Date: 03/23/12 11:50 am Title: Midnight
Naaaah, why did he die?! *cries*
Anyway. This chapter is really interesting, I liked the way you're writing, you do not say too much or not enough!
Author's Response:
I swear it was a necessary death! I will admit, though, I do miss him.
Haha, I always think I am writing too much, so thank you!! Thanks so much for the reviews!!
Date: 03/23/12 11:26 am Title: Nightfall
Well, well, what can I say? You created a really dark atmosphere (I don't know how to say it, really...) but that makes your chapter soooo great!
Author's Response:
Haha, thanks!! I totally understand what you are trying to say, and I am glad that you think so, because I was really trying with this one! This chapter is essentially setting the stage for everything else down the road :)
Date: 03/23/12 10:51 am Title: Dusk
This chapter is good, in my opinion (especially the end!) I really liked how you're describing places, and actions. I can't wait to read more.
I'll write a review on your next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you! Oddly enough, I think this might be my favorite chapter thus far, haha. I am really glad that you like it!!
Date: 03/23/12 10:34 am Title: Going Back Home
I liked this chapter, you really deserve more readers and/or reviews. I think it's really well written...
I'm now going to read your second chapter!
Author's Response:
Aw, thank you so much, I really appreciate that you think so! It makes me really happy to know that the story is appreciated. I am grateful for every single read/review, because even if there are not many, it shows that there are still a few people who are interested ;)
Date: 07/12/11 09:34 am Title: Small Hours
1. awful thongs i gather. seems like peole here like to read about his sufferings which is kinda perplexing
2. i`m at a loss about this one, i thought first he would be one of the detectives, now i`m not sure..
3. great story all in all, i hope you don`t abandon it, it deserves to be finished. xx
Author's Response: 1. It seems so, but I tend to find people actually don't. I personally don't, but then I go and write about them...
2. Well then, hopefully I can surprise you yet ;)
3. Thank you very much! I definitely will not abandon this story, it is just taking a bit to get the next chapter right.
Date: 07/12/11 08:52 am Title: Working Stiff
this is a gorgeous story. all these carefully crafted details, the unhurried, rolling way in which it unfolds.. totally mesmerizing.
Author's Response: Thank you very much!! Your review is far too kind and I greatly appreciate that you like it; it makes me happy that I haven't scared everyone away :)
Date: 06/01/11 02:18 pm Title: Small Hours
I feel so bad for Bill. I thought Bushido was gonna throw Bill out, laying on the side of the road after being beat up. But so far not. As for Tom, I have no idea how he is gonna make his appreance! Is Tom good? Is he gonna save Bill? Gah! I dont know! But now to wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: I was toying with that idea, actually, but I think what I've got in store everyone will like better ;)
I can't say, but Tom is coming in either this next chapter or the one right after. Thank you very much for reading and reviewing, the next chapter will be up soon!
Date: 04/08/11 08:36 pm Title: Small Hours
also, i really wish this fic got more attention. it really deserves it.
Author's Response: Awww, thank you so much for that! Maybe one day it will, but I am proud of where this story has gotten so far, so if it does or not, only time (and you readers) will tell. And seeing your reviews made my night :3 Thank you!!
Date: 04/08/11 08:34 pm Title: Small Hours
absolutely horrifying but wonderfully written. i feel so bad for bill! i hope that whenever tom makes his grand entrance it will be in bill's favor...
Author's Response: Thank you! I am glad on both counts :D
I feel badly for Bill as well and I think that a lot of people are hoping for Tom to come in and save him as well, but I cannot yet guarantee that is what is going to happen ;) He will be in soon.
Date: 04/04/11 12:20 pm Title: Small Hours
Wow, that was harsh. I actually have a really hard time with disfigurement. I can deal with violence, death and non-con, but anything that could leave a permanent mark really squicks me out. It's an excellent story, and I'm really curious about where you're taking this - but if this goes on, I'm afraid I might have to stop reading. It's really hard to concentrate on the plot when all I can think about is "his face! his beautiful face!" kinda shallow of me, maybe. Great chapter nonetheless.
