Date: 09/13/10 05:10 pm Title: Soccer
WHAT THE!?!? SHUTYAMOUTH!
HAJSAHAFSJHFAJKHAFJKFAHKJFAHKFSAJ!
i am freaking out!
omg omg omg! this is just getting crazy! i need to know what happens next!
:D
Date: 09/13/10 04:56 pm Title: Soccer
omg! i'm devastated! Tom is being such a meanie! poor Bill. i can't imagine how much that would suck, to be in his shoes.
grrrs! can't wait for more! *cheers on manly Bill* [:
Date: 09/13/10 03:48 pm Title: Soccer
Tom, your an idiot. Not even hearing Bill out. I hope Bill will talk to him, despite being told not too.
Author's Response: Bill is a stubborn asshole, so yes he will xD
Date: 09/13/10 03:09 pm Title: Soccer
Update soon please.
Author's Response: will do. I promise! XD
Date: 09/13/10 02:54 pm Title: Soccer
Wow, Tom is pissssedd! Wow.....Bill should have just been honest with him from the start, you cant be best friends with someone and keep such a major part of yourself hidden. Tom feels betrayed.
Author's Response: *hugs Bill* Don't be a meanieee!! He has his reasons!
Date: 09/13/10 02:03 pm Title: Soccer
Jus finished all chapter's and im dying to know why Bill has two different live's-unless I missed something. I feel so bad for Tom, Bill is his world and has such a big secret, there's going to be a lot of hurt to get past.
Author's Response: Don't worry. I already finished writing the next chapter and am working on the next one. Soon, everything will be clear. xD
Date: 09/13/10 12:50 pm Title: Soccer
Awwwhhh, noooooo! D''= If it hadn't been for the end notes, I bet I would be crying by now! I got nothing to say to anything in this D= Okay, well, I can tell you it's as good written as always, you're really tallented! :D But the part where Aster called out for Bill in the middle of the game was kinda confusing, and I had to read it a few times to understand it, though I still don't think I got it a 100%. Maybe it's just me being stupi? 0.o
Author's Response: Awww, don't cry! I don't know what to do if you cry *worried* What didn't you understand exactly? Aster was surprised to see Bill as the water boy. He knew that Bill was an East Rochester student, but he didn't exactly expect to see him as the water boy for the team XD
Date: 09/13/10 12:20 pm Title: Soccer
I kinda don't feel bad for Bill 'cause he really did kinda had it coming... But you had a jealous Tom! Yey! Jealous Tom! Nothing is hotter than a jealous Tom! More jealous Tom please... OoOhhhh your Madychan?? Hello!!:D
Author's Response: Tell me about it! Jealous Tom and Gang Leader Tom are my favorite! *steals them* *steals Bill, too* *closes them in a room with a hidden camera and enjoys the show* :D
Date: 09/13/10 11:52 am Title: Soccer
I kinda understand why Tom reacted that way. I would probably react that way too if I was in his situation. But I think its time they sort things out ;)
Author's Response: That's exactly what I was looking for xD Writing feelings that people can relate too xD
Date: 09/13/10 11:49 am Title: Soccer
Sorry for the half comment!
OMG OMG OMG! TOM YOU ASSHOLE!Seriously, I can FEEL everything that Bill feelm the confusion, the pain and everything!
You are so talented and you should really write a book!
when will you update next time?
Lots of love on you!
Author's Response: Awww xD *huggies* I really wanted to write something that isn't so cliche. I mean, I read a LOT of stories on THF, and sometimes I get bored because the feelings are pretty much written the same way. I'm trying to put myself in my characters' spot and feel what they feel.
Date: 09/13/10 11:02 am Title: Soccer
*___*
*waits eagerly*
Author's Response: aye aye captain XD
Date: 09/13/10 10:57 am Title: Soccer
YOU BITCH TOM! Fuuu:c Well, Bill DID sort of deserve it after all, but still.. Aw, I can't stand them fighting:( Make i better, pwetty pwease? *pouts* I'm so looking forward to the next chapter, can' wait for it(:
Author's Response: I have this... thing. I guess I'm a sadist (and masochist, but yeah). The more I love my characters, the more I hurt them. But don't worry, the story will get better, eventually...
Date: 09/13/10 09:52 am Title: Soccer
I'm not sure how to react to this I want to say tom's an ass but I want to say Bill's one too for keeping a secret, besides that I love the story
Author's Response: *pets* Both of them are asses xD
Date: 09/13/10 09:43 am Title: Soccer
O.O HOLY SHIT.
Author's Response: I KNOWZ!!! O.O
Date: 09/13/10 09:12 am Title: Soccer
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! You can't do that *sobs* FIX IT Pleeeease *whines* *cuddles*
Author's Response: awww.... don't worry, I won't do that :(
Date: 09/13/10 05:41 am Title: Ignorance
Yeah... he is so screwed :S Haahahah I can't wait for that chap! ^^
Thanks for this and Happy B day!@
Author's Response: Thank you! *hugs* Don't worry, you won't have to wait long. I already submitted the next chapter, so it should be up today, when the mods validate it XD
Date: 09/10/10 10:31 pm Title: Ignorance
Oh my God!!
