Date: 07/01/10 07:47 pm Title: Quite the beauty.
You know what hun, this is extremely gorgeous.
The first chapter made me cry, and the second one made my heart hurt. The writing style of this is very.. unstory like in a way, but the way you're doing it, it really works. And it's very nice. The idea felt cliche from the summary, but as I read it, it's not. I love the idea. Sensitivity and heart breaking are quite similar and the two [Bill&Tom] will put the two halves of a broken and crying heart together as one.
I just read all the 5 chapters today. And no you are not going fast from what I've seen from "recent stories".
The concept of the ocean is very very pretty, and I love it.. Really all 5 chapters made my heart break & I just had to stop and couldn't read it for a while.
I've been searching for a fic like this for some time, and most of the fics on this site are unserious and just smut [which I do enjoy but at times I feel like it gets old] and these kind of stories deserve MORE reviews and need to be treasured. It's sad that all the penis talk fics get over 50 reviews for only 4 chapters. I'm like wtf? And I never read anything or review anything that doesn't deserve it. And I don't write big reviews like this - Unless the author gains it.
I really respect this story, and it's very very gorgeous... Honestly.
Tom is a sweetie, I like how he took pictures of Bill. It's very very cute and he's so< 3 I picture him young with white shirts, light blue big jeans, and his blonde dreads. I see Bill with longer hair and it with more blonde streaks, and you mentioned he was makeup-less, so assuming he will look even younger. And with his face full and unsunken like it is now.
Beautiful fic, do continue.. If you don't, you don't want to know how I am.. I can be a total psycho. o.0
Anyways... gorgeous. and you're not slacking off....
BTW I listened to this pretty song as I read your fic, it totally fits with this story:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4qb47mXsMm4&feature=related Yes, correct link, trust me. it's just music. And the music is gorgeous. I recommend you listen as write or something ;)
Once again, beautiful fic.
Author's Response: I saved your review to read last (:rnrnFortunately the two crying hearts will come together, at last. Sorry for breaking your heart, I think I will put a happier chapter up soon, with minimal heartbreak and less sensitivity.rnrnI gained it? -> heart jumps for joy!rnrnI agree with you about the all smut stories, it's good, but the characters should develop...more.rnrnI won't tell you what I pictured them to look like, it's good when readers make their own pictures of the characters.rnrn I love the beat, (It's very light) and I will listen as I write, thanks (:rnrnThanks x1000000000 for the review, and anything I may have missed in being overwhelmed with giddiness .rnrn
Date: 07/01/10 07:45 pm Title: Quite the beauty.
I am so in love with this story. And you. And them. It's wonderful all over.
Author's Response: Oh,you too (:rnand thanks x3 !
Date: 06/30/10 03:26 pm Title: Quite the excitement.
I loved it :) They're so silly xD I love it :D I can't wait for more!!
xx Chi ^^
Author's Response: Ahh, thank you (:rnrnTommorrow,tommorrow !
Date: 06/30/10 11:33 am Title: Tom is quite fond of escapism.
I'm not sure what it is, but something about this is so inspiring to me! The emotions I feel from it and the scenes I get in my head just make me so inspired. Thank you a million times over!
Author's Response: Thanks and your welcome. Also, "Memory Keeper" is inspiring to me. (:
Date: 06/30/10 11:13 am Title: Quite the excitement.
This has got to be one of the strangest things i've ever read. That is an absolutely good thing because it's intriguing, pulling me in..... Hope to see an update really soon.
Author's Response: Oh it's supposed to be strange, and thanks for the review (:rnThere will be an update tommorrow most likely !
Date: 06/28/10 12:44 am Title: Bill and Tom are quite awkward.
This story seems so magical, I love it!
Author's Response: Thanks, there will be more magic in a couple of chapters !
Date: 06/27/10 07:01 pm Title: Bill and Tom are quite awkward.
