Date: 08/01/10 01:05 am Title: The Calm
oh god
Author's Response: I'm evil to put so many cliffhangers in this thing, I know. Thanks so much for reading!
Date: 07/31/10 08:52 pm Title: The Calm
ooh! I'm very glad for the update. such a sweet encounter between them. I love Bill slowly using words as well. however, what a cliffie!! update again soon please!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter! Thanks for reading!
Date: 07/31/10 07:47 pm Title: The Calm
I wanted to say that I keep reading this fic every time you update a chapter. It's actually one of the priority fics if there are several to read. I've just been terrible to review lately, but just wanted to say that I still löike the story very much :).
I think you write an interesting inner conflict when Tom struggles with thoughts like zoophelia & incest in a way that Bill is part of HIMSELF. It's not seen very often and gives a whole new level. Bill is adorable in his childlike appearance with full blown sensuality.
You make tyhis very beautiful and I can't wait to find out what David has in his mind. Just wishing so hard a happy, simple life for Tom & Bill, but knowing the inevitable problems and difficult questions which are ahead.
Author's Response: Thank you, it's great to hear you're still reading and enjoying the story! And I'm glad to hear you like the internal conflicts that Tom is wrestling with...Bill certainly brings up a lot of issues for the poor boy.
Date: 07/31/10 06:36 pm Title: The Calm
Oh oh! What is he doing there !
Really sweet chapter, you're writing is just so perfect, it's a pleasure to read! =)
Author's Response: Thank you, it's great to hear you like my writing style!
Date: 07/31/10 06:18 pm Title: The Calm
Oops =S
Author's Response: Exactly. Thanks for reading!
Date: 07/31/10 05:15 pm Title: The Calm
More sexy time! Yay! I'm scared to find out what David's gonna say. O.O
And just to clear things up (AKA my extreme confusion), DOES Bill have a dick? Cause you don't exactly mention it much if he does. He's obviously male, but the lack of explanation on that has left me horribly confused. Plz explain???
But I loved the chapter! Can't wait for the next one. ^_^
Author's Response: Haha...best question ever! Because I keep my sex scenes at a soft R, I don't use the more explicit language (i.e. "cock"), but he definitely does have one! For instance, from chapter ten: "There was no question that Bill wanted this; the evidence lay hard and rosy against his lean stomach, and Tom had it in his hand before he knew what he was doing. Bill gasped as he stroked him, thumbing at the head and watching the creature’s eyes flutter shut." Hope that clears it up, and thanks for reading!
Date: 07/31/10 05:07 pm Title: The Calm
Ohh god oh god oh god alkdfjafj
Okay, the love making was gorgeous. Just gorgeous. But I'm so nervous! I'm afraid this is going to be one of those stories where they come and take Bill away and it's gonna break my heart!
Author's Response: If it reassures you, I don't think I can do heartbreaking. But there is definitely some drama ahead! Thanks so much for reading!
Date: 07/31/10 03:28 pm Title: Breakthrough
Excellent chapter! I really like your story =)
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm so glad you're enjoying it!
Date: 07/31/10 03:22 pm Title: The Calm
ooooohhhhh snap!!!! whats going to happen?!?! is he going to find bill?!?!?!?! what happenes next!!! update soon!
Author's Response: The suspense! Next update will be on Wednesday. Thanks for reading!
Date: 07/31/10 03:20 pm Title: Climax
He spoke !
Author's Response: Yep! Certainly took Tom by surprise. Thanks for reading!
Date: 07/31/10 03:13 pm Title: Emotion
Poor Tom, he'll have a heart attack one day !
Author's Response: He IS a little high-strung. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 07/31/10 02:28 pm Title: The Calm
Oh shit... WHAT'S GONNA HAPPEN? WHAT THE HELL DO YOU WANT, DAVID? I'M BUSY AND YOU GOT YOUR DAMN PROTEIN!
Oh shit... Um the protein has bits of Tom swimming in it, since he got a sample from Bill. OH SHIT.
*clears throat* Um, can't wait until the next update.
Author's Response: Haha, I'm glad you're enjoying the drama! Thanks so much for reading!
Date: 07/31/10 02:27 pm Title: The Calm
SHIT! What's David there for? Does he know about Bill because of the protein, or something? NOBODY BETTER TAKE BILL AWAY FROM TOM!
I don't mind short chapters when they're this good :) That was beautiful. I'm glad Tom's giving in to his feelings for Bill. Wanting Bill to know he's more than just an easy fuck. Loved this chapter and I'm excited about the next update ;)
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked the chapter, even though it was a bit short!
Date: 07/31/10 02:27 pm Title: The Calm
I think I have whiplash, I went from OOOH to OMG!! so fast.
So...someone figured out what he did, huh? Or maybe Georg went to the higher ups? Or maybe human DNA is like a GLARING BEACON?
I like how sweet Tom is to Bill in this chapter, showing him how he feels, and I hope Bill understands and keeps that one "I love you" in his heart.
I am very glad you posted this rather than waiting, and yes, the suspense is taut and making me REALLY look forward to next week!
Author's Response: Thank you! It's great to hear the suspense is working--and more drama is definitely ahead.
Date: 07/31/10 01:31 pm Title: Reaction
Bill needs love =)
Author's Response: He definitely does! Thanks for reading!
Date: 07/31/10 01:27 pm Title: The Calm
Well this should be interesting, next chapter. I'm curious to see how this will play out and if Bill will emerge and eviscerate David with his tail.
I'm glad Tom discovered that he loved him before it was too late.
Author's Response: Definite drama ahead...brace yourself. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Date: 07/31/10 01:08 pm Title: Fever
Georg wanted to kill him D=
Author's Response: Yes...and poor Tom can't see that. Thanks for reading!
Date: 07/31/10 12:17 pm Title: Creation
I guess Tom could always go with 'I slipped my own DNA in there, never created anything blah blah' ...right? >.>
Author's Response: Like, accidentally? ...maybe. I guess we'll have to wait and see, lol!
Date: 07/31/10 12:08 pm Title: The Calm
Oh no o.o I'm nervous!
Author's Response: It's an evil cliffhanger, I know. Thanks for reading!
Date: 07/31/10 11:32 am Title: The Calm
Aww man. With a cliff hanger like that it makes the waiting for this chapter not so rough. I drew the fan art. But I don't know if it could be counted as done.
Tell me what you think. The background is shitty, but I always suck at backgrounds. I hope that you update soon. Also I din't know you wrote Beast I love that fic as well. Though Now the roles are a little switched from that story yeah? Now what are you going to have David do HE can't take Bill away can he, or destroy him? I mean Bill has to much valuable DNA to be offed. Also Where is Gusti in all of this fic? He is not in it if I recall. I feel kind of bad not noticing it before though.
Author's Response: Oh my god, that is GORGEOUS! Wow, I'm completely blown away. Thank you so much! I love that he's holding his teddy...precious! I'm happy to hear you like Beast as well...I can't seem to stay away from the creature fics, lol. And well spotted: Gustav hasn't made an appearance...yet. I promise he'll be in it, though.