Date: 05/22/11 08:22 am Title: Freedom
Really good! Wow I love the plot and it is also very well written. Throughout the story I needed to check the dictionary more than ever (since English is not my mother tongue), but that is a good thing! It payed off, I'm so glad I read it! thank you :)
Author's Response: Thank you so, so much! I'm really happy you loved it and thought it was well written. ♥ Thanks for reading my story and letting me know what you think about it. :)
Date: 05/15/11 11:42 pm Title: Freedom
wonderful! awesome story, loved bushido and gustav and georg and, well, everyone! thank you so much.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm really happy you thought it was awesome and that you loved everyone. :D
Date: 05/09/11 05:04 am Title: Repossession
Cant even blink! I keep my eyes glued on the screen, cannot review in this state. Im so taken with this...
Author's Response: I'm so glad you're riveted! :D
Date: 05/08/11 02:28 pm Title: 8: Fitting the Key to the Lock
Sorry, I didnt have time to leave a proper review, but I wanted to express myself a bit...
You managed to drag me again in one of your stories, as busy as I am these days. I cant avoid you. Who cares about a little lack of sleep...
I absolutely loved the way you wrote Bill in this, restrained and bold. A very rare combination. You managed to drag me into their love story like I was there, like I was one of them!!! Again I have to praise you for the talent of showing everything just like in a movie, I see exactly what you describe, places and people.
And I thought Im gonna hate you for giving Bill to Bushido. I wonder why everybody is depicting him in stories nicer than I see him in real live. For marketing purposes, maybe!!! I cant wait to see if he is closer to what I imagine, in this story.
I know this is a finished story and it pleases me to no end, to be able to read in my own time, when it suits me, as I have so little time.
You have a very interesting storyline here, I will review more after a a few chapters.
Ah, and the *oh* was for the love scene...Why am I telling you this, you probably knew...?
Lovely.
Author's Response: I'm really glad this story is so powerful for you! *_* I had a very definite idea for how Bill ought to be in this story and I'm really proud of how he turned out! So glad you have been drawn so deeply into their love story!
I think a lot of people have a higher opinion of Bushido than he deserves, really. :/ He'll never be better than a villain in mine.
Thank you so much for the lovely long review!
Date: 05/08/11 08:01 am Title: All His Firsts
Oh. Oh!
Author's Response: *inquiring look*
Date: 04/17/11 07:26 am Title: 1: The Golden Spire
LOL I needed to clarify something. I said the twins were RUNning my life not RUINing it hahaha. They cannot ruin it cos they make me too happy lol.
And I loooooooove BPAL! The Lupercalia update is always my favourite ;-)
Author's Response: Oh well yes! Yes indeed! The twins are running my life too. ;) And it's a good one.
Oh yes! I love them so much but I'm trying to, er, love what I have right now rather than buying new. I refuse to let myself buy a SECOND perfume chest.
Date: 04/11/11 07:32 am Title: Freedom
Something I can totally get behind! Do they need a lawyer? I'd be happy to offer my services ;-)
"Nagging wife vertically, docile partner horizontally, huh?"
I read that line to my husband and he cocked his eyebrow and said "Docile? Docile? When have you EVER been docile? I bloody wish..."
Hah! I can be docile... I'm gonna be docile tonight ;-) Docile doesn't mean wet fish lol.
You're right, not your typical slave fic. I loved it!!!!!!!!!!! Love!!!!!!
MmMmMmmmmmmm... I'm totally going to bed happy and i'm gonna rock my talk tomorrow! Send me good vibes when you see this! :D
Author's Response: They definitely need a lawyer, someone loyal and sympathetic to their cause. ;)
Oh Bill totally is. At least in this fic for sure. Possibly some others... >_>
Hahaha! Docile simply in the being completely amenable to anything Tom wants in bed, really! Eager and pliant and very much willing to please.
Docile DEFINITELY does not mean wet fish.
I am so glad you loved this slave fic! First, Bill's freedom...next, the rest of society!
Whoo!! I hope you rocked your talk! Sorry my review responses took so long. :)
Date: 04/11/11 07:21 am Title: Coming Home
I'm a wibbly mess. Somewhat incoherent too can you tell? No more rambling!
Author's Response: Hee. Sorry about rendering you incoherent! But flattered that I did!
Date: 04/11/11 07:15 am Title: The Truth that Sets Free
*still crying*
Author's Response: Aww...there, there. ♥
Date: 04/11/11 07:10 am Title: Gathering Allies
*cries*
Author's Response: ;____;
Date: 04/11/11 07:06 am Title: Repossession
Ok so I failed in my quest to not rush through this. I am rushing and only because i'm getting too clenchy and I just NEED TO KNOW it ends well. Need! Agh! Friggin' twins are running my life right now lol.
