Date: 07/06/10 07:21 am Title: The Poison
Oh god this was so sad. ;-;
I loved the characterizations you gave them. Seeing Tom so... caring and not wanting anything except for Bill to be okay was great. And I liked Bill being the one that needed to be taken care of; that he was all messed up. It really made the story for me.
Great job, I loved it. :] *favorited*
Author's Response: Thanks so much :)rnI think bill's a nice character to play with, but I like him more as someone who just influences the situation... If you get what I mean :D Anyways, thank you!
Date: 07/03/10 11:22 pm Title: The Poison
That was beautiful. I haven't read many fics from Tom's point of view in which he isn't portrayed as a sex-addicted idiot, and this was such a nice alternative. It was heart breaking, but the writing was so, SO good. Great story!
Author's Response: I barely ever write Tom like that, because I simply don't believe it :D Glad you liked it! :)
Date: 06/23/10 08:44 pm Title: The Poison
Wait a second, I just reread that, and Bill does die. Whoopsie, I was very confused.. But aww... my God. Now that hit me twice X___X Makes it more beautiful...
I don't know what to say now.
Poor Tom.. I'm assuming he will overdose [or just use a gun?] and kill himself to be with Bill, just like that, without a though.
BEAUTIFUL.
Date: 06/23/10 08:40 pm Title: The Poison
Omg, you know the summary had nothing to do with the fic. But once I clicked it, it was beautiful.. I love it.
The end scared me, I was like, oh no did he just die..? But he didn't. It was a gorgeous fic. Really was.
I loved how it was Tom's view, and how he cared about Bill... Aw, man, lovely.
I like drug fics, because they show reality. Not like that shit 'everythingissohappyandtomisasexyfucker' I hate that crap A LOT. This was real, and showed something that would happen.
Beautiful. < 3
Date: 06/23/10 08:38 pm Title: The Poison
Wow. This was incredible and really well written. : )