Date: 07/13/10 09:47 am Title: Rain
Oh yay! The chapter was just as I hoped it would be, and even better! *loves it to death* So cuute and fluffy and WEEE! n_n ANd I can't wait for the next one, with Bill playing basketball >D Quick update, mkay? ;O
Oh, and yeah, thanks for saying we don't need o worry about Zizi, I was starting to wonder... *suspicious glare*
Author's Response: I'm already working on the next chapter ;) And yeah, don't worry about Zizi. She's just there.
Date: 07/13/10 05:42 am Title: Rain
You know, 'zizi' is French for 'dick'. XD
Author's Response: o.O really? I didn't know that. Haha, Whoops? XD
Date: 07/13/10 03:47 am Title: Rain
I WANT MORE!!!!!!! LOVE THIS!
Author's Response: YAY! xD
Date: 07/13/10 01:20 am Title: Prologue
Yay, basket!. *gets pompons to join the cheer team*
Bill playing basketball and being even good at it - that will be an interesting image.
Mwhaha, something is starting between those two...ehem, "best friends".
Tom is lovely like always [maybe too lovely - but I don't mind at all]and Bill is like a cute, little puppy, happy with his big love. *kawaii*
And the cuddling parts make me feel all fuzzy on the inside.
Gaah, I want more!
Author's Response: Kid... Somehow I just can't imagine you (or me, at that) with pompons ._." Mwahaha, you know you love me :> I hope you can read the new chapter, using that stupid network wherever you are right now ^^
Date: 07/13/10 12:20 am Title: Rain
So....this is my new favorite story
tom so wants bill! its so obvious i love them and i love the tension!! :)
Author's Response: weeee~ I love them too xD
Date: 07/12/10 11:08 pm Title: Rain
Basket! I'm gonna go to do some cheers! XD Thanks for the chap
Author's Response: no problem ;) Go get your pompons and meet me in front of the basketball court! Wooo~
Date: 07/12/10 10:50 pm Title: Rain
Hihi...
Could there be, maybe, romance starting to come out?
Author's Response: *sing-song voice* maaaaaybeeee
Date: 07/12/10 09:59 pm Title: Rain
awww lol such a fluffy chapter!! LOVE it!!
Author's Response: Bill just can't help it XD When he's around his Tomi, he goes fluffy instantly
Date: 07/12/10 08:05 pm Title: Rain
OMG!!! Cant wait!!! Bill and basketball.. HOT n.n!!! Poor Bill having to control his feelings so much and having attacks. :[
Author's Response: Yeah, Bill is so scared that Tom will hate him that he practically goes mental because of it. And yeah, Bill and basketball! woo~ Next chapter has more manly Bill, because these last three have been too mushy xD
Date: 07/12/10 07:31 pm Title: Rain
i . l o v e . t h i s (:
I don't even know how to describe how cute this chapter was, it gave me itty bitty butterflies for Bill :D
& even though Tom is straight, he is so open to cuddling & being affectionate with his best friend...it's just
A D O R A B L E *heart* (:
I'm definitely looking foward to the next chapter. Im anxious to find out more about Bill & his secret-skateboarding, & BILL PLAYING BASKETBALL XD
That in itself should be interesting
*b e a m i n g*
Im definitely going to be sticking around with this one (:
Btw, there were just like two small things I picked up on while reading {very miniscule mistakes. & I only noticed them because I've already read this chapter twice XD}
Anyhow, one is the part where Tom says this line:
"Aw, and here I thought that you enjoyed not having to cat fight with some chick over who gets to cuddle with me"
it repeats itself a few times {I wasn't sure if that was intentional, as to Bill mocking what Tom was saying. Or if it was just an error"
& the other one was in a narration:
"That was a new one. Bill stared at his friend for a few seconds, not sure hot to react"
the 'hot' being a spelling error for 'how' (:
{and just so you know, Im not picky about stuff like that, I just figured I'd point them out for you, in case you wanted to fix them. its not big deal though ^-^}
MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE :DD
-Samantha
Author's Response: aw, whoops! xD It's just that around here it's 2:30 AM, and I haven't really slept in two days XD. I'm going to correct them right now. Thanks for pointing them out ;) And for reading! I'm so happy you like it xD
Date: 07/07/10 07:34 am Title: Tension
Mady,I'm so freaking fucking sorry I couldn't read&review this chapter.
