Date: 02/29/12 06:46 pm Title: Show n' Tell
Oh This was magical! Love always makes sex more significant, and the afterglow is the best as well.
Finally! Six years is a long waiting for any person in his right state of mind... I don't know how Bill kept sane.
A beautiful chapter, thank you so much.
Author's Response: I guess it was easier for Bill, because he still had a pretty close relationship with Tom. If you look at it from a different angle, they were pretty much couple-ish, only that they didn't get physically intimate.
Date: 02/29/12 03:48 pm Title: Plans
i love it this fic so much!!!!!!
Author's Response: *Is soo happy*
Date: 02/29/12 03:41 pm Title: Show n' Tell
Absolutely amazing! :D
Author's Response: *glomps*
Date: 02/29/12 03:21 pm Title: Show n' Tell
This one is just PER-FECT !
OMG I love them, they are so damn cute, beatiful ! "Better late than never" Bill's right !
Thanks for sharing this with us ! Haha I'm really enjoyig it :D
Congrats for your exams !
Author's Response: I'm so happy you guys are enjoys this so much XD I tried to focus on everything for their first time together and make it seem as realistic as the rest of the story, because I put a lot of work and research into writing this. It's so good to know it's appreciated
Date: 02/29/12 01:29 pm Title: Show n' Tell
I. Am. SO. Fucking. Happy!!!!!! xD
This was such a good chapter; I love the way they made love *giggle* So sweet, so hot, so romantic, and so amazing~♥
I've been a Black Veil Brides fan since I was 8; YAY FOR MORE SOLDIERS OF THE OUTCASTS!!! XD *WOOT!*
And congrats on passing your exams :)
I cannot wait for the next chapter; again, wonderful job on this one ^-^
Author's Response: I tried to focus on the feelings, more than the actions, because, as you said, they made love. If it was just fucking, it would have been hardcore (I love to write smut, as you will notice if you'll read my next story). The final chapter will be up really soon, but it's only 3 word pages long. As for BVB, I loooove Andy's eyes *__* and his voice, it's sounds so rough for how sweet and awkward he seems xD I'm currently in love with A Devil for Me and the Legacy and Fallen Angels, but really, I like all their songs. Really good rhythm :D
Date: 02/29/12 12:48 pm Title: Show n' Tell
That was beautiful, just perfect. Thank you so much for such a lovely update. And congrats on finishing your 1st semester!
Author's Response: Thank you ;) The final chapter will be short, but up very soon
Date: 02/29/12 12:11 pm Title: Show n' Tell
woot can't wait for the last chapter :D
Author's Response: It's already written. Just wait one day or two...
Date: 02/29/12 07:11 am Title: Show n' Tell
Ooh, smut, but with love. (what? haha). Yay for Tom and Bill's happiness. I can't believe both of them took so long to do something bout their feelings. I'm a bit sad to hear that this story is almost over.
Author's Response: Aww.. *hugs* Don't worry, you will see them again, some time around summer. I have a short-story planned for them
Date: 02/29/12 04:14 am Title: Show n' Tell
yay! they have finally admitted there love and made love and it took 24 chapters to get there. Long wait what worth it in the end. I love this chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks a lot ;)
Date: 02/29/12 03:16 am Title: Show n' Tell
nice chapters!!
i am happy bill an to r together now
i cant wait for the next chapter!!
Author's Response: Soon xD
Date: 02/29/12 03:03 am Title: Show n' Tell
Great chapter! XD
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: 02/23/12 12:57 am Title: Storm
Yay! Thanks for the update!
Author's Response: Next chapter coming today or tomorrow ;)
Date: 02/22/12 02:46 pm Title: Storm
*SQUEALS!* Finally *-*
Author's Response: *flails* I know! Can you believe it?
Date: 02/21/12 11:25 pm Title: Storm
Ohhh I loved it! Finally!!! There must be a God who loves happy couples. This chapter was lovely to read. I was excited to see your update. thank you.
More chapters sounds like angel's music to my ears.
See you next chapter.
Hugs!!
Author's Response: If there is such a God, it was about time he gave me a sign! That bastard has been avoiding me since I started writing fiction. This will officially be the first story I write that has a happy ending. Before, I always killed my characters, or separated my main pairing or something. There will be only two more chapters, though. And then I'll probably write a short sequel, about their summer holiday, but it might take a while. I'll either post that as I write it, or I'll write it first and post it near our real-time summer. There will be a new story, though
Date: 02/19/12 05:26 pm Title: Storm
Yay! *does happy dance* It was about freaking time!!! :D
Author's Response: Tom has to make it worth the wait ;)
Date: 02/19/12 05:25 pm Title: Muddling through
All hail Babylon! I laughed so hard when I read the name, then even more when I read your note at the end. I knew it had to be a reference to QaF! XD *jumps into the gutter and parties with Brian and Justin*
Anyway.. I'm loving this story so much!
Author's Response: I love that show! I'd marry that show! I demand more seasons! *joins the party*
Date: 02/19/12 11:52 am Title: Storm
I can't wait to read more! Please write fast, I really can't wait! This is awesome!! You're the best!!
Author's Response: I'll be posting today or tomorrow (It's 5:30 a.m. where I live, so I dunno)
Date: 02/18/12 11:19 pm Title: Storm
OMG its about TIME WOOT WOOT!!!!
Author's Response: Iknorite? XD Silly boys, making us wait for so long
Date: 02/18/12 05:03 pm Title: Storm
i liked it .So good.I'm wordless.
Author's Response: Aww... Keep your words for the next chapter *wink wink*
Date: 02/18/12 02:42 pm Title: Storm
I'm found this story just now, but I read it all in one go because it took me totally.
And since I've arrived at this point of the story I can say that it was time that Tom had opened his eyes and confess everything to Bill before was to late.
I can't wait to read how they behave with each other and all the things they will do.
I'm waiting for the next chapter =)
Author's Response: You have a point right there. Tom knows Bill's stubborn as hell so he kind of figured he would have to make his first move, or Bill would force himself to move on