Author's Response: Hehe! That just means I did an effective job. ;) But sorry they're ruining your life! Eep!
Date: 04/11/11 07:01 am Title: The Truth that Divides
My tummy is getting clenchy!!!
Author's Response: Awww I'm sorry! ♥
Date: 04/11/11 06:57 am Title: Last
Can I skip the next chapter? Even the smut is not enough to get rid of the heart sick feeling. I'm sure it ends well. I have to believe that lol. Otherwise you're absolutely going to make me cry and that would suck because i'd be morose tomorrow and will do a crap job while trying to convince a bunch of suits that we need prison reform and greater rights for refugees!
I could always watch videos of the twins beforehand hmmm.. That should cheer me up. Or read that Whumping story of yours *giggle*
Author's Response: :((( I believe in happy endings for twins! But yes, watching videos of happy twins is definitely a good idea. ♥
Date: 04/11/11 06:39 am Title: Cut Off
Again i'm thankful I got into the fics so late. I'm the impatient sort! I am going to admit I kinda skim read this chapter because it was just too painful to see Tom having to beg.
Author's Response: Yeah, you're lucky you didn't have to wait for it! ;) And, definitely poor Tom. We know he'd do anything for love, though. ♥
Date: 04/11/11 06:32 am Title: Passing the Luck
Sigh... Guess reality works its way into fiction :( Poor Tomi. I know he needs a hug.
Author's Response: He definitely needs a hug there. :( And someone to tell him it's going to be okay.
Date: 04/11/11 06:26 am Title: Gambling Connections
Gambling never ends well as far as I have seen as i've done work with problem gambling associations. I'm hoping you'll prove me wrong!
I'm giving myself till midnight but i'm not gonna rush it! Plus i'm also doing work lol... So that gives me 1 hour and 35 mins left of reading!
Starting to get butterflies in my tummy due to anticipation!
Author's Response: Yeah, I don't gamble, I just...don't see the point of sinking money into something that has no guaranteed return!
Rationing yourself, very smart! ;) But oh no, not the butterflies!
Date: 04/11/11 06:11 am Title: Dinner Date
Gah! I wanna sic lawyers on Jorg lol. Sigh... I have a horrid feeling I won't be able to finish this tonight. I have a conference tomorrow and i'm speaking on prison reform and refugee rights and I need to get proper sleep otherwise i'd be totally scatterbrained like I was this morning :( Sucks!
Author's Response: He richly deserves it! Aww, drat the prison reform but...but that's a really important topic! D:
Date: 04/11/11 05:58 am Title: 11: Coping Methods and Confessions
*waves from puddle on the floor*
Author's Response: Bit of a turn-on for them and you too, huh? ;)
Date: 04/11/11 05:21 am Title: 10: Frozen
You haven't lost me *hug* My dad froze my accounts and assets too when I left home. I had to emancipate myself and all that stupid shit and had to fight to get my money back so yea, I can totally identify with Tom right now. I managed to sort myself out even though it took years for me to forgive my dad. I hope Tom figures something out. I would hate for Bushido to get his grimy oily hands on Bill!!!
They're brothers? The plot thickens!
Oh man I just saw a video of Bill in 2009 singing Breakaway to Tom and Tom's smirk at Bill is just... unnnnggggghh.
Author's Response: Thank you! Seriously though, I did lose about half the reviewers for this baby. They realized there wasn't going to be Bill/Bushido I think. >_> And Tom did his very best! He just happened to be outgunned and outfoxed.
Yep yep! A bit of a pivotal plot point. ;)
I looooooove when they smirk at each other. *_*
Date: 04/11/11 05:03 am Title: 9: Morning Breaks
Dang parents. I left home when I was 16. Best decision I ever made! Now I live in a whole other continent and get along famously with all of my family. If I was still living with them, I think I would have murdered someone by now.
"Bill could only convulse down on Tom and come with a joyful shriek about five thrusts into their second sexual encounter. Luckily, Tom only lasted about five more."
And I take back my cock envy comment lol. I'll take multiple orgasms any day ;-) That particular bit above really made me grin. It's so cute!
I want it to be all sunshine, roses and morning tumbles *pout* I am somewhat ready for a rollercoaster ride but it's still making me a little anxious. And I absolutely adore rollercoasters in real life so I don't know why i'm anxious.
Have you noticed I tend to ramble a lot in my reviews for your fics?
Author's Response: But it took leaving them to get along, I bet. ;) Yeah, I live half the way and all the way across from my two parents, and I'm fine with that.
Hehe, those cute little boys. ;) At least their refractory period is shorter to compensate!
No worries, that's half the fun.