Date: 09/24/10 01:35 pm Title: Chapter 12
The kissing scene was totally romantic *daydreams* I love it ^^
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it =] I had that scene in my head from the very beginning...ever since I started this story I knew that was going to happen =D I couldn't wait to get to this point and finally have them kiss!! =D
Date: 09/24/10 12:08 am Title: Epilogue
Oh wow! What a great ending to an even greater storyline! :D I loved it and it warmed my heart b/c I have a sister whose a year younger than me but we're pratically twins. We even have pictures of us with matching outfits and tutus :D Reading this story made me thing of all the good times and bad times I've had and how grateful that I have someone as special as her. Corny I know but your story made me feel that way which isn't a bad thing. Thank you for this and I can't wait until your next piece!
Author's Response: Awe, thank you so much =] It means so much to me that you found this story so great =] Really it makes me feel so...so happy! HAHArnrn
I completely understand how you feel about the whole sister thing. I have a younger sister as well and although we didn't get along all that much when we were younger, I couldn't imagine my life without her now. She is pretty much my best friend. I love her to pieces! rnrn
Thank you for reading and thank you for all your wonderful reviews!
Date: 09/23/10 06:38 pm Title: Chapter 5
I like the talk ^^ As I like Tom being caring and attentive, and not so much a jerk XD *giggles* But, I love him anyway ;)
Author's Response: Exactly how I feel! =] hehe rnrnrn
Of course, I'm pretty sure he isn't really a jerk. I think he probably is caring and attentive in real life. He just has to find the right person to show that side to =]
Date: 09/23/10 12:33 pm Title: Epilogue
Zomg, I got goosebumps reading the ending!
Tom makes me smile a LOT. I love it when he's sensitive.
I'm sad this story is over, but I LOVED the ending!
XD
Author's Response: =D He makes me smile a lot too! rnrn
This was a hard chapter to write. I didn't know where to go with it. I thought I should do something different and not focus so much on Tom and Ariana and more on Ariana and Michael. I am really glad you enjoyed it =] I really enjoyed writing it. Thank you for reading =D
Date: 09/23/10 08:42 am Title: Epilogue
omg that was so sweet of them!
i teared upp ahhh :')
great story, i loved it
Author's Response: I wasn't exactly how to end it, but I think it ended perfectly. rnrn
I'm glad you enjoyed it...thank you =]
Date: 09/23/10 01:22 am Title: Epilogue
this made me cry..it was so sweet..its sad its over but thank you for writiting this :)
Author's Response: You are very welcome. Thank YOU for reading it! =D
Date: 09/22/10 09:51 pm Title: Epilogue
Awe! Was such a sweet and tear jerking ending of a chapter I absolutely loved it!!!! You are such an amazing writer keep it up!!! :D
Author's Response: Thank you so much hun! It was hard to write, but I knew I had to end it eventually. I'm so happy you loved it! Thank you for all the wonderful reviews. You always know how to make me smile with you reviews, so thank you =D
Date: 09/22/10 09:50 pm Title: Epilogue
You did it again, made me cry:) this story was very beautiful, thank you for writing it.
Author's Response: Awe, if it helps, I cried writing it haha =] The last line had me in tears LOL. rnrn
I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Your reviews are seriously awesome! Thank you for reading it! =]
Date: 09/21/10 11:33 pm Title: Chapter 17
Oh Tom...lolZ.
LOVED this!
XD
Author's Response: Thanks! I love that you loved it!!! =-D
Author's Response: Thanks! I love that you loved it!!! =-D
Date: 09/21/10 11:16 pm Title: Chapter 17
*WOOT WOOT* Ariana and Tom together---------FUCK FINALLY YO!!!
I'm so happy that their together they're so cute and perfect for each other it'd sad this is coming to an end ):
Update soon!! And great writing keep it up!!!! :]
Author's Response: I'm glad you're so excited about them being together =] I was a bit nervous that I had things move too fast. I guess not, though =Drnrn
I am going to try and have the last chapter up by the end of the week. I'm sad it's over too hun
Date: 09/21/10 10:19 pm Title: Chapter 17
Yay, I'm so happy they finally let all that out.:)
Author's Response: =D Me too!!
