Date: 07/27/10 05:34 pm Title: Basketball
Mwhaha, that was too good!
Drama [but not some Diva drama], typical boy-swearing and basket - yay!
Andi scared of a manly Bill - now that's something interesting.
I really wanted Bill to get busted by somebody and thank God that happened.
I mean... I like Tom being so concerned about Bill and treating him like a little baby but I would like to see Tom's face when he finds out about Bill's other side.
Neh, actually I'm sure this will happen...sometime but not so soon.
Anyway... a step to their realationship in the next chapter would be nice if it's not a BIG step. It's too early for something like that.
And for the other questions...no fucking idea so I'll wait for you to update. ^^
Author's Response: bwahhaha xD Bill got caught red (or should I say orange?) - handed XD. Tom has some sort of a big brother complex, right? *lolz* I lovez you (even though you are useless when it comes to ideas :D )
Date: 07/24/10 07:25 pm Title: Basketball
a new reader!!! and i absolutly adore the story!!! u were right- this site was thirsty for this kinde of story...i love the contrast between the masculinity a feminine side of bill, and i loove the relationship between tom and bill...its all great..
and as of the way the story is going to continue i think u should give it some time untill tom and bill get together...i'ld fisrstly rather apriciate hearing more abou bills thinking, his longing for tom, and more skating!!!! :DDD also the way tom and bill hang out- show us theire world :D
sooo...sorry for the rambling...u can either read it and think about it, or just ignor...either way i adore the story- hope its gona last forevaaaaa!!! XD
Author's Response: aw ;) I love excited readers! Go you! ^^ Don't worry, there is no way that I would get the two together just yet xD they need to be oblivious some more *evil grin*
Date: 07/24/10 05:38 am Title: Basketball
Hi, I started rading your story today, so, would you forgive me if I didn't leave a comment to the other chapters?
It is interesting this side of Bill, I can relate to having a different circle of friends and different activities.
It would be awesome to know why he's keeping things from Tom, I have my own theories on it, though. Maybe is to avoid competition and make Tom feel protective over his best friend.
It is a really entertaining and original story.
btw, I love basketball and love even more that you have written about it.
hugs!
Author's Response: aw, don't worry about reviewing the other chapters. I'm sure there are plently of lurkers who only read and not review, but it's fine. I'm just happy that they Do read ^^. I'm happy you like the story ;)
Date: 07/23/10 03:57 pm Title: Basketball
I don't know,more hotness,cuz we all love it :D
*stiu prin ce treci si la mine s-a intamplat,dar noi am fost la bunica atunci XD si mai ales cu caldura asta XDXD
Date: 07/23/10 12:48 pm Title: Basketball
Woaa I loved it XD
I want the next chapter faster so that I know what happens next @.@
You know I don't like waiting,right ? XD
Ahh,what will happen next?Will Tom find out?Will Bill hit Andi?Stay tunned with Maddy to find out XD
*vezi,iti fac reclama :]]
Author's Response: bwahahah! I'm happy you like it XD what do YOU want to happen next? :>:>rnrn*scriu cam greu, ca sunt in conditii de stres acum. ai mei renoveaza baia, deci nu am dus, chiuveta, toaleta, e praf peste tot si trebuie sa imi fac dosarul pt scoala de soferi. Deci da, viata mea e un chin momentan XD
Date: 07/22/10 09:46 pm Title: Basketball
i love this story so far, it's amazing. & is this by any chance named after the john lennon song 'look at me'? just wondering ;]
Author's Response: Not really. It was from a phrase in the story. But I listened to the song at it's really cool and inspiring ;) thanks
Date: 07/21/10 07:33 am Title: Prologue
Yeaaaah more Aster! (; Though, if he's gonna be an OMC pairing I'm gonna do a 180 and hate him, just saying ;b haha
And I'm happy I managed to have the pictures in my head xD Mmmh nice, hot Bill (though I'm pretty sure he actually does suck at sport in real life xD)
Author's Response: Nah, no way. Aster (or any of the basketball guys) won't do pairings xD I'd strangle them personally if they started hitting on Bill or something *grins*
rnAnd yeah, I totally agree. I bet Bill can barely HOLD the ball in real life *laughs* Although Tom said he used to play basketball
Date: 07/21/10 02:20 am Title: Basketball
This is so cute and fluffy. I really love it, I hope you update soon. :)
Author's Response: I'm happy you like it ^^
Date: 07/20/10 09:52 pm Title: Basketball
Gooooooooooooooood I want Tom to find out XD that's all I want, I'm curious of Bill's answer, but I missed very much Tom :S
Author's Response: aww XD Don't worry, there will be Tom in the next chapter
Date: 07/20/10 06:14 pm Title: Basketball
You have inspired me to write a story about longboarding because there aren't any and so many people don't even know what longboarding is. It's so amazing.
This is really good:)
Author's Response: I will admit that I had to google "longboarding" to know what it was XD whoops? And if it has the pairing Bill/Tom, count me in for reading it! XD
Date: 07/20/10 04:00 pm Title: Prologue
XD I'm thinking he might have done more than just that XD
Author's Response: lolz! XD
Date: 07/20/10 02:21 pm Title: Basketball
Well, depending on how you're gonna do it I think it'd be okay if Tom and Bill's relationship moved forward in some way or another - I'm thinking more sexual tension and "almost" moments! -Maybe? (; Though Tom finding out about Bill's other life in the next chapter would be way too early if you ask me (: (I'm still hoping for that kick-ass disclosure where Bill beats all of them skateboarding or something like that ;D)
And; YEAH! I know I've said I have a hard time picturing Bill playing basket (I still have, sorry xD), but this was hot. And I actually had the images in my head! Well done ;D
And I think it's cool that Bill have a friend whom only knows about his more masculine self. I really hope that there's gonna be more moments with the two of them where Bill's allowed to act more manly and sporty (:
And at last: I can't wait to find out how Bill's gonna fix this! In some way I'm hoping he'll tell about his other life to Andy (and no other) but in another way I don't want that at all and is hoping for some hardcore lie. Hmm... ;D
Author's Response: there will be more, but after the next chapter XD And yeah, I agree, Tom finding out about Bill's other side right now would be waaaaaaaaaay too early. Wee~ I'm happy I managed to get that image in your head xD
rnI'm starting to really like Aster so I think I'm gonna use him more ;) I'm not sure how he'll salvage this with Andi either, but I'm working on it ^^
Date: 07/20/10 01:03 pm Title: Basketball
OMG PLZ moreeee..i rly like this :)
Author's Response: wee~ you like it! XD yayz!
Date: 07/20/10 11:59 am Title: Prologue
Soooooooooo i just read this entire story again for the 73184282174 time
ill admit it im kinda obsessed with it but omg its so good!
:) i love everything! and i mean EVERYTHING about this story!
Author's Response: aw! I'm glad you like this story so much XD
Date: 07/20/10 08:05 am Title: Basketball
Aaaaah, Andi, you nosy son of a.... something! @.@
Shit, Bill is really screwed now! I do indeed hope Bill comes up with something, lie or not, that makes Andreas back off and rly shut up about what he just saw. D= Still, so incredibly exciting!
I think you should wait three chapters at least before you make their relationship take a step further, because if you do it in the next one, the story might be over before you know it, because when you first start, it's hard to set a border to how much their relationship should build up to something more than friends. Besides, I'm a little selfish, because I want this to be a long story, because your writing is so incredibly good, and the story is just awesome! Please make it long? :D I could give you cookies and hugs and candy and such if you did. :DD
Author's Response: aw, don`t worry. It will be only a small step xD I really don`t know how long the story will be, cause I'm writing it as I go. As soon as I finish a chapter I have an idea for the next and so on.
Date: 07/20/10 06:39 am Title: Basketball
i know it's not my f*cking business but why does Bill hide that side of him?
Author's Response: aw, you'll find out when the time is right XD I can't spoil the fun now, can I?
Date: 07/20/10 06:37 am Title: Basketball
i looooooooooooove this story
i am your new fan
want one?
thanks, love
Author's Response: yay! new fan! new fan! *dances*
Date: 07/20/10 04:10 am Title: Basketball
Hmmm Bill why were you playing basketball? :P He's sooo dead :P
Give me more now!
Author's Response: yes he is XD *is working on more*
Date: 07/20/10 02:03 am Title: Basketball
Lol. :D
I wuv.. playing basketball. I do like this chapter.. craziness. I should trust you when you say stuff to me on msn :D
Author's Response: Mwahahha! Yes you should ;) I know my shit pretty well *lolz*
Date: 07/20/10 01:21 am Title: Basketball
My reaction when I saw this updated: FUCK YES.
I love this x3
Author's Response: my reaction when I saw the reviews: HELL YEAH! XD