Date: 07/24/10 04:43 pm Title: Creation
Oh MAN! This was uber hot! I'm hoping your story doesn't have to end like the movie (I read the Wikipedia synopsis), because I want this situation to end happily. It will be interesting to see where you take it. In the meantime - I'm loving your story.
Author's Response: Don't worry--I didn't put any major character death warnings for a reason! I'm glad you're enjoying the story, and thanks for reviewing!
Date: 07/24/10 04:39 pm Title: Climax
Oh man, did I ever enjoy it. I enjoyed it, then I had to go putter around and do other things, then I had to come back and enjoy it again before I could review. There's so much going on here.
I really enjoyed the contrast between the pliant, adoring Bill and the one who came so confidently to Tom's bed, knowing exactly what he wanted and determined to get it. The scene between them was intense, as well as sexy. I enjoyed Tom's momentary struggle to put the scientist aside. And I loved the way Tom yielded to Bill after Bill's forcefulness, then the battle for dominance between them during the act.
The image of Bill at the last was just vivid and gorgeous. As for that final line...what a delightful surprise. *_*
I'm worried about how things will go from here, though!
Author's Response: Yes, Tom probably won't be that comfortable with what happened...I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter, especially the contrast between the various facets of Bill's personality. I was worried that people would think he was being a bit schizophrenic, since it's such a dramatic shift. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Date: 07/24/10 04:39 pm Title: Climax
O.O - i can't wait to see what happens next some how i suspect that Tom's gonna freak! Bill's speaking ooo I love how this fic's going so far i really look forward to the updates!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you're enjoying the story! Thanks for reading!
Date: 07/24/10 04:37 pm Title: Climax
Ah!! I can't wait 'til the next chapter. I say that to myself every single time. :)
Author's Response: That's so nice to hear!
Date: 07/24/10 04:30 pm Title: Climax
Eep! Bill spoke! YAY! Wow, that was just wow. Such a sexy scene. I really loved that Bill was acting "besotted" with Tom and then completely changed when it came to the sex. I love your writing. This chapter was fantastic!
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm so glad to hear you liked seeing the various facets of Bill's personality! He is besotted, but he also knows what he wants. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Date: 07/24/10 04:19 pm Title: Climax
Oh Bill's talking :D:D Looking forward to next chapter, I adore this fic!
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm so glad you're enjoying the story!
Date: 07/24/10 04:12 pm Title: Climax
YAY sex XD lol dx
Bill can talk!!! C: soo.. more?
Author's Response: Haha...more to come on Wednesday! Thanks for reading!
Date: 07/24/10 04:04 pm Title: Climax
OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG! BILL TALKED! YAY! HA! YES! FINALLY! Oh, and Bill and Tom had some hot sex. ^_^ I'd normally be ALOT more excited about that, but Bill talking took all of my excitement. I have a scientific therory on the "wet" thing, and if I'm right, I'm gonna be REALLY happy. :)
lol Loved the chapter. Can't wait for the next one.
Author's Response: I'd love to hear your scientific theory...I'll admit that I made that decision on a narrative basis, rather than a scientific one. Glad you liked the chapter, and thanks for reading!
Date: 07/24/10 03:54 pm Title: Climax
Oh man. This was beautifully intense. I love the way you describe Bill and their emotions and everything. Makes it wonderfully easy to read this and than picture in my mind. Their sex quite honestly deliciously intense and hot. That last part...oh boy. Oh Bill. I can only wonder what will happen next.
Also...baby!! Your comment about your baby shower reminds me that my friend is in the hospital waiting for her little girl to arrive. :D
Author's Response: Aw, I hope everything goes well for your friend and her little girl. Mine's a girl, too! I'm so glad to hear you liked the chapter, and that you enjoyed the imagery! Thanks for reading!
Date: 07/24/10 03:52 pm Title: Creation
So beautiful! I always end up with a huge smile on my face after reading this
Author's Response: Aw, that's so nice to hear! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Date: 07/24/10 03:42 pm Title: Climax
Wow, that was seriously a very steamy sex scene. I especially loved how you contrasted that sexy scene with the sweeter scene at the beginning with a blushing and bashful Tom and cute little Bill. Definitely a favorite chapter so far!
