Date: 08/08/10 10:07 am Title: Flight
GUSTI! Awesome, I was wondering how he was going to get into the story. I missed him. I liked how you wrote the part where they were leaving and Bill holding the teddy bear to his chest. It brought my fan art to life in a whole new way. Thank you. Also keep the chapters coming, it is better when there is more meat in them. It makes it a lot more tolerable to wait for the next chapter when you have read a longer chapter prier. So I am amusing that Tomi grew up with Gusti, went to the same school or neighbors of some sort. It would be better is they knew each other for a weird circumstance. One that could not be documented. Like a car accident. I mean who would want to become friends with someone that was responsible for toddling your car. Maybe a cow got in the way? Harming a family member of Toms but not enough to orphan Tom in the process. That would make Gusti's place become a save haven. People will not come looking there. They would look to his family first. It would be even better is there was no family no to speak off and the closet person to Tom that anyone really knows about is Georg. That would lead to some dead ends.
Author's Response: That would certainly throw the police/corporate off the trail, but unfortunately, Tom didn't have a lot of options of who to go to at this point. He's pretty desperate. I couldn't help but mention the teddy bear again after seeing your picture--I just thought it fit so well! Thanks again for the lovely art, and for reading and reviewing!
Date: 08/08/10 12:54 am Title: Flight
Aww I can't wait for the next chapter :))
Author's Response: Should be up on Wednesday! Thanks for reading!
Date: 08/08/10 12:53 am Title: Flight
Shit. :'(
Author's Response: Pretty much. Thanks for reading!
Date: 08/07/10 10:44 pm Title: Flight
P.S., I love long chapters. :D
Author's Response: Good to know! I just don't want it to feel like the chapters are dragging, or anything.
Date: 08/07/10 10:43 pm Title: Flight
Damn, I want to leave a nice long comment because this deserves it, but I'm so behind on everything I just gotta say, I'm loving this, all of Tom's reactions along with his conscious decision to accept Bill as he is and go to whatever lengths needed to protect him, and Gustav is the man. ♥ I love this fic and I've recced it to my f-list TWICE.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! It's great to hear you like the story enough to recommend it to others!
Date: 08/07/10 08:17 pm Title: Flight
I feel so sorry for tom and bill! D:
I hope everyting works out, promise me there isnt any major character death!!!!
I saw a poster for spilce in a magazine and i ripped it out, in the shop, and stuff it in my coat pocket then left XD bold i know, but i couldnt help it! Im thinking of chaning it so it says 'he' and has tom and bill on it XDDD
im crazy!
Author's Response: Oh, no! I'm inspiring petty theft! jk....I probably would have done the same. And don't worry about the major character death; I would have put a warning for it. Thanks so much for reading!
Date: 08/07/10 06:41 pm Title: Flight
Gustav's character was just introduced and I'm already liking him. I also really like how you contrast Bill's sweet and innocent side with the more violent aspect of his personality. It's very interesting to read and adds yet another level to his character and the story.
Author's Response: Aw, I'm glad you like Gustav! He really doesn't get enough time in any of my stories, and I felt bad leaving his character out of things until this late. Thank so much for reading!
Date: 08/07/10 04:18 pm Title: Flight
cant wait for more
Author's Response: I'm so glad you're still enjoying the story! Thanks for reading!
Date: 08/07/10 04:14 pm Title: Flight
I'm so curious how they're going to get out of this and find a way to stay together. Thank goodness for friends who don't ask questions.
Author's Response: It's definitely a difficult situation, isn't it? Thanks so much for reading!
Date: 08/07/10 02:57 pm Title: Flight
oh yay!!!! i love this chapter! haha david got what he deserved!!! i just hope that all works out for bill and tom!! please let corporate, like, use bill and not kill him and tom not get in trouble!!!! well update soon please!!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked the chapter, and thanks for reading!
Date: 08/07/10 12:47 pm Title: Flight
OMG never too verbose. It's always perfect. Xoxoxo
Author's Response: Thank you, that's so nice to hear!
Date: 08/07/10 12:47 pm Title: Flight
Oh, god, I'm so worried about what's going to happen after this. D: Obviously there's no more turning back now that David's, um, gone - and good riddance, clearly I have plenty of morals here - but I'm on the edge of my seat wondering whether the police will get involved, whether corporate will find them... You are awesome at building tension until I'm about ready to snap!
Author's Response: Thank you, it's so flattering to hear that from one of my favorite authors on this site!
Date: 08/07/10 12:10 pm Title: Flight
This has more suspense than the movie XD
Oh and don't worry about the chapter length, long chapters mean you love us :P
I thought Georg would have came around and accepted Bill :/
Author's Response: Wow, thank you--that's so nice of you to say! Unfortunately, Georg just can't see things from Tom's point of view. Perhaps Gustav will be more understanding?
Date: 08/07/10 12:01 pm Title: Flight
Imagine my delight upon coming from holidays and seeing 12 chapters waiting for me. I just could not let go of it.
So, so good. I just love how the story has progressed, and the fact that Bill killed David in their defense, I just, oh, there's no words.
You've written in perfectly, adding Gustav to the mix now just makes me smile widely ^^ Can't wait to see what part he plays.
I saw the picure by Hisui and it's just looking amazing.
I doubt that the movie is this good :P
As you can probably tell I'm babbling, but it is that good.
So yep, keep going, you doing an amazing job ^^
Brilliant writing and development of the story!
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm so glad to hear you're enjoying the story!
Date: 08/07/10 11:48 am Title: Flight
Well, Tom is certainly up the creek now, isn't he? You talk about the chapters getting longer like that's a bad thing. It isn't!
Author's Response: I'm glad you think it isn't! I just want to avoid having the chapters drag out unnecessarily. But as long as people think they read okay, I guess I'll stick with what I've been doing. Thanks so much for reading, and reviewing!
Date: 08/07/10 10:52 am Title: Flight
I'm glad they could escape but I have the feeling it won't last long... Awesome chapter =)
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading!
Date: 08/07/10 10:13 am Title: Flight
Long? That was not long that went by so quick. I'm so glad he could think of a temporary place to hide. I hope Bill and Tom are OK. I like them both. Delicious addition. It had a good mix of tension and hope. I really look forward to seeing where this all will go. This is totally one of my wip favorites!
Author's Response: Thank you, that's so nice of you to say!
Date: 08/07/10 10:00 am Title: Flight
Awwww, leaving Gustav out of the loop like that :3 I have a feeling that he's gonna find out, one way or another though. He seems like he would take it well? >_-
Can't wait for more! :D
Author's Response: He's certainly a lot less high-strung than Georg. Glad you liked the chapter!
Date: 08/07/10 09:26 am Title: Flight
Oh, you just keep the words coming, I don't mind! :)
I don't know why this was so emotional chapter to me, but it was just so full of so much desperation and different emotions that I could barely breath. I don't even understanmd why I wanted to cry.
How overwhelming can be the realisation when you understand you can't survive, there is no way out? The moment you realise that you've probably just lost everything?
Author's Response: It's actually awesome to hear that you found this chapter to be an emotional one. I felt that way writing it, as well, even though not that much 'happens' (in comparison to the last few chapters). Thanks so much for reading, and reviewing!
Date: 08/07/10 08:34 am Title: Flight
I just seriously love this story! i get so exited everytime i see that it's updated and i just can't wait to read more! and i don't mind that the chapters are getting longer. not at all. thank you for an awsome story!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you're enjoying the story! And as long as everyone is happy with the chapter lengths, I'm sure they'll continue to be long. I just can't seem to help myself, once I start writing.