Date: 09/21/10 07:55 pm Title: Chapter 17
Awwww! It's been a very good thing! I'm so happy/sad that it's coming to an end and that they made up! *thumbs up*
Author's Response: =] Thanks hun! I'm so glad you liked it! I feel the same way as you...happy and sad that it's ending =]
Date: 09/20/10 03:00 pm Title: Chapter 16
kdlhfgklhsdgh MAKE HER GO BACK TO TOM. omg. this story always makes me cry D: update soon!
Author's Response: I'm sorry I always make you cry =/ I really don't mean to, I swear! rnrn
Date: 09/20/10 12:01 pm Title: Chapter 16
Ugh, always running away!
Hopefully Tom goes after her!
LOVED this, can't wait for more!
XD
Author's Response: I know =/ I wanna run and hide right now as well. I didn't want to do it, but I had no choice =/ rnrn
I hope to have the next one up soon, but I'm having a bit of trouble's writing it. I apologize if it takes a while.
Date: 09/19/10 09:32 pm Title: Chapter 16
oh my god he was there...more soon i cant wait :)
Author's Response: Yes he was =] I am in the middle of the next chapter and hope to have it up soon =]
Date: 09/19/10 03:18 pm Title: Chapter 16
Love it!! so awesome as usually!!! =D love it hun.. the trasnlation wasnt completly right, but it was okay, im danish i understood it, so everybody should understand it!!:) looking forward to the next im so exited to see whats gonna happen between them!! :) hope everything is fine with you in cananda (not sure if thats where you live but your username is tomscandiangirl) :)
Author's Response: I wasn't sure about the translation since I just used a website to translate it, but I guess you can never be too sure when using the internet LOL! rnrn
I have the next chapter started, I just have to get my thoughts sorted out and then I will have everything typed up. rnrn
Everything is going good here for me in Canada, thank you for asking. I hope everything is fine for you as well =D
Date: 09/19/10 01:28 pm Title: Chapter 16
You updated *woot woot*
It was so good I absolutely loved it!!!!
I sucks that she can't just tell Tom everything and she keeps running away from him but its understandable...I totally can NOT wait to know what'll happen next -eep!!- this a great story sad its coming to an end soon, anyway keep up the amazingly fantastic writing and update soon! :D
Author's Response: I did! rnrn
It really does suck, but of course, she is hurt and scared. I'm glad you understand =] rnrn
From your review, I believe you trust what I am doing here and that is great to see. I will get the next chapter up as soon as I can and hopefully, you will like what happens. =] I hope anyways rnrn
I am very sad it's coming to an end as well. Unfortunately, it has to though.
Date: 09/19/10 01:36 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh wow! I love where this going! ahaha I didn't even get a chance to read chap 15 before you rewrote it. Fabulous darling! xD
Author's Response: It might be a good thing you didn't get to read it. It was horrible! Terrrible even =/ It had to be re-written! =D I'm so glad you are liking the way things are turning out. =D
Date: 09/17/10 01:40 pm Title: Chapter 15
I think Tom WAS in this chapter, in the black car that sped off maybe?
It's ok that you re-wrote, it'll make their meeting more dramatic I think.
LOVED this, can't wait for more!
XD
Author's Response: Maybe he was...maybe he wasn't ;Drnrn
You'll just have to wait to find out. =]rnrn
I will try and get the next chapter up in the next few days!
Date: 09/17/10 09:58 am Title: Chapter 15
I loved it!! It sucks Tom hasn't called her yet :(
But it was still really good. I like this version better even though Tom isn't in it. Update soon and keep up the great writing!! :D
Author's Response: I like this version better too!!! The other one didn't sit right with me for some reason. I think it was probably because it just seemed like Ariana changed her mind too fast. Like she told Tom she couldn't be with him and then when he called she told him she wanted to be with him. It was bothering me too much so I HAD to re-write it. I'm glad you like this version better =D