Author's Response: Thank you, that's so nice of you to say! I don't think I've ever had one of my sex scenes described as "steamy" before! I must be improving!
Date: 07/22/10 11:11 am Title: Emotion
Bill was so cute with those drawings, and so dramatic with the rooftop scene. I love how you're making his character; growing, learning, being dramatic and needy yet so cute and innocent.
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you like how the character is developing!
Date: 07/22/10 10:15 am Title: Emotion
ooh i was so hoping there would be wings involved :D wow so much happened in this chapter, and i loved it ever such a lot! Your writing is so so good and i really love reading it. Such a dramatic chapter, i loved it!
Author's Response: I couldn't leave the wings out; they're so pretty! Thanks for reading!
Date: 07/22/10 08:19 am Title: Emotion
And now he knows that he can FLY. That is an awesome ability. You curated a grate image with Bill at the window looking out at the world he will never belong in. Sad seen. I have not been able to get to the drawing. i wold like to but my mother has been stuck on Korean dramas and hogging the computer and not letting me on the computer to draw. Thank you for updating.
Author's Response: I'm glad you thought that was a powerful image! Poor sad Bill... Thanks so much for reading!
Date: 07/22/10 05:23 am Title: Emotion
Oh my goodness!! what a stellar chapter!! This story is so good, I can't get enough of it. keep up the wonderful work!!
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm so glad to hear you're continuing to enjoy the story!
Date: 07/22/10 04:04 am Title: Emotion
I couldn't stop giggling when Bill had his tantrum. ^_^ Nothing's worse than a pissed off rockstar. Trust me. -_- I swear at first they're all "OMG I LOVE YOU TOO!" and then when their 'slave' gets them chilly water when they asked for room temperature, they're all, "WHY DO YOU HATE ME GOD?! WHAT HAVE I EVERDONE!? I MEAN I'VE ONLY DONE DRUGS ____ MANY TIMES AND I'VE NEVER KILLED ANYONE! ...legally anyway... SO WHY DO YOU CURSE ME WITH CHILLY WATER!?" (Not ALL rockstars of course. But a generous portion. ^_^)
Not to mention when Bill wanted to turn on the stereo again. If Bill could talk, I imagine this is what the conversation would have been like.
Bill: Tomi, can I turn on the stereo?
Tom: Not right now. I'm working, Bill.
Bill: But Toooomi! Please?
Tom: No. It's very distracting.
Bill: But-
Tom: No Bill. That's final. >:|
Bill: ...*pout*...
Tom: Don't you start pouting!
Bill: ...*intense pout*...
Tom: Bill.
Bill: ...*super pout*...
Tom: Bill!
Bill: ...super-ultra-extreme pout*...
Tom: *faceplam*
Bill: *turns on stereo anyway*
Tom: BILL!
Bill: *squeak* IDIDN'TDOITISWEAR! ITWASGEORG! *bolts out of room*
Author's Response: Hahaha...I'm sure that's how it would go! Thanks so much for reading!
Date: 07/22/10 01:52 am Title: Emotion
What in the world is Tom doing he's kind of lost at sea. He's attracted to his own creation. I'm worried for Bill will he ever look more normal? Will he speak? Will he be able to pass for human? I want good things for Bill.
Author's Response: Poor Tom is rather confused right now, isn't he? Don't worry, though...I want good things for Bill, too! Thanks for reading!
Date: 07/21/10 09:03 pm Title: Emotion
oh goodness. *_* I'm still starry eyed over this thing. Bill's the cutest, most deadliest thing imaginable.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you're enjoying the story!
Date: 07/21/10 07:56 pm Title: Emotion
Oh wow, what a way for Tom to spit that out! When Bill took off out the window, I actually gasped out loud, sat forward and clapped my hand over my mouth. Well done, you! lol
Author's Response: It's so flattering to hear you had a visceral reaction to that scene!
Date: 07/21/10 07:14 pm Title: Emotion
Whoa, Bill has wings. I like it. :D And Tom, finally coming to grips with himself. Bless his heart. :D Love it!
Jane
Author's Response: Tom's such a boy, it just takes him awhile to figure out his emotions. Thanks for reading!