Date: 07/10/10 10:01 am Title: Fever
Adored this chapter! This developing bind between Tom and Bill is just so sweet, even if the origins are a bit twisty. I'm loving the development so much, especially that scene with Georg...it really spoke volumes as to his feelings about Bill.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked the chapter, and the feelings Tom is developing for Bill!
Date: 07/10/10 09:38 am Title: Fever
This seriously keeps getting creepier and creepier.. But i love it..
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it, even the creepiness!
Date: 07/10/10 08:16 am Title: Fever
I am enjoying so much every chapter and how the whole story is developing! It's like Bill is the cutest little thing... and is so understandable how Tom sometimes thinks about him as "Bill" and not just "his creation". =)
Author's Response: Yes, Bill is becoming so much more than an experiment to Tom. I'm so glad to hear you're enjoying the story--and thanks so much for reviewing!
Date: 07/10/10 07:49 am Title: Fever
I must say that this is so overly cute, sweet and adorable story. I've been rreading this since you started and I just had to comment. You're doing an amazing job as creating this universe and especially little Bill. His relationship with Tom is so cute. We all know Tom would be exactly like that :)
Author's Response: I like to think that Tom has a paternal side! I'm so glad to hear you've been enjoying the story, and thanks so much for reviewing!
Date: 07/09/10 07:38 pm Title: Learning
I've never read a story like this, but i've read the rest of your stories, so i figured i should give this a try. I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thank you for giving it a chance! It's a bit different for me, as well (sci-fi isn't something I usually try to write), but I hope you end up liking it!
Date: 07/09/10 12:07 am Title: Learning
Quite freaky.. i think :
Nice tho but freaky
Author's Response: Definitely a bit freaky. Thanks for reading!
Date: 07/08/10 01:23 pm Title: Learning
That was so sweet. Bill is really developing fast. I's sorta amazing, I wonder if he'll be able to talk soon... Georg may faint.
Author's Response: I'm not sure Georg could handle it, to be honest. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter, and thanks for reviewing!
Date: 07/08/10 12:46 am Title: Learning
This is so cute! You mentioned deviating from the plot of the movie, and I'm glad because the previews for it looked scary (I'm a wimp). I love this fluffy stuff.
Author's Response: Yeah, the movie definitely falls into the category of 'horror', which this story will not. I'm hoping to keep some of the creepiness, but I just can't stop myself from writing fluff sometimes. Glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 07/07/10 09:11 pm Title: Learning
Objectivity is so out the window. lol But we already knew that. The last scene was just sweet. In my head, I sort of see Bill as ET, which may sound weird. Anyway, wonderfully done, as always. :)
Author's Response: I'm definitely going for that same ET cute vibe (although, as a child I always found ET unbearably creepy and terrifying. Totally ruined the movie for me). Glad you liked the chapter, and thanks so much for reviewing!
Date: 07/07/10 09:06 pm Title: Learning
awwwwww
Author's Response: Glad you liked it!
Date: 07/07/10 08:42 pm Title: Learning
Aww Tom bought his little one a teddy :) Among other things but that was the cutest. I think it's great that the creature is so smart and learning so fast. I can't wait to see what Bill does next. The part where Tom names him was quite emotional and i hope Tom can get through the hesitation he feels about giving this little one a name. I'm curious to see where this goes from here.
Author's Response: The image of little Bill and the teddy makes me happy, I have to admit. I'm glad you liked the chapter, and thanks so much for reviewing!
Date: 07/07/10 08:25 pm Title: Learning
AWW!! I LOVE THIS!!
That is all. :D
Author's Response: That's so nice to hear! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 07/07/10 07:44 pm Title: Learning
aww
soo cute
i love it
cant wait for more
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked the chapter! Next one will be posted on Saturday.
Date: 07/07/10 07:34 pm Title: Learning
aw he's got a name he's got a name! :D i am definitely becoming attached to Bill, aw Bill ^^ it feels nice calling him that. I'm sort of feeling a little of Georg's concern though, but only a little. I honestly have no idea where you're taking this, and i haven't seen the movie Splice. I love your writing, it always interests me no matter what you're writing about. I'm looking forward to chapter 6 :D
Author's Response: It's funny knowing that some of the people reading this story know what's coming next, because they've seen the movie, and some have absolutely no idea what I'm planning. I just hope I can keep both groups interested! I'm glad you've been enjoying it so far, and thanks so much for reviewing! You always leave me the nicest comments about my writing, which I really appreciate.
Date: 07/07/10 04:53 pm Title: Learning
awwwwwwwwwww!!! this chappie is sooooooooo cute!!!! i just love the fluff!!! more please!!! im looking forward to the next chappie!!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it! There's some drama ahead, but I can never help throwing fluff into the mix.
Date: 07/07/10 04:10 pm Title: Learning
this was so sweet :-)I love Bill, he is a very cute baby :-)
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reading!
Date: 07/07/10 04:09 pm Title: Learning
Aww, don't you just want to snuggle lil humanoid Bill til he coos and chirps and blinks those big brown eyes? I know I do.
Author's Response: I really do, lol. I want to keep him as a pet. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Date: 07/07/10 03:12 pm Title: Learning
subject 483... sweet =)
Author's Response: Haha, couldn't help myself!
Date: 07/07/10 02:55 pm Title: Learning
Awe so sweet. Bill is scary smart. Is he advanced because his.brain develops as quickly as his body or because of Tom's DNA? His intelligence is a bit worrysome. Smart isn't necessarily bad if he is supported. If he's abused it could be bad or if he has to fifty back against the cold cruel world it could be bad. If he's protected he might not be a danger but at this point I can't believe he wont be one eventually.
Author's Response: Tom's still figuring out just WHY Bill's so advanced, both physically and mentally. But you're right--that kind of intelligence can be dangerous if Tom's isn't careful. Thanks so much for reading!
Date: 07/07/10 01:39 pm Title: Learning
Oh gosh, this chapter was freaking adorable. I've actually been reading this fic from chapter one, and I'm sorry for not reviewing until now, but I was literally squealing throughout this entire chapter. So cute!
I haven't seen the movie this is based on, but I'm loving how this fic is coming along and I'm definitely looking forward to more! :)
Author's Response: I'm so glad you've been enjoying the story!