Date: 03/05/11 04:55 pm Title: 1/1
This is rather .. creepy&beautiful xD :) made me cry alittle :') but this is a unique story :D I love stories like that ^-^ great job! :D
Date: 08/15/10 12:24 am Title: 1/1
I decided it'd be my turn to review your stuff... anyways.. dude.. O_o this fic.. damn.. you like.. fucking.. killed me?!?!
I don't know how to explain I was like o.o the entire time XD Like, all the Bill bashing Tom was too much for me LOL. I think I'll read your Het now XD
It was interesting, defiantly not anything vaguely close to anything else I've read...
So kudos. ^_^
Author's Response: Awww, thank you :D
Date: 07/05/10 02:30 am Title: 1/1
Hmm... this is definately an interesting, even interguing, premise for a story: Having Bill write Tom a letter from the afterlife explaining his life and the future, that's so cool! However, I find the idea that Tom's wife murdered Bill to be a detraction rather than a great plot twist, I guess that just didn't appeal to me and stuck out like something that didn't belong, like the story could have been better without the whole Allegra character. Other than that, I thought the story was kind of witty. My fav part was the ending with Tom naming his future son after Bill.
I think this story was ok, but I think your writing has room improvment through a bit of editing and strengthening up some of the great meaningful areas of the story to put more emphasis on feeling and emotion. Good job tho. This was pretty cool. :)
Date: 06/25/10 05:38 pm Title: 1/1
awh:(
this made me cry.
Author's Response: Aw, I'm sorry D:
Date: 06/25/10 05:24 pm Title: 1/1
that was really... creepy ._. In a good kind of way xD But srsly, it gave me the chills how Bill was writing from beyond the grave o.O
Author's Response: Haha, I found it a bit creepy to write(: