Date: 06/28/10 03:16 pm Title: Prologue
Oh yes the worms!
D`you want sharks to eat you?Less pain :D
I`m from RO too =D
Author's Response: eek! How about, nothing eats Mady because she sent a new chapter already? ^^ Just wait so it will be approved and you can read it.
rnYou're from Romania? Srsly? YAAY! <3
Date: 06/28/10 02:45 pm Title: Friends
I'm checking your story every day to see if you put another chappie.
So far I love it,but we don't know what future brings.Kidding :D
So keep posting or otherwise worms will eat you!
Author's Response: oh god! NOT WORMS! *high pitched squeal* I'm writing, I'm writing. I'll post today, I just gotta write the chapter on my PC. Don't let the worms eat me! I'm too young!
Date: 06/26/10 07:36 am Title: Friends
Awww so cute *giggles* They are so crushing on each other! Why are boys so oblivious?? Can't wait to see what you have instore for the night to come *wiggles eyebrows*
Author's Response: Boys don't think with their brain, that's why XD I can't wait for you guys to find out what happens at night, either *wiggles eyebrows too*
Date: 06/25/10 11:55 pm Title: Friends
awwww bill is adorable.... ilove him....and tom! this was a really good chapter :)
Author's Response: They are cute, aren't they? I always had a thing for skater boys and sporty types in general. I find them really cute and friendly and open. Seriously, those guys are the best!
Date: 06/25/10 11:22 pm Title: Friends
hm...so far i like it! i wouldnt change anything but i reallly hope you dont rush bill and toms relationship i hate when people do that and plus i love sexual tenison! :D
Author's Response: not planning on rushing the relationship. They'll take it one step at a time, from crush to sexual tension to finally getting it on *laughs*
Date: 06/25/10 09:51 pm Title: Friends
Aww.... :
Author's Response: agreed. ;)yeah, they are cute XD
Date: 06/25/10 07:24 pm Title: Prologue
LOL. Awesome.
I'm tracking this story. I want to see an awkward moment soon! X:
You can pester anytime. I am your fanboy after all ;b
Author's Response: *huge grin* You just made my day (actually, night since it's 2:30am here, but w/e)
Date: 06/25/10 06:43 pm Title: Friends
Uhhh lovely lovely boys! I feel a lot of chemistry (give me more sexual tension! Awkward moments! ;D) between Bill and Tom - what a surprise haha (;
But, yeah, I'm still totally into this story. Bill still being manly gay and Tom preeetty girly for an all-straight-ish guy. But c'mon! More skateboarding! ;D I already long for the moment where Bill shows his kick-ass skills! Haha
And as for the whole "Bill playing basket"-thing.. Well, I have to say I really like your picture of him doing it! ;D
Author's Response: It's a bit hard to concentrate on skateboarding, when Bill is hiding it xD But I think I'll twist the school year a bit so there can be some more skateboarding and basketball, maybe even some soccer? what do you say? XD However, next chapter only has some sports talk and other nice thinggies and I'm almost done writing it. So more reviews, more fun! Heehee.
Date: 06/25/10 06:14 pm Title: Friends
i just love this soo much! and i don't want anything different actually! i just love the way it is, and how it is written :D
Author's Response: aw, I'm so happy you love it! honestly! I was a bit worried about how it would turn out, actually. Since I usually write in my native tongue (romanian) I didn't know for sure how I would do in English. However, I like English a lot, I talk a lot in English, i even talk in my sleep in English (srsly, I was on this field trip last week. my friends where up all night, talking and they said that I "woke up" from bed, I said "Fuck" then I threw myself back in and turned on the other side. Normally, "fuck" isn't something we say in romanian. we have other swearing words). Okaaaaay, I'm rambling now. I do that when I'm excited. I'll shut up now. Thanks for reading!
Date: 06/25/10 06:14 pm Title: Friends
I love you for doing this story. You officially have a fanboy (:
Totally obsessed with skateboarding. So, to see a Bill & Tom story with it in it makes me gleefully happy. I like it a lot so far! Can't wait to read more. I like how everything is going. Also like how you have written Bill. It gets a bit old having him be so girlie all the time, a nice change.
With Bill and Tom, personally something to cause an awkward moment mostly for Bill, Tom could get over it easily. Blow it off. If I make any since I am giving myself a cookie.
But, Can not wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: oh my god! I squealed! I literally SQUEALED! a Fanboy *hearts*. And you're into skateboarding! guess who's gonna pester you for stuff about skateboarding, now! hehe *evil grin*. Oh, and there will be an awkward moment pretty soon (i think in the next chapter actually XD) So don't forget to come back and read it!
Date: 06/23/10 01:57 am Title: High School
Yay! This is really good! More soon??
