Date: 09/07/10 12:53 pm Title: Chapter 14
Omg ugh *tears* great chapter.....UNTIL HE PHONE CALL WAS CUT OFF lol up-date soooonnnn!!!
Author's Response: HAHA Sorry, I cut the phone call off. Don't worry there will be more of that in the next one =]
Date: 09/07/10 10:33 am Title: Chapter 14
OMG cliffhanger!
but it's okay. it's tom on the other side, hee :D you better update fast woman! :D
Author's Response: hehe, yes it's a good thing Tom's on the other side. I'll do my best to update as soon as I can =D
Date: 09/06/10 01:20 pm Title: Chapter 14
Ahh, cliffhanger!
LOVED this tho, can't wait for more!
XD
Author's Response: Sorry =/ I had to do it!rnrn
I will post as soon as possible =] So glad you liked it!
Date: 09/06/10 11:28 am Title: Chapter 14
damn, she better tell him how she feels. it would be horrible if he says he already found someone else
Author's Response: You'll just have to wait and see. I don't think Tom would have found someone else...remember he is Tom and doesn't do relationships ;]
Date: 09/06/10 08:38 am Title: Chapter 14
Ahhhhh @ cliffhanger, lol. This was a beautiful chapter, she has matured a great deal and is finally facing things. So happy Tom finally called.
Author's Response: Sorry, I had to do it. I will get the next chapter up ASAP =] rnrn
Ariana has come a long way with dealing with things. I think she still has a ways to go, but her going to see her brother's memorial was a HUGE step.
Date: 09/06/10 03:12 am Title: Chapter 14
*crrys* this is a sad but good chapter <3
Author's Response: =[ I know... I'm sorry if I made you cry. I'm glad you liked it though.
Date: 09/05/10 02:35 am Title: Chapter 13
They have to leave? :(
Oh well, they'll see each other again, I just know it. I'm psychic like that. ;)
Ariana's letter made me wish I'd get a letter. Like, a legit letter from a friend or something.
But yeah, I think Ariana's stupid for letting Tom go lol. I mean, a) he's Tom, b) he's adorable and sweet and can play the guitar, and c) he's Tom. And she's letting him GO? She's crazy.
Author's Response: Of course they have to leave =/ They have to go home to their own lives...unfortunately. rnrn
Yeah, I know...Ariana is stupid in a way, but she has her reasons. I have a plan and things we hopefully go according to that plan in the end ;] rnrn
Be patient...I hope you will like what happens =D
Date: 09/05/10 02:16 am Title: Chapter 12
FINALLY. Geeze, woman. I've been waiting for that since practically chapter one lol.
Author's Response: LOL Since chapter one!?! I didn't want to rush things haha rnrn
I hope you're happy now =D I've had this in my head ever since I've started this story. It's nice to finally get it out and written =D
Date: 09/05/10 01:29 am Title: Chapter 11
Toooom. Why are you being such an idiot? I do not approve of this behaviour. (But seriously, why? It just kind of came out of nowhere.)
It's sooooooo obvious they like each other, I wish they'd do something about it lol.
Author's Response: Cause he's jealous maybe? Idk....rnrn
And yes, you are right it did come out of nowhere =/ He's being a complete ass
Date: 08/31/10 01:34 pm Title: Chapter 13
Still not happy with her decisions, but glad she wrote Tom a letter telling him how she feels.
LOVED this, can't wait for more!
XD
Author's Response: I know =/ I have a plan...don't worry! =Drnrn
Date: 08/30/10 01:56 pm Title: Chapter 13
NO WAYY!!! u can't do that ! that was such a emotional chap, but really good :D love ur story, update soon =)
Author's Response: I'm sorry!!!! I know...I'm awful for leaving it like that but I had to do it =/ I will update as soon as I can...I promise =] I'm glad you are enjoying and I hope to hear from you again!
Date: 08/30/10 01:21 pm Title: Chapter 13
need. more. updates. T____T
Author's Response: =] I am trying my best hun. Soon! I promise =D
Date: 08/29/10 05:41 pm Title: Chapter 13
I feel so sad for Tom ): poured his heart and I also feel sad for Ari too. I really do hope they see each other again they belong together. I love your story and writing its awesome. Keep up the great writing and update soon. :D
Author's Response: I feel bad for Tom too =/ rnrn
I have everything planned out, I just have to write it all out. I hope to get the next chapter up soon. Thanks for the wonderful review =D
Date: 08/29/10 04:01 pm Title: Chapter 13
love it !!!!!!!!! =D
Author's Response: Thanks!! =D
Date: 08/26/10 07:24 pm Title: Chapter 12
I just finished reading the whole story, and I think it's awesome! I loved things between the two weren't going too fast, and this last chapter was amazing, they finally kissed !
I like your Tom character, he seems to be so caring and sweet :))
Thanks for coming up with such an awesome story, can't wait for an update, already wondering what's going to happen once they leave Barbados. Hope, things go okay!:))
Author's Response: Thank you for the wonderful review! It makes me so happy when I read reviews like yours. rnrn
I had really high hopes for this story when I started it and I think it's coming together like I had planned. I am really happy you are enjoying it =] rnrn
I have the next chapter already started and will try and get it up as soon as possible. Thank you for the review and I hope to hear from you again =]
Date: 08/25/10 02:11 pm Title: Chapter 12
THEY KISSED! i loved this chapter!
Author's Response: =D That's what I like to hear! I love that you loved it!!! =DD
Date: 08/25/10 11:37 am Title: Chapter 12
Me want more. :( haha
Author's Response: I sorry =/ I will post the next one soon...very soon =D
Date: 08/25/10 11:04 am Title: Chapter 12
It's about time! LolZ.
I'm so glad they finally kissed! XD
LOVED this, can't wait for more!
Author's Response: I know! HAHA I have been putting it off for so damn long! Hopefully you wont have to wait for too much longer. I already have the next chapter started =D
Date: 08/25/10 11:02 am Title: Chapter 12
Congratulations, I'm a hundred years old. ;)
(yay for proposal references!! XD)
But I am SO FUCKING HAPPY they finally kissed. And in the rain, too!! I don't think it could get any more perfect. :):):)
Author's Response: hehe, Idk but I don't get the proposal reference (Maybe it's my age LOL)rnrn
I'm so happy you're happy they kissed! It's about time, right?!? I don't think it could get anymore perfect either! =D
Date: 08/24/10 11:28 pm Title: Chapter 11
Yay for Gustav! I'm so glad Raya likes him!
WTF was Tom's deal?! Ugh.
Can't wait for more!
XD
Author's Response: Let's just hope Gustav likes Raya back hehernrn
Tom's being Tom =/ I should have the next chapter up soon, so you wont have to wait too long =D