Date: 08/14/10 12:28 pm Title: Caught
I had a feeling that the CEO would come into play, but of course, I had no idea how it would work out. Tricky. Tricky.
Author's Response: I couldn't leave her out, I really liked her character in the film. She was just creepy enough. Thanks so much for reading!
Date: 08/14/10 11:36 am Title: Caught
Oh my! My face literally was D: :D
It doesn't seem like a bad~ idea, I hope Tom agrees.
Author's Response: It's probably the best offer he's going to get, to be honest. Thanks so much for reading!
Date: 08/14/10 11:30 am Title: Caught
See, now that's a bit more reasonable *nodnod*
The biggest problem would be having a bunch of different SENTIENT CREATURES running around a lab. PETA would have a field day with this one >.>
Amazing chapter, as always, I can't wait for more ^^
Author's Response: Definitely not PETA approved. But I don't think any of the experiments they've been doing would go over that well with animal rights activists. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Date: 08/14/10 11:03 am Title: Caught
I just love this story! got nothing more to say!
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you're enjoying it!
Date: 08/14/10 10:34 am Title: Caught
I was hoping Tom and Bill wouldn't have to run forever. This is a lovely twist in the plot. Go greedy CEOs...!! Yeah....!!
OMG Bill clones. I want one. :D
Author's Response: Right? I would put an order in for one ASAP. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 08/14/10 10:15 am Title: Caught
oooh this is a new interesting turn of events! cant wait to read what happens next
Author's Response: Glad you like where it's going! Thanks for reading!
Date: 08/14/10 10:10 am Title: Creation
YAY! Maybe Bill and Tom and be together for the long terem!!! I knew you could do it!!!!!
Author's Response: That's what Tom's hoping for, anyway. Thanks for reading!
Date: 08/14/10 09:17 am Title: Caught
Gahhh this is so good!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 08/14/10 08:02 am Title: Caught
I think it was awesome! When I first read the title to the chapter I was like "shit, they're so screwed :((" but I really like how this is turning out actuallly :D
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad to hear you like where it's going.
Date: 08/14/10 07:24 am Title: Caught
Holy... :O
I'm curious how this is gonna proceed! But once again, lovely!
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed the chapter!
Date: 08/14/10 05:35 am Title: Caught
Oooooooh! More Bills?! How will Tom cope with all the love?! :P
Author's Response: Haha...it would be a little overwhelming, wouldn't it? Thanks for reading!
Date: 08/14/10 04:17 am Title: Caught
I knew this was coming and yet still I feel like another shoe is going to drop. I'm biting my nails...
Not really, but it's the thought that counts, lol.
Author's Response: I'm glad you're feeling the tension--that's what I was hoping for! Thanks so much for reading!
Date: 08/14/10 04:16 am Title: Caught
I was so afraid for them at first! And the lady's deal really surprised me. She wants more Bills?! I don't know how I'd feel about that if I were Tom...
♥
Author's Response: I think he's going to be more than a little reluctant. After all, Bill is special. Thanks so much for reading!
Date: 08/14/10 04:13 am Title: Caught
Ooooh, things get even more interesting. I think this is one of my favorite chapters, and I can't wait to read Tom's answer to her request.
Author's Response: Wow, thanks! I was worried how people would respond to this chapter, so I'm thrilled to hear that it's one of your favorites.
Date: 08/14/10 04:01 am Title: Caught
Oh. Oh, wow, okay. I wasn't expecting that at all. Though it does make sense. But. He helps them make more Bills, one would think they would be of the same intelligence (more or less) and awareness as the prototype. So he would be growing very sentient beings solely to be experimented on. I was going to say that even for a scientist, that can't be moral...but then I remembered the scene of him cutting into Bill for the sample.
Very interesting! Yeah, I'm really anxious to see how this plays out. Thanks for another great chapter!
Author's Response: It's a good point--he doesn't want to condemn Bill to that kind of life, but would he be willing to do it others like him? Tom hasn't exactly proven himself to be the most moral of characters. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter and thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Date: 08/14/10 03:50 am Title: Caught
O_O A DEVIL'S DEAL, is what I think of it. I feel like it's too good to be true!
Annnnd I'm not sure she knows what she's asking, proposing that Tom make an ARMY of Bills. What would happen if they're ALL horny for Tom? >_> Um. I'm gonna stop the review here before it gets weird.
Author's Response: Well, THERE'S a side story for this if ever I heard one. Now I can't get that image out of my head, haha. Thanks for reading and reviewing (weird mental images included)!
Date: 08/14/10 03:37 am Title: Caught
Wowza , I needz some more :))
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it! Next update will be on Wednesday.
Date: 08/14/10 03:34 am Title: Caught
Oh my God. I was so scared ;~; I think I like how this is turning out. I'm still nervous.
Author's Response: I'm glad you like where I'm taking the story! Thanks for reading!
Date: 08/12/10 09:22 pm Title: Haven
Now we are on the run once again. Sorry that I didn't read the chapter earlier. I was too tired from work. Thank You for updating as quick as you do. This fic has no happy ending coming. It just all ends with death, like most things in this world. It's all about what you do with the time that is alotted to you. Even if it's of good things it will all be too short for it to just be bitersweet at most. ~sighs~ Well keep up with the updates.
Author's Response: Oh, don't take such a negative view! Wait and find out. Thanks for reading!
Date: 08/12/10 05:55 am Title: Haven
Oh good Lord, I loooooooove this story! I started reading yesterday evening, and I just read all the chapters so far without stopping (well, only for a bit of sleep =P) I'm desperate for a new chapter! Keep up the amazing work!
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad to hear you're enjoying it!