Date: 07/10/10 11:12 am Title: Prologue
It was so cute! Please continue
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I intend to, once I knock out another chapter of my novel, so my twinny stops harassing me. =] (Its already been secretly started though! Shhhh)
Date: 06/28/10 11:11 pm Title: Chapter 2
Oh, Cora is so sweet and cunning. She's lovely.
I wonder what will Bill think about the extra food. I'm so very curious about him.
Anyway, great chapter.
See ya.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! And lucky review, posted at 11:11!
Date: 06/28/10 01:11 pm Title: Prologue
This piece of fiction really has a way of making things more realistic by displaying the harsh reality of Tom's life but also keeping him in a sense of optimism with the way he treats his daughter and Bill.
Author's Response: Thanks! I hope you like it.
Date: 06/28/10 12:52 pm Title: Chapter 2
i'm def tracking this.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 06/28/10 01:27 am Title: Chapter 2
So I think this story has a ton of potential and I cannot wait to see where you take it!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm really excited about it.
Date: 06/27/10 11:59 pm Title: Chapter 2
awwww Tom is amazing sweet. giving Bill food when he doesn't have anything. that is too amazing!
amazing chapter!!
Author's Response: Aww thanks so much!rnMuch more to come, hope you like it.
Date: 06/27/10 11:26 pm Title: Chapter 2
your cousin is so cute!! and i like the fic! :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much! And isn't she?
Date: 06/27/10 10:15 pm Title: Chapter 2
I want to tell you that I absolutely LOVE this fic. I love the idea of Tom being the amazingly caring person you made him as. It makes me want to give him a hug! He's such a good man in this fic (although I'm sure he would be if he had a daughter). I love how he's so concerned about everyone else, but himself. It makes me love him so much more!! Ugh, I just love this fic in general! Your writing style is incredible and I can see the story in my mind so clearly! That's what I love about writing... if something is written right, then the story is like a movie in your mind. Your story is like that.
So, needless to say, I can't wait to read more and I am most definitely tracking this incredible story! BTW, Cora (your cousin) is SO adorable! :D
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really love the idea of Tom as the caring father too. Sophie is so adorable, she does spew random facts, like Cora, I pretty much based the character off of her. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story!
Date: 06/27/10 12:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hi!
I really want to know what's up with Bill! Why is he homeless and where does he go when he's not near sight?! I think I'll figure that out later in the story, though.
Aww, and Tom does such a cute dad. He's all loving and sweet, even if he's not at the best of situations, economically speaking.
I really, really want to read what's next.
See ya.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! There's more on the way, and all questions will be answered eventually!
Date: 06/27/10 02:50 am Title: Chapter 1
Awww poor tom : ( so what happened to his mom? Did she not want to help out? Man I can't wait to read more : )
Author's Response: Thanks! And all in good time, my friend. =P
Date: 06/27/10 02:11 am Title: Chapter 1
I really like this already. It's cute but realistic. I want to know more about Bill :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! And information about Bill will come in time.
Date: 06/26/10 10:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
i love this story so far!! it's soooo good and it's different!
can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thanks! Its really fun to write!
Date: 06/26/10 09:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
Too cute - Cora is a girl after my own heart!
Author's Response: Thanks, glad you like her!
Date: 06/26/10 08:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awww..I'm loving this! More!!
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm working on a second chapter right now.
Date: 06/26/10 08:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
Mr Bill Ma'am, that's sweet XD
Is that fact about the melon true? I did not know that >.>
Author's Response: Thanks! And yep, there'll be plenty more facts in this story, they're all true.
Date: 06/26/10 06:54 pm Title: Prologue
Hi!
Well, plot seems pretty interesting.
I'll keep tuned.
Author's Response: Thanks so much. Hope you enjoy it!
Date: 06/26/10 04:52 pm Title: Prologue
My comment is going to seem biased because I mainly checked out the story once I saw that the baby's name was Cora and it's so similar to my name, Coral. Aside from that I'm really excited about this story just from the prologue - I can't wait!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Coral is such a pretty name, I'm jealous. =[
Date: 06/26/10 04:23 pm Title: Prologue
Seems interesting. I'll keep this on my track list. I look forward to more :)
Author's Response: Thank you! =]