Date: 07/02/10 05:33 pm Title: A Problem
Oh goodnes XD
I totally misinterpreted this paragraph:
"Oh my goodness, look at how big you are!" Berta wriggles little Tom back and forth by her grip beneath his arms and Tom giggles wildly. "Yes, you are!"
I thought it was about grownup!Tom and his er... "little tomi". Can you imgine my WTF-face? XD
Date: 07/02/10 10:24 am Title: A Problem
>:O!
I'm so annoyed with Tom and Bill and sfljskdjfsjdkfjslsjd.
Date: 07/02/10 10:14 am Title: A Problem
Oh my, Tom what have you done now?
Since he showed up, something was not really right about him. But I hoped that it was just me, but I should know better when it comes to you guys lol.
Ever since Tom was introduced to us in this universe, he was pathetic and unreliable. But for Bill's sake, I'd hoped that the twin in Tom would be stronger. I guess we have to prepare for the worse,coming from him? Like in negotiable affetcion, will he be a complete bastard till the end. Is he that rotten and unredeemable? I pity him so much, Yet I'm disapointed. It's mostly for Bill. That guy went through so much stuff, and he was so happy to just have his twin there, and ready t forget the past. His vision of his twin became veiled, and he can't think of his brother's ossible wickedness.
But, Tom is so fucked-up. He needs some serious saving. He's not trust worthy though, who knows if what he told about Amélie was right? Seeing his brother becoming rich, he flaired a possibility to extract more money maybe? I'm so sad that he's such a liar, and he took advantage of Mohammed, Bushido even offered him help if he needed, but no, he had to go and steal?
Okay, I'm convinced it's Tom, but for all we know, it's not even him!!! It's INGRID I tell you! And she took advantage of the fact that Tom is not Bushido's favorite person, plus he has a shady past. I really love this Tom, so I can always hope ne? But, if it's really him who did all that stealing, I'd be even sadder. The drug, maybe it's him, he's guilty. Who knows?It can be Ingrid's doing to incriminate Tom.
His only crime might be the drug, hence Andreas's suspicions. But for the stealing, he's innocent until proven guilty. *crosses fingers*
I can't believe there's one last chater left ç___ç, my selfish inner self is wishing for this universe to be explored again and again and forever lol!
Thanks!
Date: 07/02/10 08:04 am Title: A Problem
I KNEW IT!!!
In the beginning of the chapter with his strange attitude, the red eyes, the money disappearing I just knew that Tom was back on drugs! I just...kind of hoped he was not and you were just fucking with our brains.
Date: 07/02/10 04:55 am Title: A Problem
Oh, Tom. I had a feeling this is the way the story was going to go, but I'm still disappointed in him. Can't wait to see how Bill handles the situation.
Date: 07/02/10 04:20 am Title: A Problem
I just reread my last comment, and instead of deleting it, I'll just comment on my comment! (It's also helps the review count) Anyway, in my last comment I said Bill was left to raise Simone...which wouldn't make sense...I meant he was left to look after Simone...I should be reviewing when this tired...anyways, again, great chapter :)
Date: 07/02/10 04:16 am Title: A Problem
Oh no! I can't believe Tom would steal from them like that! Although I was suspicious from when Tom first showed up that something like this had to happen. You didn't confirm it was Tom, but I'm assuming...I mean it has to be! And poor Bill, not wanting to think his brother could do something like that...although if I was Bill, I don't think I could be so quick to trust Tom in the first place, what with his past drug problems and the fact that he took off on Bill to leave him to raise his mother. Anyway, I'll stop rambaling now...it is 2:15 in the morning and I am quite tired, so none of this probably made sence, and I probably misspelled many things...to sum it up, great chapter! lol
Date: 07/02/10 02:31 am Title: A Problem
I really hope Tom isn't doing drugs! Bushido thinks so, Andreas thinks he's acting strange. Something is up.
Date: 07/02/10 01:54 am Title: A Problem
oh no :( please update soon. please please please help them help tom. dont let him go down the bad road. please
Date: 07/02/10 12:59 am Title: A Problem
I'm enjoying this a lot =) and can't wait for the next chap.
PS: Ingrid, right?.......right?
Date: 07/02/10 12:30 am Title: A Problem
All signs point to Tom, Bill. Wake up! Geez, as long as it took Bill to trust Anis, he sure gives Tom way more credit and trust than he deserves. Especially since he's broken that trust more than once in the past. I get that Bill wants to stick up for his twin and believe the best of Tom, but COME ON! I really don't want this to create a rift between Bill and Bushido :(
Date: 07/02/10 12:05 am Title: A Problem
Honestly, I'm shocked that Bill didn't go sleep in one of the guest rooms. Anyway though, I like where this is going, I'm just a bit disappointed it's so short.
Date: 07/02/10 12:01 am Title: A Problem
Bill needs to wake up. Tom is a drug addict. One asy way to determine is give Tom a surprise drug test. Then they'd know!
Date: 07/02/10 12:00 am Title: A Problem
I just knew something like this was going on! Can't wait to see who confront's Tom and the reaction's it cause's!
Date: 07/01/10 11:08 pm Title: A Problem
I'm hoping it wasn't Tom but all signs point to him. Ugh. Stupid boy.
I'm really glad you decided to write something more for this universe, it's nice being able to see what happens after The Phonecall. :)
Date: 07/01/10 10:41 pm Title: A Problem
God. Just god. Idiot. God.
Date: 07/01/10 12:42 am Title: Many (Sort Of) Happy Returns
Awww, Tom is being so cute with his little nephews. At least it seems like he's trying. And trying with Bill, too. I love this story and these characters! I wish it would never end!
Date: 06/30/10 04:47 pm Title: Many (Sort Of) Happy Returns
This is interesting. It's nice to see what happened after the kids and with Tom. Oh guys, look.
"Bill tosses his cotton ball into the trash and flicks the bathroom light off, padding across the rug to the bed crawl into the bed."
You have a mistake.
Date: 06/29/10 05:57 pm Title: Many (Sort Of) Happy Returns
This is all so cute!!! I love it!
Date: 06/29/10 02:32 pm Title: Many (Sort Of) Happy Returns
This is one of the cutest things I've ever read *_*
I love them like they were my family x)