Date: 07/25/10 03:53 am Title: Climax
I'm just sitting here...trying to be coherent. Failing miserably.
Holy shit, I didn't see that coming. Not the sex, the speaking, of course. But the sex was so, so good. That final image of Bill coming with his wings spread was amazing. But then saying Tom's name. I'm just. Yeah, I'll just be here waiting for the next chapter. :)
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the chapter, and that I could surprise you a bit! Thanks so much for reading!
Date: 07/25/10 01:28 am Title: Climax
HOLY SHIT! SON OF YOUR MOTHER THE MILKER!!! O.M.GITTLES!!! WOW! I'm speechless... in a good way :)
Author's Response: Hahaha....A+ review! Glad you liked the chapter!
Date: 07/25/10 01:15 am Title: Climax
OMG HE CAN SPEAK.
I was waiting for Bill to stab Tom with his tail o.o
Author's Response: No stabbing here...yet, anyway. As I'm sure you can tell, I'm deviating more and more from the film at this point, so don't expect every plot point to line up. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 07/25/10 12:29 am Title: Climax
Bill learned quite well, didn't he? I'm sure the emotional and ethical anguish will hit Tom hard next chapter. And Bill spoke! His first word, yay!
Author's Response: Bill's a fast learner, and he was watching VERY carefully when Tom was with Rebecca. Thanks for reading!
Date: 07/25/10 12:06 am Title: Climax
Wow. That was beautiful. In the movie, you just felt awkward and unclean, but this was lovely.
Author's Response: I felt SO awkward during the movie sex scene. I really couldn't believe they were going there...I'm glad that this didn't give you that same feeling. Thanks so much for reading!
Date: 07/24/10 11:48 pm Title: Climax
Oh, wow, this chapter is full of surprises! Is it wrong that my first reaction to Bill kissing Tom was "You go, Bill! Go get your man!" Ahem. And then the very end, oh, my. What a fitting first word.
The imagery in this chapter was just gorgeous. You wrote it so well that even if I hadn't seen the movie, I'd be able to envision everything perfectly. Amazing, hot, and lovely, and as usual, I'll be looking forward to the next part!
Author's Response: Thank you, that's so nice to hear! I'm really glad to hear that you think I'm describing everything well. And there's nothing wrong with wanting Bill to get his man, lol! Thanks so much for reading, and reviewing!
Date: 07/24/10 11:46 pm Title: Climax
!!!
OH SHIT!
Author's Response: Yes, that pretty much sums it up. Thanks for reading!
Date: 07/24/10 09:32 pm Title: Climax
Whoa! Bill's first word! Oh and wow that was super hot sex. Wow Bill learned sex really quickly. I like that he was all kitten sweet during the day and then suddenly super aggressive at night like he gave up and just needed to take care of the issue himself because Tom just wasn't getting the message. LOL
Author's Response: I'm glad to hear you enjoyed seeing the different sides of Bill's personality. He is kitten sweet, but he knows how to get what he wants. Thanks for reading!
Date: 07/24/10 09:21 pm Title: Creation
"Wow a good fuck can make a mute creature talk XD Tom has a magic stick rofl."
OMG O.O LOL LOL LOL ROFL xD
The fact the chaphter started so sweet and flufy made the sex scene even hotter, even aftewr it started I was never expecting of Tom to actually take it to the end, I was always waiting while reading the scene to see Tom suddenly stop because Bill was just doing what he saw that night in the sofa. I guess that's not the case and the end scene was.....lovely and hot.really hot :)
Author's Response: Tom is definitely going to have some reservations about what happened...he just wasn't really thinking with his head while it was happening, if you know what I mean! Thanks so much for reading!
Date: 07/24/10 09:20 pm Title: Climax
ohmygodohmygodohmygod! *flaily flaily*!!! Soooooo much going on it was quite mindblowing! i sure wasn't expecting all that in one chapter, gosh, incredible! I'm anxious about the morning after reaction though, especially on Tom's part and ohmygod what on earth is going to happen to them both?! wow seriously, you're beyond talented, i think i'm in shock right now xD and aw gosh the ending! Bill said his name *dances* wow, too too good! God, i apologise for such a chaotic review, i'm all over the place after that chapter xD
Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed it! But you're definitely right; the morning after is not going to be all smooth sailing, especially not for Tom. Thanks so much for reading, and reviewing!
Date: 07/24/10 09:12 pm Title: Climax
Aww poor Bill was just as scared as Tom. I think that moment between them was sweet and very loving. I'm glad that Tom finally came to the realization that he loves Bill but i think it is interesting that they seem to be IN love now. They are very passionate together and I'm curious as to how this will go when they wake up in the morning. I'm also really excited that Bill spoke Tom's name:) His first word was Tom! So sweet :)
Author's Response: Yes, I think there will still be some turmoil when they wake up in the morning. After all, Tom DEFINITELY didn't expect this to happen. Thanks so much for reading, and I'm glad to hear you enjoyed the chapter!
Date: 07/24/10 08:40 pm Title: Climax
Wow a good fuck can make a mute creature talk XD Tom has a magic stick rofl.
I missed the last chapter but I'm up to date now :D This was so good. I like how you describe the wings it makes him seems even more awesome.
Author's Response: "Wow a good fuck can make a mute creature talk XD Tom has a magic stick rofl." Of course. That's just SCIENCE. LMAO. Thanks for reading!rn
Date: 07/24/10 07:50 pm Title: Climax
*gasp* he talks! o/
loved the wings at the end btw :d
Author's Response: Thanks! I adore the image of the wings, so I just had to put them in!
Date: 07/24/10 07:21 pm Title: Climax
OMG Perfect. *squeeeeee!!!!!*
So so so sexy. And now he talks.
And I have no words except YES.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it!
Date: 07/24/10 06:57 pm Title: Creation
Okay, I just got to tell you. Haven't read your story (YET!) but the banner is truly awesome!!! :D It looks totally proffessional and stuff ;D
Author's Response: I wish I could take credit for it, but I can't. It's the European movie poster, with just minor changes (I took out a lot of the text on the poster, and removed the creature's breasts). It is a beautiful image, though!
Date: 07/24/10 06:11 pm Title: Climax
Omg! You can't leave it at this point! Update soon!
Author's Response: I'm terrible about leaving you guys with cliffhangers, aren't I? Next update will be on Wednesday. Thanks for reading!
Date: 07/24/10 05:44 pm Title: Climax
Thank you! This was the perfect bed time story. Drool!
xx
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 07/24/10 05:00 pm Title: Climax
WHAT? I totally wasn't expecting for them to have sex in this chapter, although i'm glad that Tom finally just let it happen. & omg Bill finally spoke at the end. Biggest cliffhanger ever. Can't wait to read what happens next. :)
Author's Response: I don't think Tom was expecting it either, LOL! Thanks so much for reading!
Date: 07/24/10 04:57 pm Title: Climax
mmm
that was great
and bill finally spoke!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reading!
Date: 07/24/10 04:53 pm Title: Climax
that was the weirdest sex scene i've ever read... i loved it! xD
Author's Response: Haha...what can I say? I'm a weird girl. I'm glad you liked it, though!