Date: 11/19/10 02:51 am Title: In the Dead of Night
i always look forward to your updates. this story is so twisted and captivating! i can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Aww, that just made my week! Thank you! I am so glad that you like it *feels all warm and fuzzy inside now*
Date: 11/17/10 11:02 pm Title: In the Dead of Night
geez. gruesome and brutal. i'm glad a this point everyone is dead so that the story can move forward. well written though. thanks for the update, i look forward to the next one.
Author's Response: Haha! That is kind of how I feel as well, so it is funny that you say that XD Thanks! The next chap will be up soon
Date: 11/16/10 11:02 pm Title: Going Back Home
I know :[
Date: 11/16/10 07:37 pm Title: In the Dead of Night
I knew that was gonna happen but still it was sad to read! Whats going to happen to Bill now? Bill must have woken up by now!
Author's Response: Hehe, Bill will be in the next chapter~
Date: 11/16/10 05:50 pm Title: In the Dead of Night
:O *tries to go save the twins*
Author's Response: Whoops, it might be a bit late for that XC
Date: 09/11/10 03:09 am Title: Midnight
Third chapter and Andreas is already a dead duck. Is it a normal home invasion? Is Bushido a serial killer? So far so good. Interested on where this is going.
Author's Response: Yes, he sure is. As for everything else, I can't really answer, you'll have to keep reading ;D
Thank you! I am really glad that you like it so far!! Thanks for the review!
Date: 09/07/10 10:08 pm Title: Midnight
definitely confused, but eagerly awaiting more. =)
Author's Response: Hehe, that was kind of the point. XD Hopefully you won't stay too confused for long, because a lot of important things should play out in the next few chapters that will (hopefully) alleviate most/some confusion.
Thank you so much for the review!!
Date: 09/06/10 05:48 pm Title: Midnight
This is amazing! You write so beautifully and so smoothly and this fic just keeps on getting better and better and better. Soon it'll be too awesome for my soul to handle that I'll just explode and die.
But die happily.
I don't understand how this fic doesn't have hundreds of reviews yet. Probably because most readers like fluff. .___. But PFFT I love this!!
*hugs you and lifts you up ten inches from the ground*
--Jilly-boop
[PS. MORE!!}
Author's Response: X3333 Thank you!!! God, I can't believe you like it, I always feel like this fic is going to be the death of me and I'm always trying to fix things last minute *nervous* 0_0 Don't die! I'd be devastated! *hyperventilating*
Haha, I wish it had more, but oh well, I'm just glad for all the ones I've gotten so far *brimming with happiness* Hehe, yeah, most do. I think I'm one of those fluffy people too XD
Haha, I doubt you could lift me that high, I'm about as tall as you are XD Thank you so much for reviewing!!! *loves*
Date: 09/06/10 03:37 pm Title: Midnight
Andreas?!?!? I'm confused but I think it's intentional.
This chapter leaves an opening for tons of drama to happen. O_O
Bushido.. woah.. IDK what to say. D;
So no Bill in this chapter?
Hmm... I first thought Andreas was Bill then was like.. wait.. in the car?
Interesting plot! :O I LOVE.
Continue Andra. :333
Love it.
Author's Response: XD yup! Don't worry, it will all play out as the story goes on.
rnOh yeah *evil grin* I am so excited to put up the next chapter, because it really sets the stage for the rest of the story (unless I cut it again...lol)
rnNope, no Bill in this one. I was going to write him in, but it would have ended up being really stupid or it would have completely reversed what I have for the rest of the story, and that would have been bad.
rnHehe, nope that was definitely Andreas. If you remember from, I want to say, chapter 2 (?) Bill fell asleep in the office *whispers* That's important for later
rnWow, that was a stupidly long reply, sorry XD Thank you so much for reviewing!!
Date: 09/06/10 02:24 pm Title: Midnight
Confuuuused......But it was still good :D
Author's Response: XD yeah, this chapter (...well I guess the whole fic) is a bit strange. It will definitely make a lot more sense as it goes on. If you want me to explain something or if you have questions, feel free to e-mail me, I think I have it up on my account. Thank you very much for the review!!
Date: 09/06/10 01:31 am Title: Going Back Home
Guess who's tracking this!!!! I am. I love it so far. *starry eyes*
Author's Response: 0^0 really? Sweet! *dances* I am a super happy camper now XD
Date: 08/08/10 03:20 am Title: Nightfall
woah mysterious chapter.. I don't know how to explain it! Very beautifully written and so lovely. You do nicely with descriptions. I cannot wait for the next chapter. This is a great fic...
I'm assuming it is Bushido?
The dream is suspicious...
