Date: 07/28/10 01:21 pm Title: Breakthrough
wicked banner! And incrdible chapter! I knew there would be conflicting emotions, especially on Tom's part. you really portrayed his emotions so powerfully. I always enjoy reading your work, it's amazing! haha and the end made me chuckle, a bit of up yours for David xD definitely excited for the next part!
Author's Response: Thank you, it's great to hear that you liked how I portrayed Tom's emotions!
Date: 07/28/10 01:21 pm Title: Breakthrough
wicked banner! And incrdible chapter! I knew there would be conflicting emotions, especially on Tom's part. you really portrayed his emotions so powerfully. I always enjoy reading your work, it's amazing! haha and the end made me chuckle, a bit of up yours for David xD definitely excited for the next part!
Date: 07/28/10 12:44 pm Title: Breakthrough
OMG INCEST!!! NOOOO!!!! LOL
I love love love this story!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you're enjoying it!
Date: 07/28/10 11:11 am Title: Breakthrough
Hahaha, Tom handed corporate their asses on a platter! Go him. And Bill is slowly growing up... more sexytiems? Guess we'll wait and see! :D It was an awesome chapter - I love how Bill is starting to talk!!
Jane
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the chapter! Thanks for reading!
Date: 07/28/10 09:45 am Title: Breakthrough
Aww, Bill's soooo cute!
I like your writing style, and this story is so loveable!
Looking forward to next chapter :D
Author's Response: Thank you, it's so nice to hear you like my writing style!
Date: 07/28/10 09:25 am Title: Breakthrough
Ohh, poor Bill. ;__;
I kind of want to punch Tom now. All right, Tom. You've got what's coming to you, even if I don't know what that is, yet.
Author's Response: I really wasn't sure if Bill should punch him or kiss him...but in the end I always go for kisses. *shameless* Thanks for reading!
Date: 07/28/10 08:59 am Title: Breakthrough
Ohh, but people know that they were pretty much out of samples. How's he going to explain where he got a new sample? :/ I'm nervous for them!
Author's Response: Yeah, Tom really wasn't thinking. Thanks for reading!
Date: 07/28/10 08:55 am Title: Breakthrough
Tom is a very confused and not so great boyfriend(?) Is he a boyfriend? Well whatever he is to Bill he's doing sort of a shit job. Sex him up abandon him hurt him and then leave him for the day. He's a bit of a jerk. I'm glad he finally got the protein. I hope Bill stays a secret and coelenterate doesn't dine out about him. Was it just the timing or was is bill's DNA that solved the issue. Lets keep Bill safe please.
Author's Response: Tom is definitely not handling the situation well...although, in his defense, it IS a complicated situation. But yes...Poor Bill. Thanks for reading!
Date: 07/28/10 08:46 am Title: Breakthrough
*giggles* I'm so glad he didn't have to cut off Bill's tail! :)
Author's Response: I was so horrified when that happened in the movie! Seeing Dren strapped to that table was just terrible...no way would Tom do that to Bill, no matter how confused he gets about their relationship. Thanks for reading!
Date: 07/28/10 08:16 am Title: Breakthrough
Ugh, I'm feeling so conflicted over Tom's character right now! I understand all his emotions regarding why what he and Bill did were wrong, and why he feels he took advantage of Bill. Still, I can't help but think him pushing Bill away will make everything ten times worse. God this is getting so good... xD
Author's Response: I'm glad you're still enjoying the story!
Date: 07/28/10 08:15 am Title: Breakthrough
Yay! Awkwardness! Wow. Bill is one horny hybrid. O.O But in a loving way of course. His second word! Just to bad it was because he was in pain. T.T
Loved it an can't wait for the next chapter! ^_^
Author's Response: Hahaha..."Bill is one horny hybrid." Too true. But who could resist Tom? Thanks for reading!
Date: 07/28/10 12:41 am Title: Climax
Ok I've finally watched the movie so I can appreciate this fic much more so I had to review again :D. I hope he doesn't die like in the movie a rock to the head is a brutal way to go:/
When i saw that guy having sex with Dren I was like ewww she's an experiment lol. Wonder why I think it's alright if it's 'Bill and Tom' so weird of me XD
It's like Bill and Tom make everything alright in my world >.
Author's Response: I feel the same way! The scene in the movie made me VERY uncomfortable, but then I go and write a story about Bill and Tom doing it. Ah, well...
Date: 07/26/10 11:47 pm Title: Climax
Oh my , I love the climax chapter!
you need to finish it soon >:)
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed the chapter! The next one should be up on Wednesday.
Date: 07/26/10 06:10 pm Title: Creation
actually today i watched this movie.
accidentally
it was somewhat yack
but the idea is ok, your plot is better and more abt love
Author's Response: Well, the movie was much more horror-based than my story, but I think it had a lot of interesting elements. Glad you're enjoying the story!
Date: 07/26/10 01:36 am Title: Climax
ouch
it was so hot
wow
thanks
dirty billa, lol
Author's Response: Glad you liked the chapter!
Date: 07/25/10 08:16 pm Title: Creation
hi..
i made a banner for your story..
IS HORRIBLE.
http://i25.tinypic.com/sq0ck1.jpg
*I also made several manipulations of color of this*
*runaway*
Author's Response: Wow, thank you! That looks really cool!
Date: 07/25/10 05:24 pm Title: Climax
Omg that was so hot !
I wonder how Tom is going to feel about that in the morning tho... can't wait to read more :)
Author's Response: I think we can probably expect some introspective angst, lol. Glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 07/25/10 10:49 am Title: Climax
OH shit i forgot about the speaking. It would make sense if you think about it. Because meals have Adams apples. They develop later in a boy/mans life. I mean You hear the development of it in the real Bill's voice from when he was little to now. Oh did you get the Humanoid City Live DVD/CD? I LOVE it. I have watched the DVD twice and I only got it today. Now He'll be able to speak his mind. That is scary stuff right there. This is a mixture of messed up stuff btw. Bestiality/incest/twincest. I don't know if it would count as underage erotica though. . . .That is a stumper. Thank you for updating.
Author's Response: I haven't gotten my DVD yet, because amazon.co.uk sucks and it was delayed. I want to watch it so badly! Glad you enjoyed the chapter, and thanks for reading!
Date: 07/25/10 09:35 am Title: Climax
Haha, Bill talked!!
...me love sexytiems. :D Fab job.
Jane
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 07/25/10 04:45 am Title: Climax
oh wow!! Very hot, and yet slightly disturbing at the same time. But the end...he can speak!!! I love it!! I cant wait for the next part, keep up the fabulous work!!
Author's Response: It should definitely be a bit disturbing. I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter, and thanks for reading!