Please, please, please update this as soon as humanly possible!
I am so curious about how Tom will react and what will happen and just...please update!
Ha ha, sorry, I'm not usually this pushy, but I'm hooked on this story. And I despretely want to figure out why Bill is hiding in the first place. It makes no sense to me.
by the way, Happy Belated Birthday!
I hope you had a great day =)
Author's Response: I updated. Now I'm waiting for the validation! XD And don't worry about Bill. You'll find out in chapter 14 or so xD Thank you *hugs*
Date: 09/10/10 05:17 am Title: Ignorance
yes bill yes you are! LOL I love it!
Date: 09/10/10 12:11 am Title: Ignorance
I would drool to if I saw Tom liek that 2 hehe X3
and yes Bill you are screwed, royal screwed ^^
Author's Response: I would drool, faint, wake up, kidnap him, kidnap Bill, force them to have sex while I watch XD Hehe! ^^
Date: 09/09/10 03:25 pm Title: Ignorance
“Tom, is… Is something wrong? You’re acting kind of weird…” Bill asked, biting his lower lip when he saw Tom’s shoulders tense.
Let's just say Bill that you've got busted for the 3rd time.
Tough luck.
The teacher frowned too, surprised of not having to call after the dread head to give him detention.
Aww.
Somebody please give him a teen he could yell at.
~*~
“Why not? Aren’t you curious?”
Let him be, ok?
Don't you see little Tomi is heartbroken?
Bad Billi didn't tell him the truth!
Tom shrugged and looked up. He was curious, alright. But more than curious, he was pissed. Pissed and hurt.
See? T.T
“Do you think Andi knows anything? Or Gustav?”
Andi knows, besides this, something way more interesting. :>
What the hell had Bill been doing with those guys? He couldn’t get that thought out of his head at all. He barely got any sleep the previous night. Something was really fucked up, and Tom wanted to know what!
Right!
C'mon Tom, try to investigate. ;;)
*still in journalist-mode - blame Millennium 3*
He hadn’t realized it then, but later, in his bed, he made a vital connection. Bill had yelled at the brunette, calling him Cain. Cain was the name of a famous delinquent in W.R. territory. Tom heard quite a lot of stories about the guy, how he almost killed someone for a scratch on his car, how he fucked with the police, how he cut the fingers of one of his gang members.Fucking psycho.
Niedermann!
*still connected to Millennium*
But...besides this...
Fucked with the police? :-?...
http://humoncomics.com/fuck-the-police
Who the fuck was that kid and why did he go against Cain to help Bill? Boyfriend, maybe…
Seriosly...can Tom get any more stupid than this?
Tom bit back an “Everything” and shook his head. His (and Bill’s) History teacher was too nice to have Tom snap at her.
Mine was good to.
Let's see the new one. :-SS
Sighing, he turned his head to the clock, watching every minute tick by and forcing his mind to concentrate on the soccer game. Tomorrow…
Soccer Game, Soccer Game! *boogie*
~*~
“Yeah, tomorrow. Against W.R. High,” Andreas said, a smirk appearing on his lips. “We will beat those fuckers’ asses!”
I see some literal ass kicking. *mwhaha*
“I’m fine. Be right back… Bathroom,” he muttered.
Billi has to powder his nose.
Or not...
Andreas was looking at him, an eyebrow raised and an expression that clearly said “that’s what you get”.
Evil Andi. *smirk*
Maybe he could lock Tom in the storage room… Or make Cain punch Aster into next week….
Don't you dare punch Ace. *evil glare*
~*~
His Art class had been more bearable, though, honestly, he never liked Rubens that much. But art was art, yeah? And he still got to sketch a bit at the end of the class.
I want some Art classes too! T.T
*sa ma futa Vianu >.>*
[:-"]
Andreas sighed and took a step back, shaking his head. No way was he going to piss Bill off again. Nope. No chance. Nuh-uh.
Somebody put poor Andi under some protection.
Bill looked at him, deciding it was best not to piss the man off. He skipped on Friday, big deal.
“I have a job for you, Kaulitz.” Uh-oh. That was never a good thing. And did he have to say his name in each sentence? “Since you chicken out of most activities, although with good reason, you’re going to need to do something to get grades.”
Surprised Yaoi TeacherxStudent? :x
“You’ll be helping the team tomorrow, at the game. Towels, water, maybe gather up some balls, eh?” the coach laughed at his joke and Bill gave a small smile, though he wanted to strangle the man in front of him.
:|....
LMAO.
Bill cracked his knuckles behind his back, unintentionally. He hid it with a bright smile and an “Alright, sir.”
Knuckles cracking! :x
Aster will see him with Tom. Aster will come over to them after the game… and talk to Tom… and both of them would find out… Oh, he was so screwed.
Oh, the DRAMA!