Author's Response: aww, thanks! I'm writing so for as long as I will drool over skaterboys I will keep doing so (well, i guess that if i'll drool forever, i'd have to write this story forever....) okay, maybe not for as long as I will drool over skaterboys, but I WILL write XD
Date: 06/23/10 12:41 am Title: High School
I'm intrigued about Bill, no idea why he's hiding things but very curious as to why. I am surprised that Tom's completely unaware though. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: you're reading this? O.O omg! *squeaks~* yaay! XD but yeah, Tom is oblivious, but I guess, aren't boys usually like that? *laughs*
Date: 06/22/10 11:53 pm Title: High School
I like how you wrote that bill is hiding stuff :) its quite a different side of the story.
Author's Response: Bill is a sneaky little bastard, isn't he *lols* I'm so glad you like id :D
Date: 06/22/10 09:58 pm Title: High School
i really like this story :] i think it's cute that bill's trying to learn skateboarding because tom does :D
Author's Response: true, Tom pretty much is the reason Bill started skateboarding, but now he loves it as much as Tom does. He'd probably continue to skateboard even if Tom decided that he didn't want to anymore and that he hates it (not gonna happen). glad you like the story ^^
Date: 06/22/10 07:46 pm Title: High School
i like the girly side and the masculine side its the perfect balance i loved this chapter i like how bill teases tom its cute
Author's Response: I wanted to make a more masculine Bill, but I guess I can't really tell how a guy thinks when he's around someone he likes (my twinsie doesn't count, since he's all romantic and more sappy than a girl!) so I just went for girly on that. Besides, a silly, blushing Bill is nice from time to time, right? Also, there is a saying in my country, i don't know if it's known in other places. It goes something like this "Those who tease each other, love each other". Not that Tom realises that, haha
Date: 06/22/10 07:07 pm Title: High School
it's really good, I think Bill's hiding his sporty side from everyone cause he doesn't want them to treat him any differently (that's what I think anyways I'm probably wrong but eh)
Author's Response: Don't worry,there IS a bit of truth in what you said there ;) I'm glad you like the story ^^
Date: 06/22/10 06:42 pm Title: High School
Uhh I love when Bill isn't all feminine but has a more masculine side too (; (Though I'm having quite a hard time picturing him playing basket! Hahaha)
Lovely chapter! It's a nice start, I think. There's the introduction of the characters and stuff like that and still a bit of action :D -Though Tom doesn't seem all that straight to me xD
Anyway! As for your question... Well uhm, the skateboarding I think he's hiding because he isn't really that good yet? I'm picturing something along him competing the others and kicking their asses later on in the story! And the guys will just be gaping at him, trying to understand what's happening... And Tom'll like it of course! --,
Am I just the least bit right? Oh well, guess I'll see xD
And the basketball..? Uhm dunno why he hides it. But I suppose you're gonna tell us :D
Author's Response: I tried to make Bill not so feminine, because there are already tons of stories where he's all giggly and all fair maiden-ish Bill playing basketball? Let's see, Bill in a jersey and shorts, running around the court, all sweaty, strands of hair sticking to his face, some drops of water running down his neck, toned arms and legs, breathing hard, high-fiving Tom after he manages a slam dunk. Oh yeah, I can totally picture Bill playing basket! *¬*
rnAnd you did get a bit right, but I can't tell you which part XD
Date: 06/22/10 05:53 pm Title: High School
first; I really LOVE this now! it is so good, and so are your writing! :D i would be so happy if you'd update it soon!
second; I think Bill is hiding it because,, emm,, oh, i am so bad at this!,, but maybe he only want to watch Tom!? i don't know! xD
Author's Response: i'm glad you love the story XD I write as often as I can, which is pretty often now that it's summer, so don't worry about updates.
Date: 06/22/10 04:52 pm Title: High School
Ok I'm convinced that this is going to be an awesome story. Idk why bill just doesn't tell people that he skateboards and plays basketball, there's nothing wrong with it and if he told people he'd get to spend more time with Tom. Oh well loved the chapter kisses to bill for his poor arm. Can't wait to read the nex chapter
Author's Response: yay! I'm glad you to read the story xD Don't worry about Bill, everything will be explained eventually. I still have a chapter and a half written so now I am currently making soap bubbles and thinking about what's going to happen next. xD
Date: 06/22/10 04:35 pm Title: High School
I like this story so far, and I'm looking forward to read more : )
But I don't understand why Bill should keep hiding the fact that he is good at skateboarding and basketball :P Because.. Isn't that a good thing? xD
Author's Response: yeah, it's a good thing that he's good at skateboarding and basketball, but he has his reasons. You'll find them out later though, that is, if you keep reading xD