Date: 12/15/12 12:32 pm Title: The Bewitching Hour
I'm reading this again... Update please u.u why u no update?!! I love this story <3
Date: 04/24/12 10:10 pm Title: The Bewitching Hour
Yikes. At least they have each other now...
Author's Response: Yes! Hopefully together they can make it through okay ;)
Date: 04/24/12 10:02 pm Title: Small Hours
God, that was brutal.
Author's Response: Yeah..... Scares me a bit to know that it came from my own head.... Thank you for the review!!
Date: 03/26/12 05:06 am Title: The Bewitching Hour
Wow. I expected all sorts of entrances for Tom but not this one.
Author's Response: I am glad to have surprised you ;) Thank you for the review!!
Date: 03/25/12 10:26 pm Title: The Bewitching Hour
I honestly thought Tom was going to be one of the boys from Bushido's 'flashbacks'. You definitely surprised me, that's for sure!
This is a really interesting story so far. I am really looking forward to seeing what's going to happen next! =]
Author's Response: You know, someone else brought that up, and I can say that the idea never crossed my mind while I was drafting... It is a very good one, though! I am glad I could surprise you despite that, though :)
Thank you!! Hopefully I can keep keep you interested until the end ;)
Date: 03/25/12 04:22 pm Title: The Bewitching Hour
Yay! You updated, after what? Almost a year! I must say, I didn't think Tom was gonna be introduced into the story like that! My mind went everywhere but that! TOM! D: Why did he take Tom?! ;~; Now, how did Bushido knew Bills name? Since he never mentioned it. I also noticed in the story you had (Awkward sentence) in there, is that suppose to be there? But yeah, I'm just glad you updated!
Author's Response: Oh, I know! I am so sorry, time just got away from me (11 months of it, apparently). Great! I am glad that it was unexpected! Hopefully the next few chapters will be equally so ;)
You know what, I was getting ahead of myself with that one! Thanks for catching that. And oh wow, I cannot believe that I left my editing notes in the story xD No more writing for me at 4am... Thank you so much for catching those things and your review! I swear the next update will not take nearly as long and will be up by mid May!
Date: 03/25/12 12:45 pm Title: The Bewitching Hour
You updated! I was starting to lose hope.
Well - wow. I was not expecting this, not at all. Hmm, I'm really curious to see where you take this! Great writing as always, you don't sugar-coat things but it doesn't read out like something out of a cheap horror story, either, well done. I'll be eagerly awaiting the next chapter!
Author's Response: I know! Honestly, I was too after having waited for so long, so I do apologize.
Great! It's my goal to keep everyone guessing until the very end, so I am glad that the story is holding up do far. And thank you so much, I really do appreciate that. It makes me so happy to know that you like this story and want to keep reading.
I swear you will not have to wait nearly as long this time! I will have the next chapter up by mid May at the latest!
Date: 03/25/12 09:20 am Title: The Bewitching Hour
Aw, Tom's entrance is pretty different from what I imagined: indeed it's a billion times better!!
I'll wait for your new chapter, to see how things are going to turn out :)
Author's Response: Awesome!! I'm glad that it was a bit unexpected, and that you liked it!
Thank you! You should not have too wait too long, for at the latest I will have chapter 10 up by mid May :)
Date: 03/25/12 08:41 am Title: Small Hours
Sooo, I liked this chapter (at least, I'm not hungry anymore.. hehe), it's amazing, as always :)
1. Bill will be Bushido's (sex) slave!
2. Tom -Bushido's friend- will discoer Bill in a dark room, in a house, while Bushido would be away ?
Author's Response: Thanks!! (haha that's good :) )
1. Perhaps ;)
2. I did think about that option, but I got hung up on how the rest of the story would play out in that circumstance... Good go, though!
Date: 03/25/12 06:56 am Title: Working Stiff
Yay, I like the new characters!
Your story is really well-written (I keep on saying htis but I can't help it, sorry).
Next chapter, here I am!
