Date: 08/18/10 04:55 am Title: Choices
Great chapter, you're doing an amazing work with this story!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 08/16/10 04:25 pm Title: Caught
oh wow
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Date: 08/16/10 10:16 am Title: Caught
YAY! Bill will not die, at least not soon!
Great turn of events, I didn't expect that but I'm so glad it went well... it was so sad to see them in each others arms, kinda waiting to be kill... and Tom saying that he loves Bill... so adorable !
Author's Response: I'm glad you like the developments that came this chapter! And thanks for reading!
Date: 08/15/10 03:08 pm Title: Caught
omg O____O amazing story
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Date: 08/15/10 02:44 pm Title: Flight
this is amazing
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you're enjoying it!
Date: 08/15/10 12:11 pm Title: Learning
aww this is just so amazing love this idea :)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 08/15/10 11:46 am Title: New Life
i really really like this story :) i have not see the movie but the lill animal is kinde of cute ^^
Author's Response: I think it's pretty cute, too! I saw the movie with my mother, and she was totally disgusted by little Dren, whereas I was going, "I want one!" LOL I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far, and thanks for reading!
Date: 08/15/10 10:03 am Title: Caught
More, that will be an issue. I mean Tom is to attached to Bill and to make more just the mental capacity to deal with that at this point is little to none. There has got to be another way to make more with out making them like Bill. Yes you could accelerate the age but is there a way to make them more vegetable like? That in it's self seems so wrong as well. Also we have to look at the fact that Tom is also part of this DNA blend. Maybe Tom's DNA alone has the missing link that they need. What happens when Tom "expires" as well? I guess they could keep Tom's DNA on file. It is scary to think when money is involved, everyone is willing to over look the corruption to get that money. Blood money at that. They are going to want to get a few samples but they are not going to need much if they are going to be make more. I am just so worried that Tom is going to be the company's more then Bill. The tables might quickly turn to Tom being poked, prodded, experimented upon. Well thank you for updating. Love reading and reviewing. I think one of the main reason why I love reviewing is I get a response back in return.
Author's Response: That's certainly an interesting point--Tom's as much a part of this experiment as Bill is, perhaps even more. And, of course, it's a difficult moral decision for him, since he views Bill as a person, not just an animal to be experimented on. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter, and thanks so much for reviewing! I'm always happy to respond to reviews. You guys have such interesting ideas about the story!
Date: 08/15/10 05:49 am Title: Caught
i am anxious to see how tom will choose. this will be a very difficult decision...
Author's Response: It certainly will! Thanks so much for reading!
Date: 08/15/10 12:44 am Title: Creation
Hehe, that looks like hella fun! Like an easy-bake oven but with actual living creatures XD (is half kidding)
Mm, I'm going to try to finally read this... I really didn't like the movie, (lol, so I'll probably not like the chaps that mirror it) but I had adored the concept. So hopefully I'll like this better.
Author's Response: I'll be interested to hear what you think about this story compared to the film. I really liked the idea behind the movie, but I found some of the execution perplexing. And, of course, I'm making this a bit more of a romance than the film was. Anyway, thanks for reading, and reviewing!
Date: 08/14/10 11:07 pm Title: Caught
That's interesting. I understand that Bill has something that want and I know it would be hard for Tom to make this decision. Making more creatures like Bill would be difficult. Maybe the person they should be asking is Bill though. I mean it is his life they are talking about and he can speak for himself to a point. Tom could ask Bill what he wants. I really hope they can work this out. I want to see Bill and Tom together for more time than what they have now but I don't want Bill to be some kind of lab rat. It isn't fair to him. He's so special.
Author's Response: Unfortunately, while Ms. Chorot is making an effort for Tom's sake, I don't think corporate really considers Bill enough of a person to ask his opinion. After all, he is their 'property,' poor Bill. Thanks so much for reading!
Date: 08/14/10 08:32 pm Title: Caught
I love and hate this chapter because it instills some hope on me that things will work out for them, but I just don't trust it. It makes me nervous to believe that everything will work out the way I want.
Author's Response: Things ARE still rather complicated. Thanks so much for reading!
Date: 08/14/10 07:03 pm Title: Caught
I really like Ms. Chorot's character. OFC's can always seem so awkward in stories, but she fits nicely into the universe you created (that and she's really badass). And I'm extremely curious to know what's going to happen next, especially with the possibility of dozens of Bills running around...
Author's Response: Oh, that's great to hear! I never really write OFC, but I had a lot of fun with Ms. Chorot. I kind of want to grow up to be her but, you know, less morally ambiguous. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Date: 08/14/10 04:47 pm Title: Caught
0////0!!!!!! oh my gosh!!!! yay!!!!!!! they got off with only a slap on the wrist!!! yay!!!! well now that that is in order then that means that if tom makes more of bill (more "specimins") then that means thatb he gets bill all to himself!!! and the others for corporate!!! YAY!!! cant wait for the next chappie!!! more soon please!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter, and thanks for reading!
Date: 08/14/10 04:13 pm Title: Caught
Wow, surprising chapter! Didn't expect this! I'm verrrrrry curious what Tom is gonna do now! Keep on writing, I love it!
Author's Response: Well, I'm glad I could surprise you! I like to know I'm still keeping readers on their toes.
Date: 08/14/10 01:56 pm Title: Caught
Hmm... You are offering us a difficult ethical dilemma here. It felt so good at the beginning, an easy way out, but... I really don't know, how to continue here? I'm happy that you offered us this complicat6ed dilemma and not making things easy. Bittersweet.
Author's Response: Poor Tom was also hoping for an easy way out, but at least he knew not to expect that from corporate. Thanks so much for reading, and reviewing!
Date: 08/14/10 01:37 pm Title: Haven
I don'tr mind the sex scene. Especially because it was very beautiful, touching even. Very love filled. I think it fitted like that. Okay, now to the next chapter...
Author's Response: I'm glad you think it fit into the chapter. Thanks for reading!
Date: 08/14/10 01:17 pm Title: Caught
:O I knew the offer to fix Bill and lengthen his life sounded too good to be true. Augh, I want Tom and Bill to have a lifetime together, but also... very worried about what would happen to the resulting creatures if Tom did replicate the process. I mean, Bill's intelligent, he can speak, he can love, so it wouldn't be fair to keep any other being like him cooped up in a lab to be sliced and diced. AHHH.
So yes, very concerned about that. But oh, do I ever want Bill to be fixed. ;_; So happy Tom told Bill he loved him; so sweet!
Author's Response: It's definitely a moral conundrum for Tom, isn't it? And he hasn't proven himself to be too good with those in the past...I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter, and thanks so much for reading!
Date: 08/14/10 01:01 pm Title: Caught
Dang, things just got complicated. What will Tom choose?
Suffering, labs, and clones are the price of Bill's continued life. Plus Tom will have to deal with the emotional and ethical impact of making more Bills.
But if he let Bill live out the rest of his little life-span in freedom, loving him until he dies....
Author's Response: It's certainly a very difficult choice for Tom. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Date: 08/14/10 12:31 pm Title: Caught
OMG it was very unexpected and I really love how the story is going =D
And the woman speaks French ! Her name doesn't look very French though, perhaps "Joanne" would be better but of course it's your choice =)
Author's Response: You know, I didn't think so either, but it's the character's name from the film. I actually thought about going with the actress' name (Simona Maicanescu) because it sounded more intimidating, but I thought "Simona" was too close to "Simone." Ah, well. Thanks so much for reading, and reviewing!