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Reviewer: buddy_c22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/23/10 06:42 pm Title: "Do you think I'm beautiful?"

WHY HELLO :D
Homework answer: OF COURSE THIS "BILL" IS NOT REAL. He's in my basement, screwing me or looking after a portion of my babies. This "Bill" is therefore a hologram like Natalie or a figmant of Tom's imagination. Cuz Tom is on drugs.

OMFG, tesco, edward cullen, vibrator drawer - this chapter had it all! I FACKING LOVE YOU LAURIE!

No twin sex? NO TWIN SEX? -throws hammer-

Okay, diva fit has passed. Sorry the review's not as long, I should be sleeping, I leave for the most exotic place ever early tomorrow.

Yer. WALES.

:O :D

Reviewer: Sieren Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/23/10 06:38 pm Title: "Do you think I'm beautiful?"

i dont think Bill is for real

Reviewer: Daissa Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/23/10 04:58 pm Title: "Do you think I'm beautiful?"

Lol, the last like half of the chapter is in italics.

This was a great chapter! I like it when the plot progresses.

Reviewer: SquishyDuck Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/23/10 04:18 pm Title: "Do you think I'm beautiful?"

lauri, wither you forgot to close your italics or the site is fucking up...

Reviewer: Afri_Angel Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/23/10 01:14 pm Title: "Do you think I'm beautiful?"

Wow, what are the chances that Tom might really fall for Bill before Bill feel for him?...cause it looks like Tom like the new Bill a little to much.
I love this chapter a lot and i can't wait for the next chapter, and plz. post it soon!!
^_^

Reviewer: Bekah Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/23/10 01:02 pm Title: "Do you think I'm beautiful?"

YOUR CHAPTER DISGUSTS ME. TOO SHORT.
TAKE IT AWAY AND DO IT AGAIN. :P
Naw, I kid.
LOVE YOU. ^^

Reviewer: Atlantis Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/19/10 04:23 pm Title: "Welcome to the resistance,"

So many questions! Who's Tom running from? Who does Natialie report to? Will Tom have sex with Bill like Natalie said to? Will Natalie watch when they do?

Can't wait for more!! :D

Reviewer: DaphneKaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/19/10 12:54 pm Title: "Welcome to the resistance,"

this was great! i can't wait for more, so update soon. i wonder how it'll go when Tom's plan for Bill starts.....

Reviewer: ichbinda828 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/19/10 06:17 am Title: "Welcome to the resistance,"

i wanna know the playlist love the story and can't wait for more

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/19/10 04:19 am Title: "Welcome to the resistance,"

what a very very interesting twist. well, several really. I am very very much looking forward to more now! =)

Reviewer: LoveGaneva Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/19/10 02:26 am Title: "Welcome to the resistance,"

My theory is that there is a clan of people with abilities like Bill and Tom and Tom was a part of them. They ran around seducing and fucking people. Tom got tired of it and tried to break away, and that's not allowed. Now they're looking for him! xD

Reviewer: Aquarose Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/18/10 10:46 pm Title: "Welcome to the resistance,"

at least he has someone to help him...and sleeping with bill shouldn't be that hard...making him fall in love with him...that's another story...can't wait for more to see what everyone does to everyone else...

Reviewer: CaMixoxox Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/18/10 08:08 pm Title: "We have a winner,"

i loved it

Reviewer: Sieren Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/18/10 06:50 pm Title: "Welcome to the resistance,"

that was a cool chapter

Reviewer: OWL Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/18/10 04:28 pm Title: "Welcome to the resistance,"

OWLS. I felt like that word was directed to me somehow XD I know it's not though, but it's not everyday I see my name around... XD
Great chapter.. loving it Laurie!
--Jilly

Reviewer: SquishyDuck Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/18/10 04:03 pm Title: "Welcome to the resistance,"

lauri, this was very intersting.......i cant wait to see where it goes!

Reviewer: yorutya Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/18/10 03:38 pm Title: "Welcome to the resistance,"

OMFG plz i need u to update :)

Reviewer: Afri_Angel Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/18/10 02:55 pm Title: "Welcome to the resistance,"

WOAA, I DON'T UNDERSTAND ANYTHING, CAN U PLZ EXPLAIN IT TO ME?! AND WHATS GOING ON HERE, WAN'T THIS GIRL HIS FRIEND OR SOMEWHAT LIKE IT AND HOW COME EVERYONE HATES BILL AND WHY DOESN'T TOM LIKE BILL?! I SO CONFUSED!!
BUT I STILL LIKE THIS STORY AND I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER UPDATE!!
:)

P.S. PLZ EXPLAIN THIS TO ME EVEN IF YOU HAVE TO EMAIL ME KK?
IT BEBEGRL4LIFE@HOTMAIL.COM, I JUST REALLY WANT TO UNDERSTAND.
:)

Reviewer: Chi Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/18/10 02:48 pm Title: "Welcome to the resistance,"

Tom's afraid of the skeletons in his closet o.o totes o.o xD Sorry, I'm in a weird mood because of the jizz in mah pants x3 I loved it!!! Can't wait for more!! And heel yeah, Tomi and Mecki are going to fuck :D
xx Chi ^^

Reviewer: Yuuki_Kyo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/18/10 02:45 pm Title: "Welcome to the resistance,"

oooohhhh
O_O

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