Date: 07/07/10 11:31 am Title: Learning
This is adorable! But I'm scared to keep reading if it ends like the movie. Blech. Haha.
Author's Response: Don't worry, I intend to deviate quite a bit from the film as the story goes on. Thanks for reading!
Date: 07/07/10 11:01 am Title: Learning
wow. what a sweet chapter. there were several sweet and endearing moments. Its not wonder Tom is falling for his creation, how could he not? I'm so glad Bill has his name! And he's so smart! =) Keep up the great work, I can't wait for more. And take care of yourself, back, baby and all!
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter!
Date: 07/07/10 09:49 am Title: Learning
aw wow! i'm loving this story so much so far!
Author's Response: That's so nice to hear! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Date: 07/07/10 09:32 am Title: Learning
Oh my god Bill is so adorable. All the eager chirps and excited brown eyes and cuddling his teddy and asking Tom for his NAME.
Tom, you have SO lost your objectivity. *snort* But Bill is absolutely special! And sweet and adorable and way too advanced for your own good. >_>
Definitely still with you. I can't wait to see what happens next!
That little moment when Bill lays his hand over Tom's, oh man. ;_; I have the horrible feeling Tom is going to betray his tiny trust.
Hope you feel better soon!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter, and that you find Bill endearing! Tom is definitely fooling himself if he thinks he's still objective...as we will see in upcoming chapters. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing--I really appreciate the encouragement!
Date: 07/07/10 08:29 am Title: Learning
Awwww...my sister and I watched the movie last night. Just hope Bill doesn't turn into a girl o.o
Author's Response: Haha...I was wondering when someone would ask about the gender switch aspect of the film. Don't worry...by the time we get that far into the story, I'll have deviated away from the movie quite a bit (not just on that front).
Date: 07/07/10 08:22 am Title: Learning
I'm loving the little Bill creature more and more! I really needed this sweet chapter, as my day yesterday was horrid. Thank you so much for this glimpse into the cuter side of Tom's creation, as well as his relationship with it. And I do hope your back starts to feel better!
Author's Response: Sorry you had a bad day--but I'm glad this chapter made you feel a little better!
Date: 07/07/10 07:40 am Title: Learning
This story is just amazing! I really really like it! i really do love movies like this story is based on, so this was actually perfect for me :D hope you'll update soon, would like to read a lot more!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it! Next update will be on Saturday, so be sure to check back!
Date: 07/07/10 07:06 am Title: Learning
I'm dying of cuteness here. Bill is so adorable! And Tomi is a proud daddy. *wiggles eyebrows*
Thank you!
Author's Response: Haha...yes, he's a proud daddy. For now. I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter, and thanks for reviewing!
Date: 07/07/10 06:30 am Title: Learning
Oh god, that was so cute! It really had me smiling all chapter long! :) Really sweet:)
Author's Response: I'm so glad I could make you smile! Thanks for reading!
Date: 07/07/10 05:41 am Title: Learning
This is so cute story! Can't wait for more.
xx
Author's Response: Glad you like it!
Date: 07/07/10 04:20 am Title: Learning
Awwww....he's got a name now! This whole chapter had me smiling like an idiot (in a good way of course). Wonderfully done my dear, i love the images that come in my head while reading this, and i dont want to watch the movie, spoliers are never a good thing.
lol, cant wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it, and that it made you smile!
Date: 07/04/10 07:52 pm Title: Beginnings
oh he's growing ^^ i am thoroughly enjoying your work, it's definitely something different to what i'd normally read and i'm loving it! You have such a way with wordss; it all seems to flow magnificently and just makes everything so proper. This is wonderful! I hope your nightmare wednesday goes okay, and isn't so nightmare like :S definitely looking forward to the next chapter :D
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you're willing to give this story a chance, even though it's not what you'd normally read!
Date: 07/04/10 07:38 pm Title: New Life
ahh i missed your writing so much! I just got back from Iceland a couple of days ago and finally managed to settle down and catch up on some of my tracked stories :) this is so exciting to read! I think by now you know i adore your writing, and this is wonderful! It all seems so professional even if you said you don't tend to get the sciencey stuff xD very impressive! Reading on for sure tonight ^^
Author's Response: Ooh, Iceland! I've always wanted to go. I'm so glad to hear the science aspects of this story are coming across as believable for you (because science is definitely not my thing), and it's so nice of you to say you enjoy my writing!
Date: 07/04/10 02:42 am Title: Beginnings
Interesting that it's still developing features like that outside the "womb". At this rate, if something doesn't stop its acceleration, it wouldn't seem like the creature would live all that long. Just thinking out loud. The tic tacs were a nice breakthrough for him, though. :)
Author's Response: He's definitely aging at an accelerated rate, to the point that Tom doesn't think he's going to live more than a few weeks. Of course, we'll see how that actually works out...Thanks so much for reading, and for reviewing! I really appreciate it!
Date: 07/03/10 08:07 pm Title: Beginnings
EARLY UPDAATEEESSS
OH HELL YESSSS
I BEG YOUUUU
PLEAASEEE?
Pretty pleasee? :[
*puppy eyes*
Author's Response: I'm definitely going to aim for Tuesday. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Date: 07/03/10 07:51 pm Title: Beginnings
That's definitely Bill alright loves sugar and seems to like Tom so yep that's him. I feel so bad though.. George is always trying to kill him poor baby. When Tom got desperate trying to get his little one to eat he had kind of a normal reaction when amperson is upset but I think Tom is going to have to learn to keep his cool if he wants to avoid that kind of situation.his little one is different than humans and it will defend itsself differently. I do hope that Tom can help the little one learn to communicate soon. He does seem to be evolving quickly:)
Author's Response: Yeah, I think Tom's reaction was pretty standard--we all get a little fed up sometimes, don't we? But you're right...he needs to learn to be careful with the creature. He doesn't quite know what he's dealing with. Thank you so much for reading, and for reviewing!
Date: 07/03/10 06:25 pm Title: Beginnings
awwwwww!!! thischappie is soooooo cute!!!! more soon please!!! i love this story!
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 07/03/10 06:18 pm Title: Beginnings
Another fabulous chapter. And an early update would be so so appreciated as I cant wait for more of this story!!
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter! I'll definitely try to get the next one up on Tuesday.
Date: 07/03/10 03:45 pm Title: Beginnings
lol
the creature eating the tic taks
cant wait or more
Author's Response: Cute, right? Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Date: 07/03/10 02:05 pm Title: Beginnings
I can't believe that thing is Bill O.O It is him isn't it? Tom is so cute with his little creation lol.
Author's Response: Hard to believe, isn't it? But the creature's growing and changing...who knows what he'll end up looking like? Thanks for reading!