Date: 06/27/10 01:19 am Title: Don't Take Me For Granted
Well, I feel bad for Tom. How was he to know that Bill was legit when he called? Then Bill was a complete douche when Tom tried to talk to him! Bill need's to stfu and hear Tom out IMO
Date: 06/26/10 09:04 pm Title: Don't Take Me For Granted
Bill was really mean to Tom, I like it XD
Date: 06/26/10 04:54 pm Title: Don't Take Me For Granted
ohh, if i was nadrea i would have shouted at bill saying that he stooped WAY LOWER than tom did >:| stupid fcuking bill!!! i feel bad for tomi!! :O
Date: 06/26/10 04:32 pm Title: Don't Take Me For Granted
all I can say is thank god for Andreas!
Date: 06/26/10 03:59 pm Title: Don't Take Me For Granted
AWWWWWWWWWH!!! poor tomi!!!!! -gives a kiss and a cookie to him- darn you bill!!!!! go and give him some cookies too!!!! awh!!! make it better please!!!!! make them love eachother!!!!
Date: 06/26/10 02:54 pm Title: Don't Take Me For Granted
I think tom needs an attitude adjustment
Date: 06/26/10 12:37 pm Title: Don't Take Me For Granted
yes i do! poor tomi! :( oh gosh i finished this chapter and i was like noooooooooooooooooooo! cause there wasn't another chapter, pleas please PLEASE update soon!
Date: 06/26/10 12:34 pm Title: Don't Take Me For Granted
I feel bad for Tom, but I feel bad for both of them, I guess. I understand how Tom could have felt like Bill's initial call was a scam attempt, and I'm tempted to say that Bill, after hearing Tom's explanation, should understand too. However - Bill is only 18, and being rejected by his first call to Tom was heartbreaking and humiliating for him, and that's a lot to deal with at age 18. Tom, for his part, is not that much older, and has already dealt with a lot of disappointment around this issue. I hope they both forgive each other soon.
Date: 06/26/10 12:02 pm Title: Don't Take Me For Granted
I sorta feel bad for Tom. But I kinda understand were Bill's coming from. I mean, Tom pretty much broke the poor boys heart.. And Bill is really angery, it's like um if a dad came to see their kids after 7 years with no contact exept this is two brothers...
Date: 06/26/10 11:50 am Title: Don't Take Me For Granted
OMG I feal bad for both of them can't wait :D
Date: 06/26/10 11:33 am Title: Don't Take Me For Granted
Now, how are you going to retaliate?”
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Hey darling, just read a very exciting chap from you. I was kind of anxious for the meeting and it was very well done.
Just one tiny note. If Andreas was talking about Tom reaching out as a good thing, then 'retaliate' isn't the most suitable word, because that word has negative conotations. If Andreas is asking Bill how he's going to return a positive gesture then then more appropriate, positive word to use there would be 'reciprocate'. Just an observation.
So, I'm anxious to see Bill reciprocate and work thingies out with Tomtom. *hugs
Author's Response: Ahh! That's the word I was looking for! :D *big hugs* Thank you sooo much, I'm going to edit that now! x3
Date: 06/26/10 11:21 am Title: Don't Take Me For Granted
me me me I feel bad for Tom. When Bil argues he doesn't leave much room for Tom to get a word in XD
Author's Response: Ahaha very true. Bill keep cutting him off! x3
Date: 06/26/10 02:32 am Title: Suddenly Everything Has Changed
Ohhhhhhhhh.
O__O
Whats goonna happen??
*looks at screen wishing the next chapter to apear in thin air*
Date: 06/25/10 01:59 am Title: Suddenly Everything Has Changed
AHHHH more please!! such a HUGE cliffhanger!!!
Date: 06/24/10 07:56 pm Title: Suddenly Everything Has Changed
hmm
i wonder what made Tom change his mind
Date: 06/24/10 06:56 pm Title: Suddenly Everything Has Changed
DUN DUN DUN = no no no, don't leave us hangin'!!!
Date: 06/24/10 03:11 pm Title: Suddenly Everything Has Changed
FIIIIIIIIIIGGGHHTTT! ;)
Can't wait for more! =)
Date: 06/24/10 02:50 pm Title: Suddenly Everything Has Changed
FIGHT FIGHT FIGHT!!
(:
Date: 06/24/10 02:46 pm Title: Suddenly Everything Has Changed
ahhhhhh!!!! *the girliest squeal youve ever heard* yesyesyes!!!!! i love this chappie!!!! and like you said DUN DUN DUN!!! oh my gosh i cannot wait untill the next chappie!!!!! i wanna see how this..."lovely brotherly confrontation" goes!!!
Date: 06/24/10 01:05 pm Title: Crying Won't Help You
That was super harsh but I can understand Tom's pov :/
But still harsh XD