Update ~:D
~your friend,
Cherry
Author's Response: *dies* Really? Thank you! I am always afraid that my writing is utterly ridiculous, so I do not think well of it. *dies again of happiness*
rnCan't say, but you will know within a couple sentences of the next chap XD
rn...yeah, I don't know where it came from and I still don't really get it myself, which doesn't say much for me, considering I wrote it...
rn
Will do! *salutes*
rn
With love,
rn~Andraiyel
Date: 08/08/10 02:50 am Title: Dusk
SHIT I already reviewed by THF died on me.. Let me try to restate.
It was very enjoyable for sure. Really liked it...
So.. we have twins, Bushido, tired Bill.. random Andreas.. err...
The introduction of Bushido was nothing like I had thought. But it was so appealing and WOW. I loved the little convo with Hanson, and the 'beaut' was like wtf? XD Do people even say this anymore? When Bushido said the twin's name i was like o.O "STALKER!"
This has so much potential I am really enjoying it.
Wonder how Bill's & Bushido's relationship will come into place.
Hugey chapter.
Lovely fic.
Author's Response: I hate it when that happens, it is not even funny totally kills my mood when it does, bleh.
rn
Lol, yes, that is pretty much the summary of the characters so far. *wiggles eyebrows* might change though... *shrugs*
rn
Really? How did you think he was going to be introduced? Hehe, and yes, people still say 'beaut' occasionally. Not very often though, I only know older men that say that, and usually it is referring to their RVs, boats, or other things of the like... It is really weird...
rnI know! It was a passing thought to include it and it kinda creeped me out, but I liked it XD
rnThank you so much for reviewing, you have no idea how much I appreciate it, really.
Date: 08/08/10 02:30 am Title: Going Back Home
I totally pictured Andreas's voice all flat and Bill's all HIGH and HAPPY when he asks about the vacation thing. XD
This is interesting, has potential...
will read on.
Author's Response: XD That is exactly how I pictured it when I was writing it and is what I tried to convey
rnI am really glad that you like it so far and will continue reading it, I love the feedback, it helps with writing
Date: 07/31/10 03:36 am Title: Nightfall
You are the queen of descriptions, Andra XD I love your colorful vocabulary (and we're not talking about curses here) and the witty use of words. in short, I very much like your writing style. It is something I wish I could have for myself instead of that *mumbles something unpleasant about own writing*x3
It's full of suspense!! I absolutely absolutely adore your story!! I can't wait for Progression already! XDD
--Jilly-boop
Author's Response: XD Thanks! Hehe, I can be colorful there as well, although I don't think that is a good thing. Aww, thank you! I'm always afraid that people won't like the way I write, because I don't really enjoy it myself...
rn
Thank you so much, Jilly! *hugs* XD I am not even excited to write that story so much as I am to just put up your banner for it *can't wait*
Date: 07/31/10 01:55 am Title: Nightfall
still really waiting to see what this is about really. but i'm enjoying trying to figure it out. looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Hehe, yes, it is a bit, um, slow to start? Yeah, I think that is right right phrase XD This was supposed to be where it picks up, but I had to split the chapter because of the length, so the next one. Aww, I am really glad that you like it so far! Thank you!
Date: 07/30/10 08:40 pm Title: Nightfall
I LOVE IT!!!
Author's Response: Really? Thank you! X3 It makes me so happy you like it so far!
Date: 07/16/10 05:36 am Title: Dusk
hmmm.this has lots of potential, i am looking forward to seeing where you take it. =)
Author's Response: Aww, thank you! I sure hope it ends up being good, otherwise I will be really disappointed. I'll try and update as soon as I can, hope you keep reading!
Date: 07/16/10 04:00 am Title: Dusk
Not bad but I'm feeling like Bu'll be, once again, the bad guy in here and I don't really like that too much.
Now, about the gore thing, I like to write it and read it, but you gotta be careful with descriptions, if you not you'll end up with scenes very crappy-horror-movie-like.
Author's Response: I can understand what you mean by that, because that is where he tends to be overwritten, yes, but if any other character had fit the role I need him to play, then I would have used them. I like Bushido as much as the next person, I listen to all his music; he is one of my idols, so in no way do I mean to offend anyone by the role that I am writing him into. Honestly, I have been thinking of trying to remake the role so that Gustav or Georg or someone else can fit it better, but it just never worked out that way, so...
rn
Yeeeah. That is what I am working on at the moment, making it as realistic and not cheap-budget-horror-movie as I can XD I really hope that doesn't happen, but thanks for the heads up anyways. I hope you keep reading :)
Date: 07/16/10 01:53 am Title: Dusk
Is Shido the bad guy? He can't be the bad guy... he's too cute ;) I really am looking forward to chapter three, even if I'm planning on skipping the bloody stuff :D
Author's Response: >.> Hehe, well I can't really say yet, but maybe *shrugs*
*loves* Thanks candy!!! XD