Date: 08/11/10 09:03 pm Title: Haven
Gustav is a good friend, and the sex was AMAZINK. A+ rainbowmenky is a boon to us all.
I think it's only natural they sought intimacy and comfort with each other that way. :B (Plus, yes, I enjoyed it a whole heck of a lot.)
You make me worried, both for what comes next and Bill's aging cycle. *checks for MCD warning, already pre-emptively grabbing kleenex*
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the intimacy! When I thought about adding a sex scene, it did feel rather natural for them, given Tom's state of mind. But then it felt like a whole lot of nothing actually happened in this chapter...but there is drama enough to come, I suppose. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Date: 08/11/10 08:38 pm Title: Haven
Hey , Its LostInTheMusic
I want more of this storii b29;
Author's Response: I'm glad you're still enjoying it! Thanks for reading!
Date: 08/11/10 07:28 pm Title: Haven
omg
hey, how about having a BotTom sex scene? Please. Please. please.
Author's Response: I actually really like stories where Tom bottoms, but I'm not sure it's how these two characters really work together. But I'll keep it in mind. Thanks for reading!
Date: 08/11/10 03:35 pm Title: Haven
this chappie is delicious!!!!!! gosh pleaselet them get out okay!!! more soon please!!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reading!
Date: 08/11/10 03:32 pm Title: Creation
Oh, sorry for reviewing again!
But I really needed to say this. First, I love your story, but you already knew that :')
But next, I was watching the website of the cinema nearby me today, and saw that the move ''Splice'' is coming to my country soon! :O
Now I'm reading this story, I've so gotta see the movie! I think then I can imagine the chapters of this story better then! :)
But back to your story:
I love it! I can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response: You should definitely go see the movie! I'll be interested to hear how it changes your perspective on this story!
Date: 08/11/10 03:25 pm Title: Haven
Wauw, love it once again!
Author's Response: I'm so glad to hear it!
Date: 08/11/10 01:00 pm Title: Haven
Sex like that is never a filler! OMG heart racing they are going to get caught. How did they find him?
Author's Response: That's something we'll find out in the next chapter, I suppose. I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter, and thanks for reading!
Date: 08/11/10 12:31 pm Title: Haven
No need to apologize for a sex scene :P
Gustav is such a good friend, way better than Georg !
So sad that Bill is dying tho... I can't wait to read the next chapter!
Author's Response: Yes, I hoped Gustav would make up for Georg's betrayal. Thanks so much for reading!
Date: 08/11/10 11:11 am Title: Haven
thank for another wonderful chapter! I'm so worried about them. and sad by bill's accelerated lifestyle. I can't help but want happily ever after for them.
Author's Response: I don't always write HAPPY endings, but I don't write sad ones, either. So...that's something. Thanks so much for reading, and reviewing!
Date: 08/11/10 09:26 am Title: Haven
Even though your cliff-hangers kill me every time, I really think you utilize them in a great way. They always leave off at just the right moment so it doesn't feel like you forced anything by way of the plot or character development. And of course, I'm super anxious to see what will happen next. xD
Author's Response: Thank you! That's actually great to hear. I know I've been having a lot of cliffhangers in this story, but I try not to abuse the concept...I'm glad to hear you think they work well here. Thanks so much for reading!
Date: 08/11/10 09:09 am Title: Haven
Oh no! I feel like they're gonna kill Gustav now, and we just met him! D:
If Gustav took a minute to think about what Tom said, I'm sure he could piece together what happened. He actually may have already done so xD
But anyway, I'm HOPING Gustav will live through it and Tom will get away to Tahiti or wherever he and Bill end up. :3
Author's Response: Mmm...Tahiti does sound nice. Although, I think even the Tahitians would be alarmed by Bill, lol. Thanks so much for reading!
Date: 08/11/10 08:52 am Title: Haven
Doesn't feel like filler at all; it feels natural that they would take comfort in each other right now. The rest of the chapter has me flailing. As per usual. lol
Author's Response: I'm so glad to hear that! Thanks so much for reading, and reviewing!
Date: 08/11/10 08:06 am Title: Haven
Four for Rainbowmenky and her powers of persuasion!!! Omg I'm sew nehvahz!!!
Author's Response: Haha...I can be prodded into almost anything. Thanks so much for reading!
Date: 08/11/10 07:32 am Title: Haven
no no, it doesn't feel like a filler! It was another fabulous chapter, seriously so good! Gaah i wasn't expecting to reach the end, it just snuck up xD i'm definitely excited for the upcoming chapter, things just don't seem to stop for Tom and Bill. Aw i love this, so much! xxxo
Author's Response: Yeah, they only get a short break...poor boys. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Date: 08/11/10 07:10 am Title: Flight
oh my god! I feel like i'm in a movie! this is so exciting :O i thought Gustav might pop up somewhen or another, i like that he did :) he seems like a completely lovable character, but i'm not trusting of him 100% just yet, given Tom's circumstances. oh! And before i forget as i did last time, wooooow that fanart was fantastic! Really something incredible :)
Author's Response: Wow, that's such a compliment! Especially basing it on a film, I'm glad this story is capturing some of that excitement for you. Thanks so much for reading!
Date: 08/11/10 06:08 am Title: Haven
Just as amazing as always, looking forward to see what happens next :)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 08/11/10 05:53 am Title: Haven
Already ? oh no =(
Gustav is so nice =)
Author's Response: Hopefully Gustav makes up for Georg. Thanks for reading!
Date: 08/10/10 07:47 pm Title: The Storm
ooh my first fic i've read in over a week! Man i've missed this fic xD soo glad to be back on this site, i always always am. God, and this chapter! i can't believe how much happened! throughout the whole chapter i was just wanting Bill to jump it and fly away haha. but oh my god, i can't believe he killed David, whoa i was not expecting that! I have absolutely no idea what's in store for us in the upcoming chapters, but wow wow, as always i'm completely blown away by your writing, soooo incredible :D
Author's Response: A week without fic, huh? I'd start to go through withdrawal. I'm glad you liked the chapter, and thanks for reading!
Date: 08/09/10 04:03 pm Title: Flight
Long chapters are NEVER a bad thing, at least in my opinion...
I hope things are going to be okay for them.... :(
Can't wait for the next chapter !
Author's Response: Good to know! I think I won't worry about how lengthy the chapters get, then. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 08/08/10 11:47 pm Title: Flight
Ok so, I'm a little worried about what will happen now. George is set on telling and I'm scared for what will happen not only to Tom but especially Bill. He acted on instinct and was protecting Tom. I'm sure that accounts for something. I really hope this turns out well.
Author's Response: They're definitely in a very difficult situation, aren't they? Thanks so much for reading!