It's actually 12 words Tom said to Bill, first "are you okay" and then "excuse me can you tell me your name, please" (Yea, I know, I'm a complete loser for counting D:) But I do really really really like this story already. The boys are so adorable and the way you capture their emotions and little quirks is genius. &Thanks for updating so soon, can't wait for more! :)
Author's Response: Crap. Now I'm beating myself up.rnWell, thanks for telling me.(:rnrnThanks for the review, and the compliments. rnThere will be more tomorrow!
Date: 06/27/10 04:38 pm Title: Bill and Tom are quite awkward.
I love this :D
xx Chi ^^
Author's Response: Thanks (:rnrnI hope that you will continue to !
Date: 06/27/10 11:23 am Title: Bill has quite the heart.
AWH!!!!! i want more i want more!!!! *-*
Author's Response: There will be tommorrow !
Date: 06/27/10 06:06 am Title: Bill has quite the heart.
Ooooooh! I like it!!! :D I can't wait for more! :D
Author's Response: There will be am update today !
Date: 06/27/10 02:59 am Title: Bill has quite the heart.
Whoa. Aww. I just...don't know what to say. I'm not sure how this story makes me feel yet (it's so...intense, ya know?) but I'm pretty sure I like it. The boys are so sad, though. It breaks my heart =[
Author's Response: This story is about two soft soft hearts, so they might crack your heart a bit more :/rnThere WILL be some happy moments though, so hold on (:rnrnThanks for the review !rn
Date: 06/27/10 01:35 am Title: Bill has quite the heart.
I'm fascinated.
Continue.
Author's Response: Will do (:
Date: 06/26/10 04:43 pm Title: Tom is quite fond of escapism.
oh my daaarling, i love this. it's so driven and so incredibly detailed that even a hardcore fluff cynicism like me just can't resist it. I don't review that much (cause i'm lame xD) but i just want to say that i think this is fantastic, and your writing is spectacular. I'm very glad i clicked on this :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I'm speechless(: rn
Date: 06/26/10 04:01 pm Title: Tom is quite fond of escapism.
Your banner is so beautiful, and I'm intrigued so far. Seems interesting.
Author's Response: Hopefully, it will be ! rnThanks !
Date: 06/26/10 12:47 pm Title: Tom is quite fond of escapism.
This is really different. I won't say more until I read more *hint hint
Where is the place in your banner? It's beautiful. We have nothing like that in my country!
Author's Response: It's in Greenland! (http://www.flickr.com/photos/zinnie/3662889786/in/set-72157594305531381/)rnrnThanks for the review!
Date: 06/26/10 12:05 pm Title: Tom is quite fond of escapism.
It's a rare day when I read fanfic... But this seemed to interesting to pass up and I am not displeased. I really like your writing style! Great job so far!
Author's Response: Thank you!rnrnBy the way; I love your stories (:
Date: 06/26/10 11:47 am Title: Tom is quite fond of escapism.
Tom's so adorably fragile.
The format of this chapter was not what I was expecting, like a list. The writing is still good, though. I love how you described him.
Author's Response: What I waas going for! The format is inspired by one of the best books ever, The Book Thief.
Date: 06/26/10 11:26 am Title: Tom is quite fond of escapism.
I love this.
I love the writing style, the description of Tom's odd little idiosyncrasies. It's so character-driven and you've told us a lot about Tom, who he is, how he feels but because he's so interesting I want to know more, more, more.
Author's Response: This story will be very character driven, and Bill will be interesting too hopefully !rnrnThanks for your review!
Date: 06/26/10 11:09 am Title: Tom is quite fond of escapism.
I clicked this story in the first place because I loved the banner. It reminded me of where I'm from, even though it's different there, and small and really a Nowhere, with only 60 people living there. It's my love, and everything that reminds me of it, is lovely too.
I feel like it was a bit confusing, what you wrote, but at the same times, you use so many beautiful sentences, so I can't help but continue reading. I'm going to track this the second after I'm done reviewing it now. xD
Author's Response: The place in the banner is Greenland.rnrnI jumped a bit from place to place, I think .rnrnThanks for tracking, and thanks for the review !rnrn
Date: 06/26/10 10:20 am Title: Tom is quite fond of escapism.
Awesome! I'm excited to see what happens next!
Author's Response: Stay tuned (: