Date: 06/28/10 03:22 pm Title: Chapter 5
cnt wait tis amazing
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Date: 06/28/10 12:48 am Title: Chapter 5
its perfect!!!...great chapter!!!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you thought so :)
Date: 06/27/10 11:27 am Title: Chapter 5
Aww, Tom's first kiss with an inhuman being... Lolz. So, where had Bill been hiding before popping out to save the day? And I'm really curious about what/who attacked him in the forest. This is really interesting. :D
Author's Response: Yes, his first kiss. And I have no idea the other ones... I will explain it all in the future chapters, but I have to think of something first xD
Date: 06/27/10 11:23 am Title: Chapter 4
Aww, even the Black Angel has a name! ^^ I love Simone in this, she's almost psychic, immediately understanding Tom. And yay! Bill's free! Though I'm kind of pissed that people are after them... >.>
Author's Response: Of course he has a name, he is Bill. :D And yes, Simone is good. :)
Date: 06/27/10 11:17 am Title: Chapter 3
Omo~! This looks bad. Black Angel appears and the factory is destroyed. Almost like someone is trying to frame him. O.o
Fuck. I wanna bitch-slap those damn villagers. 'Specially Geo >.
Author's Response: Eh, he actually went to save the factory. But something mysterious happened! *gasps*
And I'll come bitch-slapping Geo with you!
Date: 06/27/10 11:13 am Title: Chapter 2
Haha, lolz, female or male, Tom is in love. I love the way Bill is so dazed and oblivious after waking up. xD
MOARRRR!
Author's Response: Yes he is in loooove! Thankkss baby :)
Date: 06/27/10 11:09 am Title: Chapter 1
This fic is so adorable, i have to say. I love fairy-tales and myths, I'm sure you know, and this has just enough mystery and even some danger in it. Yum xD
Tom seems a bit obsessed, but that only adds to the charm, I think. Can't wait to read more! :D
Author's Response: Danke hon! I'm glad you liked the beginning. And yeah. Tom's pretty much completely obsessed with him. xD
Date: 06/27/10 04:41 am Title: Chapter 5
I loved it!!! I totes saw that coming x3 Lolz xD I can't wait for you to continue!!
xx Chi ^^
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you like this fic so far. :)
Date: 06/27/10 01:00 am Title: Chapter 5
Sweet this is so sweet. I love it and I can't help but want to read more.
Author's Response: Thank you! I promise I will give you more sooon! :)
Date: 06/26/10 09:58 pm Title: Chapter 5
It let me speechless O_O it's so nice and sweet..... Love it :)
Author's Response: I'm glad you love it! Thank you! <3
Date: 06/26/10 09:02 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh, I have an impression that Tom is a bit stupid in this story, he never knows what to say and only thinks how beautiful the Angel is. Make him more Tom-like, cocky, smart,etc you know :)
Author's Response: No, he isn't stupid. He is just so fascinated with Bill. But this is how Tom is in my story and I apologize, but I am not going to change his character. It is an alternate universe story, so it's only logical that he isn't the exact same person here that he is in real life. :)
Date: 06/26/10 05:57 am Title: Chapter 4
I love this!! I can't wait for you to continue!!
xx Chi ^^
Author's Response: Thank you, Chi! <3
Date: 06/25/10 09:31 pm Title: Chapter 4
I loved all the action in this! It was fast paced but still not rushed. And extra props for the gorgeous "black tear" pic!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you think so! ;)
Date: 06/25/10 09:59 am Title: Chapter 4
Ahh, I don't think he's sad. This looks like a concert shot. He's prolly in the middle of singing and his make up is running becuz it's hot. Like it tho! LolZ.
So glad Simone helped Tom, she was clever about it too!
Glad you're making the story longer, can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Yes, it is a concert shot, but in the picture I made, he is supposed to look sad, and I think he does.
Thank you anyway! I promise to give you more soon! ;)
Date: 06/25/10 08:27 am Title: Chapter 4
Hmm, try to make your Tom a bit more intelligent:P
Author's Response: What do you mean by that?
Date: 06/24/10 11:36 pm Title: Chapter 4
awww beautiful chapter..and the picture...breath taking. great job sweets! i cant wait for more! your doing a GREAT job!!!:)
Author's Response: Thank you! Your nice words make me happy :)
Date: 06/24/10 07:29 pm Title: Chapter 4
Aww... Tom got him out. Now how will they get away and this fire... I want more :)
Author's Response: Thank you for your review. And I'll update ASAP :)
Date: 06/24/10 12:39 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love it so far! :'D
Author's Response: Thanks honey! <3
Date: 06/24/10 09:19 am Title: Chapter 3
aawh poor bill
ohhh yu must write more !
Author's Response: Yeah, poor him. :(
I will update again tonight! :)
Date: 06/24/10 12:29 am Title: Chapter 3
CAKEEEEE
in other words, I loved it x3
Author's Response: Lol. Thank you anyway! <3