
Author's Response: It sure will! ;) But it will be several chapters, so I started it out as PG-13. :D
Date: 07/01/10 12:03 am Title: 1: The Golden Spire
btw..i LOVE your banner!!!
xoxo
Author's Response: Thank you!! Umetnica does such a fantastic job.
Date: 07/01/10 12:01 am Title: 1: The Golden Spire
wow..i honestly cant wait for more!!!!
great chapter sweets!!^^
Author's Response: I'm so glad to hear it! Thank you, and I hope you continue to enjoy it. :D
Date: 06/30/10 11:38 pm Title: 1: The Golden Spire
I'm excited for this!
Author's Response: I am excited you are excited!! :D
Date: 06/30/10 11:31 pm Title: 1: The Golden Spire
AHHHHHHH TAY YOU'VE FINALLY STARTED POSTING THIS. TAAAAAAY. YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW LONG I'VE WAITED FOR THIS DAY SKDF;GJSF ♥♥♥♥♥
P.S. THE BANNER ART IS AMAZING.
Author's Response: KISH I LOVE THIS REVIEW LIKE MAD! ♥ You're so adorable with this flaily rope of hearts. Wait until you see the full art! She really did such a fabulous job, I am utterly happy with it and can't wait to commission another.
Date: 06/30/10 11:26 pm Title: 1: The Golden Spire
Your banner is an orgasm within itself 0_o
Author's Response: She does really amazing work. ;) And she can be commissioned!
Date: 06/30/10 11:19 pm Title: 1: The Golden Spire
Eeeeee!!!! I'm so excited about this!!! I love this sort of thing and I know you'll make it wonderful! This is such a different setting from most slave/master fics I've read, which usually seem to be set in the past. I really like the futuristic tone and I could picture it all so vividly as I read it. I love your Tom in this too--so headstrong and sure of himself. I can't wait for him to meet Bill. ^.^
Author's Response: I am so excited and nervous to share this! *flails madly* It's really not the kind of slave fic that most people will be expecting, not to mention there are some big twists, but I wrote the story that I wanted to write. ♥ I am happy to hear the detail is coming through well. And yes, Tom is pretty headstrong and has his own ideas about how things should be! Thank you and I hope you continue to enjoy!!
Date: 06/30/10 11:12 pm Title: 1: The Golden Spire
i can't wait to read more i love your fics, they are sooooooooooooooooooggggggggggooooooooooooooooooooooooodddddddddddd! please update soon.
Author's Response: Aww, thank you, that makes me really happy to hear it! Hope you continue to enjoy this one. :D
Date: 06/30/10 11:12 pm Title: 1: The Golden Spire
Seems good ^^
I can't wait to read more
Author's Response: Thank you, I hope you continue to enjoy it! :D
Date: 06/30/10 11:06 pm Title: 1: The Golden Spire
Oh I love the drawing on the banner! Umetnica is so amazingly talented!
I am sooooo excited for this story!! I lovelovelove slave!Bill stories, I can't even begin to describe how much I'm looking forward to reading more! Would it be bad to ask for more updates in a week than just two? -puppy face- Pwease?? XD
I adore your writing and this first chapter has left me wanting more as soon as possible!!
Author's Response: Isn't she amazing?? I knew from the start that I wanted her art to introduce the story, so I commissioned her. :D
I really hope you continue to enjoy this! We'll see...as things pick up a bit more, and I finish another story, I may be able to bump it up to three updates a week.
Thank you so much, that's wonderful to hear!
Date: 06/30/10 11:02 pm Title: 1: The Golden Spire
me parece interesante para leer y ya quiero saber cómo es q Tom y Bill se conocerán.... actualiza pronto... me gustó el capi =)
Saluditos!!
Author's Response: Thank you, I am glad it got your interest! I hope you continue to enjoy it...and Tom and Bill will meet very soon! Thanks for your review.
Date: 06/30/10 10:59 pm Title: 1: The Golden Spire
Oh Tomi, famous last words... So much love for this!
Author's Response: That HAD to be where I left off the chapter. ;) I definitely wanted to give people that "famous last words" feel. Thank you so much for all your love for this story! ♥ ♥ ♥
Date: 06/30/10 10:57 pm Title: 1: The Golden Spire
Very interesting start! And very intriguing, as well. I'm curious to learn more of this world you're creating and how will it play out. I like this Tom, so very different from his father and self-assured enough to talk back at him regarding issues like slavery and such. I'll be looking forward to more!
Author's Response: I'm glad to catch your interest so early! :D Ah, the world-building on this one was so much fun, I love it. Tom is definitely his own person, on the cusp of manhood! Thank you so much. :3
Date: 06/30/10 10:55 pm Title: 1: The Golden Spire
OMG you are a freaking genius with this genre. Soooo amazing, so realistic, great detail and touches. :) it's fantastic!
Author's Response: Thank you, so much! I really hope you continue to enjoy the story. I'm glad to hear the detail and realism came through, I appreciate your review!
Date: 06/30/10 10:50 pm Title: 1: The Golden Spire
Nice first opening.
I ADORE slave fics! And twincest & Billshido.. this is going to end up becoming something I will totally cherish. Do continue...
The chapter was a great first one, and I love the period piece to it. Can't wait for Bushido to put interest in Bill. (:
I already fell in love with it ;3
Will there be much abuse and fun torture?< 3333 b/c that is love ;)
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed the opening! This is not your typical slave fic and I hope you continue to enjoy it as things change throughout the story... :x I am actually really nervous about posting this. And Bushido will not be shy about putting forth his interest!
I'm glad you're in love with it but as for those two warnings, they will not be making an appearance in my story. ;D
Date: 06/30/10 10:50 pm Title: 1: The Golden Spire
Woot Woot! I'm so excited for this new story! I love it already, such an interesting first chapter! I can't wait to see where you'll take this! I must say that the banner is absolutely gorgeous! SO well done!
I really like how the stories you're posting at the moment are so different from each others! That's probably why I don't think it's overwhelming at all, at least in my opinion :D
Can't wait for the next chapter to read about Bill's side of things !
Author's Response: I am so excited to share this story, I really love it! Thank you so much, and I hope you continue to enjoy it. Yes, this story is SOOO different, I really hope I don't lose a lot of people. :B Glad it doesn't seem overwhelming to you!
Date: 06/30/10 10:44 pm Title: 1: The Golden Spire
The banner is BEAUTIFUL! *loves*
Author's Response: Didn't she do a fabulous job? I think it really captures a certain moment. ;)