Author's Response: Sorry about that, I think perhaps I wrote it a bit worse than I actually meant to; because, yeah, there will be scars, that is fairly unavoidable - but I did not mean for it to seem like he was permanently disfigured, sorry. I completely understand where you are coming from with that, it is a bit much. I really appreciate your input, and I'll try to keep that in check with the rest of the story :) I am really glad that you liked it other than that!
Date: 02/07/11 08:16 am Title: Working Stiff
This chapter was amazing! I always love a switch of pov, and this read like a scene out of criminal minds or something, it was awesome. I was worried for a bit that they'd think Bill was the murderer when they discover he's not one of the bodies - but now that Georg found the "extra" blood I hope it'll put them on the right track. Can't wait to see where you take this!
Author's Response: X3 Thank you! I am glad that you liked it! I was a bit worried for this one, didn't know if it was too boring or slow, given everything else that's happened so far :/
Hehe, ah yes, that is still a possibility, though at this point anything could happen - but it is definitely key that Georg found that knife... We'll see ;)
Date: 02/02/11 04:56 pm Title: Working Stiff
can'ttt waittt!
Author's Response: Hehe, the update will be soon!
Date: 02/01/11 02:33 am Title: Working Stiff
Thanks for the great update!
Author's Response: You are very welcome! Thanks for the r&r! x3
Date: 02/01/11 01:16 am Title: Working Stiff
i hope this is updated soon, because this is a really cool fic. i have been waiting for updates for weeks, thats how much this story has me hooked. plz continue
Author's Response: x3 Oh wow, I am really glad that you like it so much! I'm sorry that the updates are so infrequent, I am really horrible at that :( I will most definitely continue though and am working on the chap8 now!
Date: 01/09/11 01:05 pm Title: In the Dead of Night
That is so wrong. :(
Author's Response: Hmm, you think so? What in particular?
Date: 01/09/11 03:29 am Title: Black Mass
This chapter was intense. The build up of Bill being alone in the house and not knowing what was going on but knowing something was in there with him was actually scary.
Author's Response: Oh, you thought so? Good! I was hoping it would have that effect, but I was not quite sure... I am really glad that you liked it! Thank you for the r&r!!
Date: 01/08/11 10:11 am Title: Black Mass
Very intriguing so far! I'm curious as to what comes next.
Author's Response: I'm glad that you liked it! Thanks for the r&r!
Date: 01/08/11 05:51 am Title: Black Mass
you are just too good with suspense, i don't even know what else to say! i am literally breathless now from holding my breath for so long. seriously, WOW! your writing is incredible.
Author's Response: Awww, thank you so much! I am glad you liked it!
Date: 01/08/11 03:21 am Title: Black Mass
God I can not wait to read the next chapter! I love your story since it has wonderfully long chapters :3 I was wondering how Bill was finally gonna react to his whole family being killed. God that is just sad. I was like reading this as fast as I could and shaking away! Now that I'm reading I want Bill to be okay :'(
Author's Response: Thank you! Phew, I am glad you like the long chapters, because this one I was especially worried about. Mmm, yeah, that section was a bit difficult to write and why it was a bit shorter than everything else, his reaction to the death of his family. It is hard to try and picture something like that happening, even though it happens so often in life, which is horrendously sad. Awww, I will make sure to have the next chapter done soon! And thank you very much for your review!
Date: 01/08/11 02:32 am Title: Black Mass
wow. God Bill, you almost made it. If you had just stayed hidden and then left after he set the fire...I'm very scared for Bill. Thanks for the update!!
Author's Response: First review of the chapter! Ah, yeah, that probably would have been the smarter move on Bill's part. To be honest, I am a bit scared for Bill as well...
Thank you for the review!