Author's Response: Wow, I am so stupid, I meant to say "on your toes" in the last response :P
Thank you so much!! No, no, I really appreciate it! Thank you! Haha, I'm glad you like the new characters, I was a bit nervous introducing them so suddenly.
Date: 03/25/12 06:38 am Title: Black Mass
Wow! Well, wow! I think that's all I can think about. You really maintained the suspense (I literally fell of my chair when someone knocked on my door..)
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad that I can keep you on toes!
Date: 03/25/12 06:04 am Title: In the Dead of Night
This chapter is truly amazing! You're talented :)
By the way, I wanted to ask you something... I wondered if you'd let me translate your story into french, because most of french people suck at english and this story is too awesome not to be read...
Anyway, I'm going to read the next chapter, right now!
Author's Response: Oh wow, I would be honored!! I would love it more than anything if this story were translated! I would only ask that you send me a link to wherever you post it so that I can put it in the summary :) Thank you so much!
Date: 03/24/12 06:52 pm Title: The Bewitching Hour
.......
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 03/24/12 03:10 pm Title: The Bewitching Hour
LOL Tom! really?
Anyway I can't believe I never saw this story before!!! It's so damn perfect.
Poor Bill, but it's so much fun when bad things happen to him >:D I just love it , and this story is also perfecty written, damn it's like a movie , that's why I'm so sad right now!! I CAN'T WAIT FOR NEXT CHAPI :O I think Bill n Tom will be friends in next chapi, will Bushido rape Bill in front of Tom? It would be awesome :D
Please update soon :3 I want to read so much more of your amazing story, I'm adding it to my faw stories. ^^
Author's Response: Haha, of course! What is Bill without Tom? ;D
Thank you so much! That really means a lot to me
I must agree with you there. It makes the happier things (when they do occur) that much sweeter. And I can't say, but as the next few chapters play out we'll see.
Thank you!!! Thank you so much for your reviews, they have made my past couple of days! Unfortunately, the update will not be for a little while, but I will have it up no later than the middle of May.
Date: 03/24/12 03:02 pm Title: The Bewitching Hour
Interesting story, but I love Bushido, and he's so mean to Bill, and Bill is suffering a lot... but I hope Bu sees how amazing is this beautiful boy, right? or maybe Bill is going to develop Stockholm syndrome?
Author's Response: Thank you! I am glad that you like it so far!
It is a bit disturbing, the things that Bill endures, but even despite all of those things, not all stories have happy endings... We will see though :)
Date: 03/24/12 02:44 pm Title: Small Hours
just wow , the nail part was soooo bad even for me x3 I felt it O.O not that I didn't like it :D you are really good! more rape? lol I'm sick xD
Author's Response: Haha, good to know I can still pull out some good ones, because this story has quite a few more chapters in it. Ahhh, I did too, while I was writing it... My fingers still ache if I think about.
Thank you so much!! I am really glad that you like the story so far! Haha, I can't say, but the story is not over yet :3
Date: 03/24/12 11:28 am Title: Working Stiff
srsly U killed all characters x3 new ppl is good. rape next chapi? *-*
Author's Response: Essentially.... Exactly though, more people to freshen things up :D
Haha, can't say! ;)
Date: 03/24/12 11:12 am Title: Black Mass
Bushido is so sick :O will he rape Bill? gonna read next chapi >:D
Author's Response: Haha, I know, I love that guy. Can't say! You will have to keep reading ;)
Date: 03/24/12 10:29 am Title: In the Dead of Night
OMG O.O poor twins
Author's Response: Ugh, I know! They were my favorite characters to write!
Date: 03/23/12 01:22 pm Title: The Bewitching Hour
yay Tomi but i'm scared :( Maybe together they can get out of this? I hope they do anyway... poor Bill has already been through so so much mentaly and physicaly... I hope he can hold on through this. I know traditionally Tom would save the day... i hope its true this time too.
Author's Response:
Yes, yay Tom! You are right, traditionally Tom would save the day and Bill from his suffering, however I don't think this story will play out so traditionally...
I do agree, though. I hope that they can hold on just long enough... ;)
Thank you so much for your review!! I love the speculation!