Date: 08/11/12 02:21 am Title: Chapter 1
i feel like crying...this was emotional...
Date: 08/09/11 10:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh my god you made me cry a lot!!!!
Date: 08/29/10 01:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
this one made me cry.....
(Bills song, dont jump... saved my life. he saved my life)
A story like this.... almost impossible to read.... :(
Author's Response: awh, I hope it didn't make you too sad! I'm glad you get moved by it though, that's the meaning.. I hope you enjoyed it :) x
Date: 07/12/10 01:38 am Title: Chapter 1
That was so sad. Very well done...but *sniff* heartbreaking too.
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Date: 06/24/10 07:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aww, so tragic, and emotional, and painful. :(
The line that really got me was
>>"Why couldn’t you just let me fucking die? I had to be the one under the ground, don’t you understand?"
which I think is a very Tom thing to say, and it's also heartbreaking.
I think this story was good, but I wish I could say it was better than that. The truth is that I think you need to review your work again and iron out a bunch of grammar mistakes and a few typos, because in such a raw and gutsy plot line you cant afford to distract your reader with simple mistakes like that. This story deserves better. A beta read is a quick fix that will work wonders for this story, and really make it shine. Because it really is beautiful. Ok? Well done though. :)
Author's Response: thank youu i'm glad you liked it :] rnand thanks for the tip, i'll try to get a betareader to read it over because indeed, I know I make a lot of mistakes because i'm not english, though i'm trying to get the mistakes out. :)
Date: 06/23/10 01:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'm crying.
Author's Response: awhh! <3
Date: 06/22/10 10:57 am Title: Chapter 1
Omg!
This almost made me cry D: It's so sad.
Love it anyways! You write awesome stories :D
Author's Response: thank you, i'm happy that you enjoy reading them :D
Date: 06/22/10 06:35 am Title: Chapter 1
omg i hate you so much right now.
i usually try to avoid death fics but something about this one caught my attention, and even though i knew it would make me sad, i read it anyway.
But, i never thought i would get so caught up in a simple little story. i seriously can't stop crying, lol, i feel utterly pathetic.
your story was so realistic, so heartbreaking. i could never image how much pain and regret and damage that Tom would feel if this really happened, but you succeded in making it real for the reader.
i know that when people commit suicide, in that moment they're not themselves, and irrational solutions seem like the only way to escape the momentary pain. I know that Bill did know Tom loved him, and that almost makes it worse, for how much both of them have lost.
i seriously have been sitting here for five minutes still crying over this story, and i feel like i can't give it enough praise, even though it's fucking breaking my heart.
i feel like i'd have to read a hundered fluff fics to just start to repaire myself. i hate you for that...but i kinda love you for it to.
it's so hard for me to show emotion. it's so hard for me to even understand my feelings sometimes, because i'm alexathymic. But, something about your story really touched me, and even though it hurts, i feel almost releaved to be crying like this.
i think maybe it's hitting me so hard, because my father is dying right now. i can't imagine he leaving, and not knowing how much i love him, or how much he means to me. you have to make every moment precious.
i could probably go on forever and ever about how much this story hit me. i love it and i hate it, and that's the best kind of story in the end.
i'm still crying.
Author's Response: Oh my god your review practically made me cry too! rnI must thank you for it though, if I have that affect on people then I know I succeeded in putting in the emotion I tried to put in it, because i'm never sure if it worked out or not. But despite that, oh god, I am also sorry for making you sad, i'm really sorry! But in the end, like you say, stories that mess up your emotions are the best oies. me, myself, in the end I always love experiencing that, being moved by a fic. And I hope you can enjoy it too :)rnrnI also wish you all the luck in the world with you father. rnWhat doesn't kill you makes you stronger, right? rnThank you again for your review, It was amazing to read. I had no idea I had such effect on people. rnrnAnd be happy again okay :p Go read fluff fics xDrnrnXx
Date: 06/22/10 12:31 am Title: Chapter 1
Damn, should have grabbed the kleenex before reading this! This is a heartwrenching tearjerker...
Author's Response: hehe, cheer, I succeeded! ;) rnThanks for your review x
Date: 06/21/10 10:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
i couldnt stop crying!! D: imagining this happening is really sad!
this was so great! :D
Author's Response: i'm glad you liked it! :$ rnthanks to review x
Date: 06/21/10 09:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
i almost cry, its sad but i think that is a posibility to the reality... Tom would be really sad... i like it a lot!!!
Author's Response: i'm very glad you do! :)rnthanks for your review x