Shame on me!
Oh this part..was genious!
I really love your head,because it`s filled with the most creative ideas evaaa` :D
Keep on posting or I'm gonna steal all your cookies!
Author's Response: aw, don't worry XD Nooo! Don't steal all my cookies!! T.T what am i gonna use to bribe you guys if you take my cookies?
Date: 07/06/10 09:32 am Title: Tension
Okey, first of all I just have to say that I am stunned! Really, I didn't think it acyually could get any better, but it did, and that is just completly amazing! You write so well, and I love the plot and everything! I just think it is so adorable that Bill has that giant crush on Tom and stuff! It is just.. AWW! so thank you for writing this! I just love it!
And I would love it if bill told tom about the crush in the rain, or just something like that. Just, so it happens a little bit more. But not too much.. Okey, I am really bad at explaining, so yeah, hope you understand it!
Author's Response: don't worry, I understood what you were trying to say ;) I'm glad you like it :D
Date: 07/05/10 03:54 pm Title: Tension
Urg I feel so bad for being away from the Internet for a week because I haven't been able to read and review this story! ;D (Though it was a niice surprise to see more than one new chapter when I got back on today xD)
As for the story: I'm totally hoping Bill decides to enter the Rochester Extreme Sports Competition to kick the other boys' asses! -It could cause some serious drama if Bill really does beat Tom in skateboarding (especially if they've kissed before hand) and Tom has a hard time not being the best - or something like that... Uhh I'm so excited to see what's going to happen :D It's a very sweet story
Oh and: *squeals* You mentionned soccer when responding to my last review, right? And all I can say is HELL YEAH! Soccer is even better than skateboarding! :D Mmmh imagine Tom running around dressed to play soccer, sweaty and all... *drools* xD
Oh oh and the rain? I see hot "twins" kissing in the pouring rain... Probably won't happen already (without more drama) but still a nice thought, though xD
Author's Response: hell yeah, Tom playing soccer is the BEST *¬* you can read On Defense, if you haven't already. Tom plays soccer in that and it's a really good story too <3
Date: 07/05/10 04:36 am Title: Tension
Garfield? hahahaha
THIS FANFIC IS TOO GOOD FOR MY OWN...GOOD? x:
OH MY GOD ARE THEY GONNA GET MUDDY AND SHOWER TOGETHER? *_________*
...my reviews are usually better than that, promise!
Author's Response: yes, it was Garfield ;) *gives cookie* Don't worry, I love excited reviewers XD
Date: 07/04/10 06:27 pm Title: Tension
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.plz love more
Author's Response: aye aye, captain ^^
Date: 07/04/10 06:06 pm Title: Tension
i knooow this is the first time I have reviewed, tho I've been following the story for a little while now, and I'm sorry D=
Anyhow, if you ever found out you wanted to stop writing on this story, I would kick your ass o.o I'm addicted to it, and have to read to the end! No shortcuts, bitte ;I I love the entire story, and you're writing it like a PRO! Fantastic! Bravo! Wunderbar! and whatnot kind of compliment words :DD
But ah, the rain :I Just kidding x3 sort of.... But it would be sooo awesome if Bill slipped and fell into Tom's arms or something, blushing madly and they end up staring into each others eyes, and then Tom suddenly starts blushing. :D But then again, I think that maybe would have rushed the entire story too much. Damn... Or, oh! oh! You could like... damn, all of my ideas just would make everything akward between them in a negative way. o-o my mind suuuck... Well, anyways, make it fluffy, but not rushy, if you get what I mean ;3
Author's Response: Aw, I love your ideas XD keep them coming, I don't mind <3. I'm happy you like it and I'll do my best to keep writing. I love my ass too much to get it kicked ;)
Date: 07/04/10 05:24 pm Title: Prologue
*preens* keep writing well!
Author's Response: I'll do my best ;)
Date: 07/04/10 03:48 pm Title: Tension
Whant moreee!!!!
Author's Response: *writes more!!*
Date: 07/04/10 03:03 pm Title: Prologue
True enough XD :D
Author's Response: xD
Date: 07/04/10 03:02 pm Title: Prologue
XD yay i can't wait to read the new chapter >.> I love just about any scene that has to do with the rain xD
Author's Response: aw xD then i guess it's a good thing that next chapters starts with rain ;)